for Hearts on Fire4/15/2008 c1 BonesaholicJac
pretty apt representation of Rory when she gets mad. I wish she had in the show. Then we wouldn't have weak Lorelai and annoying Christopher for ages until everyone started to wake up.
pretty apt representation of Rory when she gets mad. I wish she had in the show. Then we wouldn't have weak Lorelai and annoying Christopher for ages until everyone started to wake up.
1/28/2008 c1 
34theonlyxception
Wow, I was sucked in Reggie. I wish this was really how the episode could have gone, seriously. I don't like that Lorelai was without Luke for so long in the show, and I'm glad in here that he saw her heartbroken for him, after she thought that it was all her fault. In turn it's very nice that he reconsidered. They deserve eachother. And you have made that happen. Keep it up Reggie!
34theonlyxceptionWow, I was sucked in Reggie. I wish this was really how the episode could have gone, seriously. I don't like that Lorelai was without Luke for so long in the show, and I'm glad in here that he saw her heartbroken for him, after she thought that it was all her fault. In turn it's very nice that he reconsidered. They deserve eachother. And you have made that happen. Keep it up Reggie!
1/26/2008 c1 3ShaolinQueen
Wow! That was really intense... Here we are with another complicated relationship... Why diner boys are so difficult?
Great work!
3ShaolinQueenWow! That was really intense... Here we are with another complicated relationship... Why diner boys are so difficult?
Great work!
1/26/2008 c1 1Curley-Q
Loved this version of their break up and i would have loved to have seen this in the show!
1Curley-QLoved this version of their break up and i would have loved to have seen this in the show!
1/26/2008 c1 13Loridhhp
OMG! That was awesome! I love how you used the dialog from the show then jumped in with your own. Rory going to tell off Luke was just priceless! This was heartbreaking and sweet at the end. What a great oneshot. :D
13LoridhhpOMG! That was awesome! I love how you used the dialog from the show then jumped in with your own. Rory going to tell off Luke was just priceless! This was heartbreaking and sweet at the end. What a great oneshot. :D
1/25/2008 c1 all for it 8374864
i really like ur version of the story. that is the happy ending that we all wished would happen. your detail was so descrptive. i wish they can make extrs fan fic videos. i would love to see this one. keep it up. good job.
i really like ur version of the story. that is the happy ending that we all wished would happen. your detail was so descrptive. i wish they can make extrs fan fic videos. i would love to see this one. keep it up. good job.
1/25/2008 c1 24JavaForever
It's perfection. Seriously; I'm really serious this one time! Every emotion is captured in such a way that practically made me cry. Lorelai of course, while she wasn't featured that much in here, was portrayed so realistically. Rory! Wow, what can I tell you. I've never written for her before, but I swear that this is one of the most accurate character perceptions I've ever read! The screaming match in the diner was just so incredibly emotional. Unbelievable in the best way! I mean, I'm almost speechless (almost) over it! I just can see it happening in my head, it's so great! I love the way Rory defends her mother; so true to her character. Luke's reaction is perfection as well. Of course he would yell no matter who he was yelling at. He is just the kind of person that acts before he thinks and you've shown that so effortlessly. It amazes me! The end scene was the best ending! It was happy and I adore Luke's last line. Hilarious, sweet, emotional, and resolving. I did laugh at the "how to love" part of the very last line though. Remembering closing with those words in a one-shot myself. I'm getting off track here. Anyway, the point is that this was great, great, great (with a dozen exclamation points)! I am stressed no more! *hugs* Reggie, you amaze me! Tell your muse to keep it up!
24JavaForeverIt's perfection. Seriously; I'm really serious this one time! Every emotion is captured in such a way that practically made me cry. Lorelai of course, while she wasn't featured that much in here, was portrayed so realistically. Rory! Wow, what can I tell you. I've never written for her before, but I swear that this is one of the most accurate character perceptions I've ever read! The screaming match in the diner was just so incredibly emotional. Unbelievable in the best way! I mean, I'm almost speechless (almost) over it! I just can see it happening in my head, it's so great! I love the way Rory defends her mother; so true to her character. Luke's reaction is perfection as well. Of course he would yell no matter who he was yelling at. He is just the kind of person that acts before he thinks and you've shown that so effortlessly. It amazes me! The end scene was the best ending! It was happy and I adore Luke's last line. Hilarious, sweet, emotional, and resolving. I did laugh at the "how to love" part of the very last line though. Remembering closing with those words in a one-shot myself. I'm getting off track here. Anyway, the point is that this was great, great, great (with a dozen exclamation points)! I am stressed no more! *hugs* Reggie, you amaze me! Tell your muse to keep it up!
1/25/2008 c1 68DiehardJavaJunkie14
I loved this Reggie! Rory stood up for Lorelai in a way that we didn't see, ever! And I adored the end result. I loved how things went down, how you set everything up and we got the moment we'd been waiting for at the end. Perfect times infinity.
68DiehardJavaJunkie14I loved this Reggie! Rory stood up for Lorelai in a way that we didn't see, ever! And I adored the end result. I loved how things went down, how you set everything up and we got the moment we'd been waiting for at the end. Perfect times infinity.
1/25/2008 c1 34gilmorefanforever
Reggie! This was so good! I've always wondered about this sort of thing, every time I watched "Say Something", so I'm incredibly happy with it for that reason alone. But then there's the great writing, the perfect characterization, the fact that even with all the fighting, it still turned out to be sort of a father/daughter fic... *trails off because she's tired of typing, and this could go on for a while* Anyway, absolutely amazing. *favorites*
34gilmorefanforeverReggie! This was so good! I've always wondered about this sort of thing, every time I watched "Say Something", so I'm incredibly happy with it for that reason alone. But then there's the great writing, the perfect characterization, the fact that even with all the fighting, it still turned out to be sort of a father/daughter fic... *trails off because she's tired of typing, and this could go on for a while* Anyway, absolutely amazing. *favorites*