for Rusted Wire1/30/2008 c1 
34theonlyxception
I absolutely loved the interaction between Luke and Lorelai at the beginning when she was batting her eyelashes at him, and how he knew what she wanted, well especially he was standing right there when the conversation between Lorelai and her mother was happening.
But my favorite part which I can absolutely picture is when they're all standing at the door having a conversation and Lorelai's totally trying to stall, Luke's not sure about what to think and Rory just wants her to ring the doorbell.
Amazing job Lola.
34theonlyxceptionI absolutely loved the interaction between Luke and Lorelai at the beginning when she was batting her eyelashes at him, and how he knew what she wanted, well especially he was standing right there when the conversation between Lorelai and her mother was happening.
But my favorite part which I can absolutely picture is when they're all standing at the door having a conversation and Lorelai's totally trying to stall, Luke's not sure about what to think and Rory just wants her to ring the doorbell.
Amazing job Lola.
1/27/2008 c1 2midwoodbklyn
I don't really get the name of this one. I really liked this, and you alluding to the fact that maybe lorelai is pregnant. obviously married to luke. I kinda wish we could have seen this for real, stupid rosenthal and asp too. you can probably tell I'm still a little pissed off about the way my show ended. anyway great story. I love your work. :)
2midwoodbklynI don't really get the name of this one. I really liked this, and you alluding to the fact that maybe lorelai is pregnant. obviously married to luke. I kinda wish we could have seen this for real, stupid rosenthal and asp too. you can probably tell I'm still a little pissed off about the way my show ended. anyway great story. I love your work. :)
1/26/2008 c1 MaryM47
It's so amazing how you can paint such a lovely picture with just a few perfect strokes of language. Nicely done, as always.
It's so amazing how you can paint such a lovely picture with just a few perfect strokes of language. Nicely done, as always.
1/26/2008 c1 34gilmorefanforever
Lola, you continue to amaze me! I was very pleasantly surprised to see a new story from you- which of course translates into, "I opened up my email, saw the story alert, went 'Oh my GOD, YES!' and started doing the lying-in-bed equivalent of Reggie's chair dance"- and the story itself kept a smile on face. A very big one, actually. Very in character, and of course, as your last lines always seem to, the final line in this made me want to jump up and down. Very, very awesome.
34gilmorefanforeverLola, you continue to amaze me! I was very pleasantly surprised to see a new story from you- which of course translates into, "I opened up my email, saw the story alert, went 'Oh my GOD, YES!' and started doing the lying-in-bed equivalent of Reggie's chair dance"- and the story itself kept a smile on face. A very big one, actually. Very in character, and of course, as your last lines always seem to, the final line in this made me want to jump up and down. Very, very awesome.
1/26/2008 c1 68DiehardJavaJunkie14
Aw! Absolutely perfect. The beginning was hysterical, and the Lorelai and Emily interaction was perfectly in character. I could hear them talking. Amazing. I also loved the middle, when Lorelai and Rory reunited. Also amazing. Wow, and obviously I LOVED the end. Cliche for me to say I loved the beginning, middle, and end, but it rarely happens. So kudos for making me happy. Amazing prompt response, Lola. You're amazing. Love you, thanks for a superb fic!
68DiehardJavaJunkie14Aw! Absolutely perfect. The beginning was hysterical, and the Lorelai and Emily interaction was perfectly in character. I could hear them talking. Amazing. I also loved the middle, when Lorelai and Rory reunited. Also amazing. Wow, and obviously I LOVED the end. Cliche for me to say I loved the beginning, middle, and end, but it rarely happens. So kudos for making me happy. Amazing prompt response, Lola. You're amazing. Love you, thanks for a superb fic!
1/26/2008 c1 1Disneygrl2
That was beautiful! I loved it! I just love the way you write! The Gilmores definitely have grown closer in the past 8 years (well 7 since this is in the future) and I love it. Lorelai actually enjoys the dinners now and Rory is super close with them and its just so happy! I loved this story so much! AWESOME JOB!
1Disneygrl2That was beautiful! I loved it! I just love the way you write! The Gilmores definitely have grown closer in the past 8 years (well 7 since this is in the future) and I love it. Lorelai actually enjoys the dinners now and Rory is super close with them and its just so happy! I loved this story so much! AWESOME JOB!