for The Monster Man2/21/2008 c1 
17marinawings
fascinating so far! i noticed one little mistake "my I." but other than that, great work! i look forward to reading your actual story.
17marinawingsfascinating so far! i noticed one little mistake "my I." but other than that, great work! i look forward to reading your actual story.
2/9/2008 c1 58My one true love
Well you have me interested...and quite possibly hooked. Can't wait to read the story!
58My one true loveWell you have me interested...and quite possibly hooked. Can't wait to read the story!