for Our Family1/29/2012 c4
1Dreams Of Naughtiness
fab fic from start to finish! the Jen flashback was an extra treat at the end. thanks for the fic x
1Dreams Of Naughtinessfab fic from start to finish! the Jen flashback was an extra treat at the end. thanks for the fic x
1/29/2012 c2 Dreams Of Naughtiness
aww absolutely loving this so far. a fab insight into Abby and Gibbs relationship. sweet ending with Abby wearing Gibb's marine shirt, i bet that made her feel a little safer :)
aww absolutely loving this so far. a fab insight into Abby and Gibbs relationship. sweet ending with Abby wearing Gibb's marine shirt, i bet that made her feel a little safer :)
10/16/2011 c4
1PixieGirl94
I loved the family aspect of the story and how sweet Gibbs is when it comes to his family.
1PixieGirl94I loved the family aspect of the story and how sweet Gibbs is when it comes to his family.
5/11/2011 c4 Guest
You're a talented and clever writer. I was caught off guard when I started reading and it was in the first person. It was very interesting, and reflecting a little, I can honestly say that it is very believable to think that the characters might actually think that way. You took on the roles very well, and the imagery was good too. I fell inside the story, almost not even realizing I was reading.
Good Job.
I hope you never stop writing.
~Fynne~
You're a talented and clever writer. I was caught off guard when I started reading and it was in the first person. It was very interesting, and reflecting a little, I can honestly say that it is very believable to think that the characters might actually think that way. You took on the roles very well, and the imagery was good too. I fell inside the story, almost not even realizing I was reading.
Good Job.
I hope you never stop writing.
~Fynne~
12/30/2010 c4
4Krysy Winters
Awww, that was so emotional. Absolutely loved your ideas of the thoughts and feelings behind the episode. :)
4Krysy WintersAwww, that was so emotional. Absolutely loved your ideas of the thoughts and feelings behind the episode. :)
7/22/2009 c4
2MoonlightWishing
This was so good! I love the way you write - I could almost hear the characters speaking the words!
2MoonlightWishingThis was so good! I love the way you write - I could almost hear the characters speaking the words!
7/22/2009 c4
38Dolphin64575
very good! you follow the original plotline fantastically, and the added scenes are very sweet and familial(sp?)! love it!
38Dolphin64575very good! you follow the original plotline fantastically, and the added scenes are very sweet and familial(sp?)! love it!
6/9/2009 c4 Allison
actually,in the last one,you totally forgot to add what dinozzo's reaction to getting a spanking from gibbs would be like.
i imagine something along the lines of 'it never happened' or 'we never talk of this,even in joke,and especially in front of other people'.or 'take that back!'
remember frame up?
'people like me'-tony
actually,in the last one,you totally forgot to add what dinozzo's reaction to getting a spanking from gibbs would be like.
i imagine something along the lines of 'it never happened' or 'we never talk of this,even in joke,and especially in front of other people'.or 'take that back!'
remember frame up?
'people like me'-tony
