for Love Hurts4/30 c9 Guest
oh, God.. poor Olivia.. and what did Malcolm do to Viola? i'd definitely kill him if i were in your story..
dearest author, continue pleaseeeeee...
oh, God.. poor Olivia.. and what did Malcolm do to Viola? i'd definitely kill him if i were in your story..
dearest author, continue pleaseeeeee...
2/19 c9 J.J Harding
Well your Olivia from the beginning has a trend of first freaking out and having the big emotional bomb go off then dealing with the situation. You can always do this the same. Here she is panicicking and asking questions in her head any normal person would. Try seeing how she can get herself out of the situation, tricking Malcolm, wiggling free of the ropes. You have a lot of options but no one knows what suits your story better than you. I really like how you expressed the huge amount of emotions that the whole situation would have caused, it's really well done. I love how the characters are shaping up and how you've made it more Olivia's journey then Viola's. I adore Maria!
Well your Olivia from the beginning has a trend of first freaking out and having the big emotional bomb go off then dealing with the situation. You can always do this the same. Here she is panicicking and asking questions in her head any normal person would. Try seeing how she can get herself out of the situation, tricking Malcolm, wiggling free of the ropes. You have a lot of options but no one knows what suits your story better than you. I really like how you expressed the huge amount of emotions that the whole situation would have caused, it's really well done. I love how the characters are shaping up and how you've made it more Olivia's journey then Viola's. I adore Maria!
2/12 c9 Stocktakewriting
That can't be it... Are u just gunna leave us ganging like that? That just can't be :(
That can't be it... Are u just gunna leave us ganging like that? That just can't be :(
1/5 c9 Zweley
Pleaseeeee update soon! I wonder what will happen, I WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT, for real...
Pleaseeeee update soon! I wonder what will happen, I WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT, for real...
4/4/2012 c9 
1Alexz6
Hey...so I realize that the last time you updated was in 08...but I was just reminiscing over this fantastic movie that I had to go and look up some fanfic...I came across this and was so hooked!
I'm horrified at this last chapter especially after Olivia was doing so much better after her ordeal and the date with Viola! And now we found out that Viola had to be BLACKMAILED to be kept away? If there is ANY chance of you seeing this, I really want you to know how much I am hoping you'll miraculously decide to post another chapter and continue on! Please?
1Alexz6Hey...so I realize that the last time you updated was in 08...but I was just reminiscing over this fantastic movie that I had to go and look up some fanfic...I came across this and was so hooked!
I'm horrified at this last chapter especially after Olivia was doing so much better after her ordeal and the date with Viola! And now we found out that Viola had to be BLACKMAILED to be kept away? If there is ANY chance of you seeing this, I really want you to know how much I am hoping you'll miraculously decide to post another chapter and continue on! Please?
9/12/2011 c9 Anonymous
SERIOUSLY! You left it THERE! This NEEDS to be continued/concluded. It's such a good story with a highly original take on things. PLEASE pick this back up?
SERIOUSLY! You left it THERE! This NEEDS to be continued/concluded. It's such a good story with a highly original take on things. PLEASE pick this back up?
1/31/2011 c9 Guest
Seeing as how this story hasn't been updated in so long I'm trying not to give up my hopes because I REALLY want to see what happens!
Seeing as how this story hasn't been updated in so long I'm trying not to give up my hopes because I REALLY want to see what happens!
9/8/2010 c9 17pokeyspot
nooooooo I know you haven't updated this in ages but I've just found it. I guess you may have stopped writing fanfiction but in the off-chance that you're still reading these e-mail alerts, I just want you to know that it is a good story. A story that I wish would continue.
Good luck in your life!
17pokeyspotnooooooo I know you haven't updated this in ages but I've just found it. I guess you may have stopped writing fanfiction but in the off-chance that you're still reading these e-mail alerts, I just want you to know that it is a good story. A story that I wish would continue.
Good luck in your life!
2/18/2010 c2 Mason
I laughed a lot while reading this chapter and I really want to thank you for that, so Thanks! :-)
I laughed a lot while reading this chapter and I really want to thank you for that, so Thanks! :-)
1/12/2010 c9 1REZ18
Hi,i absolutely love viola/olivia pairing. I always wanted them together when i watched STM.
So far i like your story. I know this sound cliche,but you could make it viola's pov and make the abduction longer so olivia wont attend bio lesson,and vi would realised! And get all worried. And be the saviour! At the same time,she develops feelings olivia!
But this is just a suggestion. It's your story do the way you want it! (: take care
1REZ18Hi,i absolutely love viola/olivia pairing. I always wanted them together when i watched STM.
So far i like your story. I know this sound cliche,but you could make it viola's pov and make the abduction longer so olivia wont attend bio lesson,and vi would realised! And get all worried. And be the saviour! At the same time,she develops feelings olivia!
But this is just a suggestion. It's your story do the way you want it! (: take care
11/7/2009 c9 jaimee
you should continue it!it is so cool!
i find it romantic!
i was like "oh my gosh!i love it!"
you should continue it!it is so cool!
i find it romantic!
i was like "oh my gosh!i love it!"
5/8/2009 c9 ajechi
this is a really really really really (oh...did i say really) interesting fic ...
is there a chance that you can continue? n_n
pretty please
this is a really really really really (oh...did i say really) interesting fic ...
is there a chance that you can continue? n_n
pretty please