for Love Hurts2/17/2008 c1 cyric1980
You should continue this story. I always thought that when I saw this movie that Olivia's reaction didn't fit. Now this is probably the extreme on the other side of it but thats what makes it good and to me more accurate. Also your writing really makes me feel that pain. So PMS!
You should continue this story. I always thought that when I saw this movie that Olivia's reaction didn't fit. Now this is probably the extreme on the other side of it but thats what makes it good and to me more accurate. Also your writing really makes me feel that pain. So PMS!
2/17/2008 c2 
19Unknown lazy ass
I love your story! There I said it, and I can't help but wonder, where have you been all these years? I feel the flare behind your words and the tension. Another thing I absolutely fell head-over-heels in love with was the realism. Surprisingly this is the first story I've read where Olivia spazzes and totally freaks out with Viola‘s coming out. And personally I think that's the way she should've reacted. Unfortunately the movie softened Olivia's incomings to almost non-existent. Another detail was, revenge, yes that is the major emotion-reflex that we have as humans if we are hurt. So that was lovely to read, other than the little over-drama with Olivia's health condition, I thought this was perfect. Not to mention I totally digged her rage towards Viola, her words, it was as if I could hear them. Beautiful! I hope you up-date real soon!
19Unknown lazy assI love your story! There I said it, and I can't help but wonder, where have you been all these years? I feel the flare behind your words and the tension. Another thing I absolutely fell head-over-heels in love with was the realism. Surprisingly this is the first story I've read where Olivia spazzes and totally freaks out with Viola‘s coming out. And personally I think that's the way she should've reacted. Unfortunately the movie softened Olivia's incomings to almost non-existent. Another detail was, revenge, yes that is the major emotion-reflex that we have as humans if we are hurt. So that was lovely to read, other than the little over-drama with Olivia's health condition, I thought this was perfect. Not to mention I totally digged her rage towards Viola, her words, it was as if I could hear them. Beautiful! I hope you up-date real soon!
2/17/2008 c2 12quirky21
Reviews are addictive, you sit in anticipation of the next one... I love the first person perspective, it makes all the screaming and messed up mind so real. Cannot wait for more!
12quirky21Reviews are addictive, you sit in anticipation of the next one... I love the first person perspective, it makes all the screaming and messed up mind so real. Cannot wait for more!
2/16/2008 c1 27Cora Summers
You so need to continue this. I hate thinking that something bad will happen to one of the lovely leading ladies. Nice job on the first part.
27Cora SummersYou so need to continue this. I hate thinking that something bad will happen to one of the lovely leading ladies. Nice job on the first part.