for The Sand Man1/16/2010 c11 deltainfinity
MEANIE! Stopping that was horribly wrong...
MEAN FACE!
I love Bimbo Temperence. She's g r e a t!
~Maeghan
MEANIE! Stopping that was horribly wrong...
MEAN FACE!
I love Bimbo Temperence. She's g r e a t!
~Maeghan
11/28/2009 c23 
14Mardelzor
aww! that ending was really sweet:) i luv Brennan and Booth and this whole story was amazing! especially the dolphin trip and then back w/ the hot scene that first night when zach kept interuppting! luved it! keep up the good work!
14Mardelzoraww! that ending was really sweet:) i luv Brennan and Booth and this whole story was amazing! especially the dolphin trip and then back w/ the hot scene that first night when zach kept interuppting! luved it! keep up the good work!
10/8/2009 c17 ZZ
Haha, loving Zack's reaction to finding out he was drunk:
"OH, MY, GOD."
Haha, loving Zack's reaction to finding out he was drunk:
"OH, MY, GOD."
10/8/2009 c15 ZZ
Wait, what Angel reference?
Wait, what Angel reference?
10/8/2009 c11 ZZ
Even though being a Zack-lover (fangirls, unite!) I couldn't help being frustrated with Zack in this chapter :P
Even though being a Zack-lover (fangirls, unite!) I couldn't help being frustrated with Zack in this chapter :P
10/8/2009 c6 M
I loved Zack's totally unnecessary "I'm in pain" So cute, and just how he would react to getting sunburned!
I loved Zack's totally unnecessary "I'm in pain" So cute, and just how he would react to getting sunburned!
1/31/2009 c12 Kate
I know this is an older story but... um, cliffs? This is set in the Florida Keys, right? The highest point in the Keys is only 18 feet above sea level. Actually, I think the average elevation is several feet *below* sea level. There's no hang-gliding. We have para-sailing though!
Other than that, I'm really enjoying the story.
I know this is an older story but... um, cliffs? This is set in the Florida Keys, right? The highest point in the Keys is only 18 feet above sea level. Actually, I think the average elevation is several feet *below* sea level. There's no hang-gliding. We have para-sailing though!
Other than that, I'm really enjoying the story.
12/14/2008 c23 4ZedPM
Booth rolling off the bed! Angela punching Hodgins! Old people car! Booth cheating! Wrong moment to take a drink! Hodgins's reaction to the 'romantic vacation' thing (Oh. /Oh/.!)- I can so imagine him doing that in the show!
I think I may just have died laughing while reading this fanfiction, especially the last couple of chapters, so here is a message from my ghost.
You kept them all in character, most of all Zach, with his literal-logical-corrections thing going on, (Brennan can be excused for not acting like her normal self - most of the time Booth/Brennan stuff gets really OOC, but I think you managed it with the 'Bimbo Temperance' and the 'Bold Temperance' stepping in when they were needed! Wonderful handling of their whole realtionship, even the little moments of driving/gun bickering!), loved the drunken thing (but I so hoped they'd remember Booth saying he loved them!) The dolphin bit was really sweet and giving-Zach-a-heart-attack sounds exactly like the kind of thing Hodgins would do! - but i can't decide whether it was mean or not... :)
So, all in all, a fantastic fanfiction. -grins. again.- XD
4ZedPMBooth rolling off the bed! Angela punching Hodgins! Old people car! Booth cheating! Wrong moment to take a drink! Hodgins's reaction to the 'romantic vacation' thing (Oh. /Oh/.!)- I can so imagine him doing that in the show!
I think I may just have died laughing while reading this fanfiction, especially the last couple of chapters, so here is a message from my ghost.
You kept them all in character, most of all Zach, with his literal-logical-corrections thing going on, (Brennan can be excused for not acting like her normal self - most of the time Booth/Brennan stuff gets really OOC, but I think you managed it with the 'Bimbo Temperance' and the 'Bold Temperance' stepping in when they were needed! Wonderful handling of their whole realtionship, even the little moments of driving/gun bickering!), loved the drunken thing (but I so hoped they'd remember Booth saying he loved them!) The dolphin bit was really sweet and giving-Zach-a-heart-attack sounds exactly like the kind of thing Hodgins would do! - but i can't decide whether it was mean or not... :)
So, all in all, a fantastic fanfiction. -grins. again.- XD
12/14/2008 c22 ZedPM
I'm sorry, there were so many good quotes in this chapter I just have to list them! -
“I’ve seen a lot of movies. Whenever a new presence enters the scene, someone gets shot.” -true. very true. -nods approvingly at hodgins-
“Actually, there was only one gunshot, so only one of them could be bleeding or dying,” Zach pointed out. -Oh Zach, what can I say? You crack me up.
“Oh, Dr. Brennan, you are awesome!” -grins-
“I should go down there and smack him around for hurting you guys, now that I know he’s not dangerous anymore,” -like I said, never ** off an artist. they get scary. lol.
“If I may ask, Agent Booth; I noticed that you didn’t share an open mouthed kiss with Dr. Brennan. Is this not an appropriate situation for that kind of kiss?”
“You’re killing me Zach.”
“No, I’m not. I’m merely asking a question.”
“Well don’t." -again, no other word than brilliant. :P
“I feel like I haven’t slept in a week.” - from what I've read you've not done much actual 'sleeping' at all!
sorry about that, those quotes were just amazing. had to be done. -grins again-
I'm sorry, there were so many good quotes in this chapter I just have to list them! -
“I’ve seen a lot of movies. Whenever a new presence enters the scene, someone gets shot.” -true. very true. -nods approvingly at hodgins-
“Actually, there was only one gunshot, so only one of them could be bleeding or dying,” Zach pointed out. -Oh Zach, what can I say? You crack me up.
“Oh, Dr. Brennan, you are awesome!” -grins-
“I should go down there and smack him around for hurting you guys, now that I know he’s not dangerous anymore,” -like I said, never ** off an artist. they get scary. lol.
“If I may ask, Agent Booth; I noticed that you didn’t share an open mouthed kiss with Dr. Brennan. Is this not an appropriate situation for that kind of kiss?”
“You’re killing me Zach.”
“No, I’m not. I’m merely asking a question.”
“Well don’t." -again, no other word than brilliant. :P
“I feel like I haven’t slept in a week.” - from what I've read you've not done much actual 'sleeping' at all!
sorry about that, those quotes were just amazing. had to be done. -grins again-
12/14/2008 c21 ZedPM
omg! but at the same time...lmao! hell hath no fury like an artist scorned!
("I resent that!" - love it, very Hodgins!)
omg! but at the same time...lmao! hell hath no fury like an artist scorned!
("I resent that!" - love it, very Hodgins!)
12/14/2008 c20 ZedPM
haha - Hodgins's idea of shopping - a conquistador sword! brilliant. just brilliant.
haha - Hodgins's idea of shopping - a conquistador sword! brilliant. just brilliant.