for Little Problem10/11/2008 c4
37NewDrWhoFan
Well, that was just plain delightful :)
Loved the Doctor's reaction to finding Rose's room empty ;)
37NewDrWhoFanWell, that was just plain delightful :)
Loved the Doctor's reaction to finding Rose's room empty ;)
10/11/2008 c4
91Gilari
"No wandering off" As if the adult!Rose ever paid attention to that one. I have very little expectations that mini!Rose will either. But the Doctor can always try...
I love how Rose has both of them wound around her little finger. It's so cute. So much for not domestic, eh Doctor?
91Gilari"No wandering off" As if the adult!Rose ever paid attention to that one. I have very little expectations that mini!Rose will either. But the Doctor can always try...
I love how Rose has both of them wound around her little finger. It's so cute. So much for not domestic, eh Doctor?
10/11/2008 c3 Gilari
“I wish you’d stop flirting with my ship.” The Doctor grumbled.
“Jealous?” Jack retorted.
Heh. Best lines ever. Oh Jack... he would flirt with anything.
The image of Rose as a little girl holding the Doctor's and Jack's hands is just too cute! And she's smart, too. I love how scared those two grown men are of Jackie :-)
Excited to read more!
“I wish you’d stop flirting with my ship.” The Doctor grumbled.
“Jealous?” Jack retorted.
Heh. Best lines ever. Oh Jack... he would flirt with anything.
The image of Rose as a little girl holding the Doctor's and Jack's hands is just too cute! And she's smart, too. I love how scared those two grown men are of Jackie :-)
Excited to read more!
10/11/2008 c4
51Ponella
-tries to fly to the keyboard but fails- Aargh, the laws of gravity be a hard nut to crack...
51Ponella-tries to fly to the keyboard but fails- Aargh, the laws of gravity be a hard nut to crack...
10/11/2008 c4
43Kathryn Shadow
Naughty non-updating girl! -pokes-
I'm actually kind of going to miss younger!Rose...
43Kathryn ShadowNaughty non-updating girl! -pokes-
I'm actually kind of going to miss younger!Rose...
10/11/2008 c2
24Laura Harkness
hello. cute premise but you do have some typos.. or grammar issues. for example:
The Doctor nodded, his face draw with worry.
and
The Doctor had the decency to look affronted while Jack guffawed, “Even at this age, she’s got your number, Doc”
still, i'll keep reading! the interaction between jack and ten is quite charming!
24Laura Harknesshello. cute premise but you do have some typos.. or grammar issues. for example:
The Doctor nodded, his face draw with worry.
and
The Doctor had the decency to look affronted while Jack guffawed, “Even at this age, she’s got your number, Doc”
still, i'll keep reading! the interaction between jack and ten is quite charming!
4/16/2008 c3
4Olafur Neal
That was cute! I really liked it! I can't wait for more. That evil scientist dude is really gonna get it.
4Olafur NealThat was cute! I really liked it! I can't wait for more. That evil scientist dude is really gonna get it.
4/12/2008 c3
2gaiafreedom21
How sweet.Yep eight-year old Rose has got these two wrapped around her fingers.
2gaiafreedom21How sweet.Yep eight-year old Rose has got these two wrapped around her fingers.
4/11/2008 c3
28Starlite1
Very very cute *watches teeth fall out on the ground*
Please continue? *looks hopeful*
28Starlite1Very very cute *watches teeth fall out on the ground*
Please continue? *looks hopeful*
