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10/11/2008 c4 37NewDrWhoFan
Well, that was just plain delightful :)

Loved the Doctor's reaction to finding Rose's room empty ;)
10/11/2008 c4 1deadgloves
This is adorable!
10/11/2008 c4 91Gilari
"No wandering off" As if the adult!Rose ever paid attention to that one. I have very little expectations that mini!Rose will either. But the Doctor can always try...

I love how Rose has both of them wound around her little finger. It's so cute. So much for not domestic, eh Doctor?
10/11/2008 c3 Gilari
“I wish you’d stop flirting with my ship.” The Doctor grumbled.

“Jealous?” Jack retorted.

Heh. Best lines ever. Oh Jack... he would flirt with anything.

The image of Rose as a little girl holding the Doctor's and Jack's hands is just too cute! And she's smart, too. I love how scared those two grown men are of Jackie :-)

Excited to read more!
10/11/2008 c4 51Ponella
-tries to fly to the keyboard but fails- Aargh, the laws of gravity be a hard nut to crack...
10/11/2008 c4 43Kathryn Shadow
Naughty non-updating girl! -pokes-

I'm actually kind of going to miss younger!Rose...
10/11/2008 c2 24Laura Harkness
hello. cute premise but you do have some typos.. or grammar issues. for example:

The Doctor nodded, his face draw with worry.

and

The Doctor had the decency to look affronted while Jack guffawed, “Even at this age, she’s got your number, Doc”

still, i'll keep reading! the interaction between jack and ten is quite charming!
9/1/2008 c3 shadow lupus
Awesome story so far! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Shadow Lupus
4/20/2008 c3 1campbellk2
Cool story - hope you update soon!
4/16/2008 c3 4Olafur Neal
That was cute! I really liked it! I can't wait for more. That evil scientist dude is really gonna get it.
4/12/2008 c3 2gaiafreedom21
How sweet.Yep eight-year old Rose has got these two wrapped around her fingers.
4/11/2008 c3 28Starlite1
Very very cute *watches teeth fall out on the ground*

Please continue? *looks hopeful*
4/10/2008 c3 26Kristal
Ooh! Adorable!

Best Lines:

Jack winked roguishly. “I can’t keep secrets from my best girl, now can I?”

“I wish you’d stop flirting with my ship.” The Doctor grumbled.

“Jealous?” Jack retorted.

Oh, I do wish you will continue soon!
4/10/2008 c3 29Saavik13
ah, that is so cute! keep it coming!
4/10/2008 c3 2Sweet Cocoa
Another sweet chapter can't wait to see what happens next :)
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