for The Guyver meets SG14/1/2008 c1 Denonu
Nice start, really like the idea of SG1 and Guyver. Only flaw I seen was needed just a little more detail in a few scenes but I still enjoyed it. I hope you will continue it.
Nice start, really like the idea of SG1 and Guyver. Only flaw I seen was needed just a little more detail in a few scenes but I still enjoyed it. I hope you will continue it.
3/26/2008 c1 Vetus Animus
not bad. the spelling needs work and i wont lie, this is no great work of art. Yet it is perfect in what it looks like it could be. A fanfiction to sit down, read for an afternoon and be throughly satisfied. a popcorn fic if you will. like an action movie, the best kind. I would offer to beta and help clean up the spelling and grammar but my computer acess is limited due to mine being broken. regardless, i hope you keep at it and update this fic.
not bad. the spelling needs work and i wont lie, this is no great work of art. Yet it is perfect in what it looks like it could be. A fanfiction to sit down, read for an afternoon and be throughly satisfied. a popcorn fic if you will. like an action movie, the best kind. I would offer to beta and help clean up the spelling and grammar but my computer acess is limited due to mine being broken. regardless, i hope you keep at it and update this fic.
3/25/2008 c1 piney
great story
keep updating
great story
keep updating
3/15/2008 c1 
3KuroKage1717
Hey, you're not a bad writer at all! I quite enjoyed this! I like the idea, and think you should continue on!
3KuroKage1717Hey, you're not a bad writer at all! I quite enjoyed this! I like the idea, and think you should continue on!