for A Similar Beat7/2/2008 c1 
4DarkHenrych
You know, this is the kind of stuff that just makes me... feel, it's not quite the common stuff here at ffnet, yet it does refresh my neurons from all the drama and stuff. I am particularly attracted to all things Zexion, and I like writing about him, a lot. He's the kind of guy I would identify with. I am quite astonished to find that someone else does actually see into Zexy's mind, the way he REALLY is, he's not the Emo most would think of him, he's actually more of a tactician of sorts, similar to a chess player. I find it quite interesting that you depicted him as a quiet thinker and that you actually gave him a heart to look for, a reason to be sort of feel. I rambled a bit, but I just said what I felt through your fic. I read that you had some poems posted before, can I actually post poems here at ffnet? If so, maybe one day I'll theme one of my poems after Zexion and post it here too. Thanks for makin me remember what a real zexion would thing like. Bye and hope inspiration strikes full force! ^^
4DarkHenrychYou know, this is the kind of stuff that just makes me... feel, it's not quite the common stuff here at ffnet, yet it does refresh my neurons from all the drama and stuff. I am particularly attracted to all things Zexion, and I like writing about him, a lot. He's the kind of guy I would identify with. I am quite astonished to find that someone else does actually see into Zexy's mind, the way he REALLY is, he's not the Emo most would think of him, he's actually more of a tactician of sorts, similar to a chess player. I find it quite interesting that you depicted him as a quiet thinker and that you actually gave him a heart to look for, a reason to be sort of feel. I rambled a bit, but I just said what I felt through your fic. I read that you had some poems posted before, can I actually post poems here at ffnet? If so, maybe one day I'll theme one of my poems after Zexion and post it here too. Thanks for makin me remember what a real zexion would thing like. Bye and hope inspiration strikes full force! ^^
6/9/2008 c1 2Texmaris
I think this was actually prety well written. I couldn't tell that you rushed in the end; I rather liked it. I find it slightly bittersweet... or nostalgic. Either one. But the bottom line is, I liked it and was able to actually imagine it happening.
It's not really suspenseful, but I suppose that out of all the fanfiction genres (other than 'general') suspense fits the story the best.
2TexmarisI think this was actually prety well written. I couldn't tell that you rushed in the end; I rather liked it. I find it slightly bittersweet... or nostalgic. Either one. But the bottom line is, I liked it and was able to actually imagine it happening.
It's not really suspenseful, but I suppose that out of all the fanfiction genres (other than 'general') suspense fits the story the best.