for Hannah MontanaBlue Lantern7/19/2011 c1 Perrin Rynning
Excellent work! You've incorporated two wildly-differing worlds very well, and even met the challenge of giving Miley/Hannah a ring other than the Green... and done a superior job of explaining your choice within the context of the story. Please feel free to keep going, since your setup has definitely hooked me.
Excellent work! You've incorporated two wildly-differing worlds very well, and even met the challenge of giving Miley/Hannah a ring other than the Green... and done a superior job of explaining your choice within the context of the story. Please feel free to keep going, since your setup has definitely hooked me.
11/23/2010 c2 
195emeralddusk
Great story. I wanted to know, you mentioned Hal Jordan trying to take a power for himself. Was that referencing the comic Emerald Twilight? Please PM me about it.
195emeraldduskGreat story. I wanted to know, you mentioned Hal Jordan trying to take a power for himself. Was that referencing the comic Emerald Twilight? Please PM me about it.
7/19/2010 c2 1zeo knight
the story is now on britest day the nine have gathered
i good start for this story of yours
i say keep orange for rico because he never learns any thing
i even like how this story is now but i gotta thin for these characters and the rings but for indego i would say nick
if you include him
1zeo knightthe story is now on britest day the nine have gathered
i good start for this story of yours
i say keep orange for rico because he never learns any thing
i even like how this story is now but i gotta thin for these characters and the rings but for indego i would say nick
if you include him
1/30/2010 c1 4MTGMA
This is really interesting. Are there any deceased Disney characters? Black Lanterns could be a great mix, but I don't think killing is allowed in Disney-type shows, so why not kill some people off in order for them to become black lanterns?
4MTGMAThis is really interesting. Are there any deceased Disney characters? Black Lanterns could be a great mix, but I don't think killing is allowed in Disney-type shows, so why not kill some people off in order for them to become black lanterns?
12/4/2008 c2 1Blue Lantern
Intriguing concept for a story.
Personally not a fan of the celebrities, but the plot itself seems sound. Keep it up.
You can imagine my shock when I went to look up my old story and I was no longer the first google result for .
1Blue LanternIntriguing concept for a story.
Personally not a fan of the celebrities, but the plot itself seems sound. Keep it up.
You can imagine my shock when I went to look up my old story and I was no longer the first google result for .
11/29/2008 c2 agent.bunni
Will Miley and Mikayla have to work together? Or will they end up as enemies, where Mikayla is with that evil power force thingy?
Will Miley and Mikayla have to work together? Or will they end up as enemies, where Mikayla is with that evil power force thingy?
11/1/2008 c1 68Michael Weyer
Not bad, an interesting mix. Just be sure to have Mylika say the Red Lantern oath:
"With blood and rage of crimson red...
Ripped From a corpse so freshly dead...
Together with our hellish hate...
We'll burn you all
That is your fate!"
Not sure what the Blue Lantern oath is but keep up the fun mix.
68Michael WeyerNot bad, an interesting mix. Just be sure to have Mylika say the Red Lantern oath:
"With blood and rage of crimson red...
Ripped From a corpse so freshly dead...
Together with our hellish hate...
We'll burn you all
That is your fate!"
Not sure what the Blue Lantern oath is but keep up the fun mix.
10/24/2008 c2 89Marcus S. Lazarus
Firstly, fair enough as far as my suggestions for the Indigo Corps or Miley joining the Teen Titans goes; I voiced an opinion, you explained why you won't be doing it at the moment, and that's fine with me.
Secondly, nice bit of work so far; the meeting with Ganthet and Sayd worked out very well, even if I might have expected some people- Lily in particular; she always struck me as somewhat excitable- to show more shock at the idea of meeting ALIENS, after the shock of learning that Miley's become a superhero I suppose aliens would just be another one of those things.
On the superhero front, interesting debut for Blue Lantern; the bit with the girl being raped added an extra 'human' moment to the confrontation that it would have otherwise lacked, while also demonstrating just how Blue Lantern differs from the Green Lanterns (It's not that the Green Lanterns WOULDN'T stop the girl shooting the guy like that, it just that they would have done it by appealing to her morality rather than her heart).
And as for the appearance of Major Force at the end there...
Hoo boy... THAT'S not going to be good.
I'm definitely torn between how I want that to go; on the one hand; I can't think of anyone I actually want to have that 'meeting' with the fridge you mentioned here, but at the same time it WOULD reinforce just how dangerous her new role is...
Ah well; guess we'll just have to wait and see, huh?
Keep up the good work!
(P.S. Did you get my PM about the Davros suggestion?)
89Marcus S. LazarusFirstly, fair enough as far as my suggestions for the Indigo Corps or Miley joining the Teen Titans goes; I voiced an opinion, you explained why you won't be doing it at the moment, and that's fine with me.
Secondly, nice bit of work so far; the meeting with Ganthet and Sayd worked out very well, even if I might have expected some people- Lily in particular; she always struck me as somewhat excitable- to show more shock at the idea of meeting ALIENS, after the shock of learning that Miley's become a superhero I suppose aliens would just be another one of those things.
On the superhero front, interesting debut for Blue Lantern; the bit with the girl being raped added an extra 'human' moment to the confrontation that it would have otherwise lacked, while also demonstrating just how Blue Lantern differs from the Green Lanterns (It's not that the Green Lanterns WOULDN'T stop the girl shooting the guy like that, it just that they would have done it by appealing to her morality rather than her heart).
And as for the appearance of Major Force at the end there...
Hoo boy... THAT'S not going to be good.
I'm definitely torn between how I want that to go; on the one hand; I can't think of anyone I actually want to have that 'meeting' with the fridge you mentioned here, but at the same time it WOULD reinforce just how dangerous her new role is...
Ah well; guess we'll just have to wait and see, huh?
Keep up the good work!
(P.S. Did you get my PM about the Davros suggestion?)
10/24/2008 c2 2Secret Identity
So far, I'm loving this story. It's very well written and you seem to have awesome ideas on how to continue.
May I suggest that you give the Star Sapphire ring to whoever you think is the best candidate? There doesn't have to be any romance in this story; there can if you choose, but it really isn't necessary. Whoever gets the Star Sapphire ring does not have to be Miley's love interest.
2Secret IdentitySo far, I'm loving this story. It's very well written and you seem to have awesome ideas on how to continue.
May I suggest that you give the Star Sapphire ring to whoever you think is the best candidate? There doesn't have to be any romance in this story; there can if you choose, but it really isn't necessary. Whoever gets the Star Sapphire ring does not have to be Miley's love interest.
10/10/2008 c1 89Marcus S. Lazarus
Intriguing.
VERY intriguing...
So, we have Miley having been selected as one of the- if not THE- first members of the BLUE Lantern Corps, while Mikayla gets a Red Lantern ring to use against her, while Miley/Hannah's bodyguard is acquainted with John Stewart?
Well, at least Miley should have a good mentor in learning how to USE the ring...
If you're taking votes on who gets the other rings, I agree with your thoughts on giving Rico the Orange ring, while Robby's compassion for his family might make him an interesting candidate for the Indigo Corps, leaving the Violet ring for whoever you decide to make Miley's love interest in this story.
Seem possible (I apologise if it's not much help, but my knowledge of "Hannah Montana" is fairly basic at best, although I DO enjoy the "Green Lantern" series)?
Well, hope you're just suffering a bad case of writer's block where this is concerned; I would DEFINITELY like to see how things go from here!
After all, putting aside the possibility of Miley getting John Stewart as a 'mentor' in using her ring, how would the Teen Titans react to the possibility of having a major singer as a member (Given her age the Titans seem like the most logical 'group' for Miley to join if she decides to go that far)?
89Marcus S. LazarusIntriguing.
VERY intriguing...
So, we have Miley having been selected as one of the- if not THE- first members of the BLUE Lantern Corps, while Mikayla gets a Red Lantern ring to use against her, while Miley/Hannah's bodyguard is acquainted with John Stewart?
Well, at least Miley should have a good mentor in learning how to USE the ring...
If you're taking votes on who gets the other rings, I agree with your thoughts on giving Rico the Orange ring, while Robby's compassion for his family might make him an interesting candidate for the Indigo Corps, leaving the Violet ring for whoever you decide to make Miley's love interest in this story.
Seem possible (I apologise if it's not much help, but my knowledge of "Hannah Montana" is fairly basic at best, although I DO enjoy the "Green Lantern" series)?
Well, hope you're just suffering a bad case of writer's block where this is concerned; I would DEFINITELY like to see how things go from here!
After all, putting aside the possibility of Miley getting John Stewart as a 'mentor' in using her ring, how would the Teen Titans react to the possibility of having a major singer as a member (Given her age the Titans seem like the most logical 'group' for Miley to join if she decides to go that far)?