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12/27/2009 c1 Witch Shade
Oh so sweet. Very cute. This is one of my fav pairings besides, Setsuna and Usagi. Not too much fluff and not little fluff, just the right amount. The conversation between Usagi and Yuriko very sweet. Adorableness you got here.
5/22/2009 c1 TruePrime
This was extremely sweet, alittle sad that Haruka had died but still sweet, I really love it when people have same sex couples get married, I don't know it is just so awesome to read about them getting engaged, wonderful story.
3/31/2009 c1 27RubyNury
It's beautiful!

Even if it was a million first time... it's worth reading the way YOU picture those two ;)

Lovely, sweet, romantic... a bit unusual to see Usagi like this but then again, she fits into story perfectly :)

The only thing I'm sad for, is that Haruka had to be dead *sigh* I love her too much.

But anyway, you're the author, and the story is great as it is :)

Thank you for writing it!
7/7/2008 c1 1redskyy
It has been done before, but it was still done well. You included the important scenes to tie everything together and keep the emotional bond. It could've been a little longer with some more elaboration, but it was still a fun story.
4/5/2008 c1 3In The Arms Of A Stranger
-Little voice in the background- Yay!...-Rolls about in a chibi-fied manner.-
4/1/2008 c1 62Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Looks like you're back at it, huh? And what a come-back I believe.

Helluva job, son! And yeah, you're right: I HAVE read this kinda stories a million times before, but there's the simple reason that...I just love these kinda stories! XD

I guess killing Haruka off was neccesary...too bad.

Anyway, Helluva job, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
3/24/2008 c1 Shalimar23
I LOVE IT! Its really cool the only part i didnt like was Haruka dying but at the same time it kinda had to happen for them to get together! so i really love it and i hope you write more like it!
3/23/2008 c1 Spikesagitta
it ends happy, that's all that matters^^ thanks for the fic!
3/23/2008 c1 168RadiantBeam
Even if I've read it a million times, it still makes me smile. Totally sweet, loved it to bits. To my Favorites it shall go!
3/22/2008 c1 9Naeryn
Hey, there may be tons of stories out there that start out angsty and wind up in an engagement or wedding - but that's because everyone loves them!

All in all, cute story. I'm not usually a fan of the Usagi/Michiru pairing, but this was still a nice story, regardless. Keep writing!
3/22/2008 c1 Jessem
Cute fanfic, only thing i would say is that it's too short! lol

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