for Lying12/24/2009 c1 StorytellerBella
This is amazing! Really well done. This is definitley i chapter i'll do once I've figured out this site. Anyway well-done * 5 stars
This is amazing! Really well done. This is definitley i chapter i'll do once I've figured out this site. Anyway well-done * 5 stars
12/17/2009 c1 MrsCullenOMG
nice! i really like it! write the whole thing of new moon or at least when edward comes back :)
nice! i really like it! write the whole thing of new moon or at least when edward comes back :)
4/14/2009 c1 iluvtwilight
that was my fav part in new moon i always wanted to no what way going on in edwards head it was so sad that i cryed for an hour great job!11
that was my fav part in new moon i always wanted to no what way going on in edwards head it was so sad that i cryed for an hour great job!11
6/11/2008 c1 
6ElizabethlovesEdward
OMG!
I started crying at the end!
continue you are doing a great job!
Talk To You Later
~~Elizabeth~~
6ElizabethlovesEdwardOMG!
I started crying at the end!
continue you are doing a great job!
Talk To You Later
~~Elizabeth~~
5/14/2008 c1 7Topaz Ki
*cries* Its so said.
But it is very well written. I love the line :"I wanted to take away all her insecurities, hug her, hold her, kiss her, but I forced myself not to, and instead, to break her heart with a simple word." It is soo good! Nice Job!
*adds to favorites*
7Topaz Ki*cries* Its so said.
But it is very well written. I love the line :"I wanted to take away all her insecurities, hug her, hold her, kiss her, but I forced myself not to, and instead, to break her heart with a simple word." It is soo good! Nice Job!
*adds to favorites*
4/3/2008 c1 7edwardcullen101
So sad *tear* that part of the book always makes me sad, but to read how much pain Edward was in makes it so much worse *sob*
7edwardcullen101So sad *tear* that part of the book always makes me sad, but to read how much pain Edward was in makes it so much worse *sob*
3/24/2008 c1 21SpacePirateGirl
Wow! This was really good! :D You actually put Edward's thoughts into the dialogue, too! Most people don't do that, I've noticed, so it could seem as if it were still in Bella's POV. . . :) So great job! I really enjoyed this! :D
21SpacePirateGirlWow! This was really good! :D You actually put Edward's thoughts into the dialogue, too! Most people don't do that, I've noticed, so it could seem as if it were still in Bella's POV. . . :) So great job! I really enjoyed this! :D
3/23/2008 c1 Eillac
The feeling this piece gave me is similar to someone ripping out your heart, tearing it to small pieces, and then stomping on them with soccer cleats.
-Alex
The feeling this piece gave me is similar to someone ripping out your heart, tearing it to small pieces, and then stomping on them with soccer cleats.
-Alex