for For Crying Out Loud5/3/2008 c2 
12avidgokufan
Interesting start. Please continue. I'm curious to see where you go from here.
12avidgokufanInteresting start. Please continue. I'm curious to see where you go from here.
4/20/2008 c2 9PatriciaS
Oh great chapter you got the humour between them just right as well as Sam's attitude and now the thought of little Jack in Goauld ship free or otherwise... beautiful ... after all he might be able to get to places the others can't. Enjoy where your muse takes you.
Looking forward to the next chapters thanks for sharing it with us.
My own hope is that you will keep it SJship free though Sam can be concerned for Jack of course.
9PatriciaSOh great chapter you got the humour between them just right as well as Sam's attitude and now the thought of little Jack in Goauld ship free or otherwise... beautiful ... after all he might be able to get to places the others can't. Enjoy where your muse takes you.
Looking forward to the next chapters thanks for sharing it with us.
My own hope is that you will keep it SJship free though Sam can be concerned for Jack of course.
4/18/2008 c2 pain in the mikta
I like this, despite some orthograph and punctuation problems! SnarkyJack is doing fine and I'd like to see what happens next with the Kreeing visitors! Keep going!
I like this, despite some orthograph and punctuation problems! SnarkyJack is doing fine and I'd like to see what happens next with the Kreeing visitors! Keep going!
4/18/2008 c2 19Bixata
Oh goody, more pesky Jaffa to spoil their fun. Poor Jack, I guess this is what you get when you don't act your age. Hope they don't have too much trouble getting out of this and dealing with Jack's little problem.
19BixataOh goody, more pesky Jaffa to spoil their fun. Poor Jack, I guess this is what you get when you don't act your age. Hope they don't have too much trouble getting out of this and dealing with Jack's little problem.
3/31/2008 c1 9PatriciaS
Great start ... like their reactions and the fact Jack is adult Jack in a child's body not a total child. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks for sharing.
9PatriciaSGreat start ... like their reactions and the fact Jack is adult Jack in a child's body not a total child. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks for sharing.
3/30/2008 c1 66not a zatarc
lol! Cute! hehe. I LOVE fics where Jack is little! :D Looking forward to more. :D
66not a zatarclol! Cute! hehe. I LOVE fics where Jack is little! :D Looking forward to more. :D