for To Keep Jane Safe9/6/2010 c1 Cocytus
Nice, that was fun to read!
Nice, that was fun to read!
8/10/2010 c1 
22H. K. Rissing
i really like this. THANK YOU FOR NOT HAVING ANY DISGUSTING IMPLIED JARO! i'm sorry, but personally find that pairing to be revolting. i always imagined Aro to be really protective and loving of jane and always wanting to keep her out of harms way even though he understands she can more than take care of herself, and you wrote that all out for me perfectly. Very well done.
22H. K. Rissingi really like this. THANK YOU FOR NOT HAVING ANY DISGUSTING IMPLIED JARO! i'm sorry, but personally find that pairing to be revolting. i always imagined Aro to be really protective and loving of jane and always wanting to keep her out of harms way even though he understands she can more than take care of herself, and you wrote that all out for me perfectly. Very well done.
4/1/2008 c1 4An LOTR Freak
very interesting POV, beautiful characterization what more could a reader ask for? keep writing!
4An LOTR Freakvery interesting POV, beautiful characterization what more could a reader ask for? keep writing!
4/1/2008 c1 roseuley819
O! VOLTURI LOVE FEST!hm?...
I LIKE IT! haha, please continue my dear :D
♥xoxo♥
O! VOLTURI LOVE FEST!hm?...
I LIKE IT! haha, please continue my dear :D
♥xoxo♥
4/1/2008 c1 Amethydia
Oh! I haven't read any fanfiction like this before. Bravo; you're original. That's far better than I can do. _
It's short, but I think that if you've written it further, it would become harder, and it would look kind of forced. You can, however, try to write other chapters which involves Jane and the others arriving at Forks from their POV, and Aro's POV when they get back. Just an idea, though. I get to many ideas; you don't have to use it.
But, yeah, I really like it, and I hope you can write more Twilight ff's. You're very good at it! XD
(I was the first to review. YAY!)
Oh! I haven't read any fanfiction like this before. Bravo; you're original. That's far better than I can do. _
It's short, but I think that if you've written it further, it would become harder, and it would look kind of forced. You can, however, try to write other chapters which involves Jane and the others arriving at Forks from their POV, and Aro's POV when they get back. Just an idea, though. I get to many ideas; you don't have to use it.
But, yeah, I really like it, and I hope you can write more Twilight ff's. You're very good at it! XD
(I was the first to review. YAY!)