for In the Broken Lies8/8/2008 c9 ShhListen
its pretty god but i think u should maybe describe the kisses more...
ohh well just my opinion
its pretty god but i think u should maybe describe the kisses more...
ohh well just my opinion
6/22/2008 c9 
12brokenshadow23
Eriol... He is so sweet.
Ahehe...
Nice ending... It was sad for Tomoyo but happy that she ended up to Eriol. Ahehe... Not like my first story that Sakura has to die.
SxS story? When? ahehe... I am looking forward to it! n_n
12brokenshadow23Eriol... He is so sweet.
Ahehe...
Nice ending... It was sad for Tomoyo but happy that she ended up to Eriol. Ahehe... Not like my first story that Sakura has to die.
SxS story? When? ahehe... I am looking forward to it! n_n
6/22/2008 c8 brokenshadow23
Oh... So that is why.
All right. I will already read the last chap. Ahehehe...
I am so happy for the two! hehe... At least, they have already confessed.
Oh... So that is why.
All right. I will already read the last chap. Ahehehe...
I am so happy for the two! hehe... At least, they have already confessed.
6/22/2008 c7 brokenshadow23
Wah!
I love that scene!
Ahehe...
I really like how Tomoyo confessed..!
This story is fantastic! Ahehe...
Wah!
I love that scene!
Ahehe...
I really like how Tomoyo confessed..!
This story is fantastic! Ahehe...
6/22/2008 c6 brokenshadow23
This chapter is so sad. Eriol left... -sniff- -sniff-
What's up with him? Why did he leave all of a sudden? Tsk. Anyway, I am going to read the next chap now. So that I will know the reason why. Ahehe!
n_n
This chapter is so sad. Eriol left... -sniff- -sniff-
What's up with him? Why did he leave all of a sudden? Tsk. Anyway, I am going to read the next chap now. So that I will know the reason why. Ahehe!
n_n
6/21/2008 c5 brokenshadow23
Whoa...
If I was at that moment( the scence after Eriol and Tomoyo kissed), I would have cheered for Tomoyo! Ahaha! But I do feel sorry for Eriol.
Hope they would get along soon. Ahehe...
Whoa...
If I was at that moment( the scence after Eriol and Tomoyo kissed), I would have cheered for Tomoyo! Ahaha! But I do feel sorry for Eriol.
Hope they would get along soon. Ahehe...
6/21/2008 c4 brokenshadow23
Your story is totally amazing!
I really like how they are acting. Ahehe...
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Your story is totally amazing!
I really like how they are acting. Ahehe...
n_n
6/21/2008 c3 brokenshadow23
Err... This story did remind me of someone. Ahehe...
Anyway, great story you have here... ;p
Err... This story did remind me of someone. Ahehe...
Anyway, great story you have here... ;p
6/21/2008 c2 brokenshadow23
Amph! Eriol's act reminded me of SOMEONE...
But honestly, that scene is the reason why I will read the next chap already! hehe...
Amph! Eriol's act reminded me of SOMEONE...
But honestly, that scene is the reason why I will read the next chap already! hehe...
6/21/2008 c1 brokenshadow23
Aww... How cute! Aheheh...
Sorry for this late review.. I thought you were still working on this one. It is just that I was too busy at school so i didn't have free time to read.
I really like it..! Ahehe... And I wish I could write well like you do.
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Aww... How cute! Aheheh...
Sorry for this late review.. I thought you were still working on this one. It is just that I was too busy at school so i didn't have free time to read.
I really like it..! Ahehe... And I wish I could write well like you do.
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6/17/2008 c9 3hushedthoughts
that was a very sweet story! i loved it! u did a great job! this is one of the best i've read so far! keep up the good work!
3hushedthoughtsthat was a very sweet story! i loved it! u did a great job! this is one of the best i've read so far! keep up the good work!
6/14/2008 c9 10SilentCynara
Okay, I know betas aren't supposed to review but who cares? XD
I really loved Tomoyo's thoughts at the beginning; they cap off a short but complicated emotional journey the two have taken.
Sakura's comment about Tomoyo forever calling Syaoran "Li-kun" was LOL! So having her call Eriol by his name is swooningly sweet ^_^
I like that it's a happy yet realistic ending: "She wasn’t happy, necessarily, but she was content. She still had many things to do before her life could be restored, and her company could get over the losses. Her mother had gone. But in her place, she had learned a lesson and found the love of Eriol." And his love was there for quite some time now ^_^ how kawaii!
And thank you for pointing out my evilness. I'd do an evil Tomoyo laugh but someone else has a patent on that LOL!
Congratulations on achieving what you wanted in your profile: your first complete story, and I agree with the other reviewers-this was wonderful to read!
10SilentCynaraOkay, I know betas aren't supposed to review but who cares? XD
I really loved Tomoyo's thoughts at the beginning; they cap off a short but complicated emotional journey the two have taken.
Sakura's comment about Tomoyo forever calling Syaoran "Li-kun" was LOL! So having her call Eriol by his name is swooningly sweet ^_^
I like that it's a happy yet realistic ending: "She wasn’t happy, necessarily, but she was content. She still had many things to do before her life could be restored, and her company could get over the losses. Her mother had gone. But in her place, she had learned a lesson and found the love of Eriol." And his love was there for quite some time now ^_^ how kawaii!
And thank you for pointing out my evilness. I'd do an evil Tomoyo laugh but someone else has a patent on that LOL!
Congratulations on achieving what you wanted in your profile: your first complete story, and I agree with the other reviewers-this was wonderful to read!