for Gohan Son and the Prisoner of Azkaban6/17 c11 dbzhp fan
please tell me you keep going on with this story! i read trough the story in on day! the first one took a litlle longer but it was so good. really, you could rivale jk rolling herself. keep it up please!
please tell me you keep going on with this story! i read trough the story in on day! the first one took a litlle longer but it was so good. really, you could rivale jk rolling herself. keep it up please!
6/16 c11 HpDbzfangirl
I love this story! I enjoy how people fear Vegeta, it's hilarious to me. And I love how you gave Gohan weaknesses that are logical(demetors). Also how you kept it similar to the actual books(plot, character devolpment, sub-plots). When are you going to post the next chapter, I don't care if it takes weeks, months, even years, just please continue this amazing fan-fic. I recommend that you bring up some more Gohan is going to explain his crazy past to Harry, Ron, and Hermionie scenes.
I love this story! I enjoy how people fear Vegeta, it's hilarious to me. And I love how you gave Gohan weaknesses that are logical(demetors). Also how you kept it similar to the actual books(plot, character devolpment, sub-plots). When are you going to post the next chapter, I don't care if it takes weeks, months, even years, just please continue this amazing fan-fic. I recommend that you bring up some more Gohan is going to explain his crazy past to Harry, Ron, and Hermionie scenes.
5/29 c4 
2Oreo2882
Didn't you mention earlier that they made it impossible to IT in the castle to keep Cell from getting in?
2Oreo2882Didn't you mention earlier that they made it impossible to IT in the castle to keep Cell from getting in?
5/21 c11 BadazzEXE
and i have finally reach the current chapter and i have to say i really like how this chapter came out i also hope that you give luna a stronger role in the story she's one of the few characters i like in the story plus i also want gohan to be a close friend with her really sad that she does not get much attention well in my point of view and the other part i liked is that cell finally got to meet the dark lord voldemort can't wait to see how strong cell will interact with voldemort and how he will change with his help and how voldemort will be affected with cell will he get stronger or will he change alot or stay the same but with some minor changes guess i'll have to wait and see aside from that great job on this and keep it up can't wait to see the next chapter (that is if your still continueing this and please consider makeing luna a main character get to have a stornger relationship with gohan and the othere especially gohan lol XD)
and i have finally reach the current chapter and i have to say i really like how this chapter came out i also hope that you give luna a stronger role in the story she's one of the few characters i like in the story plus i also want gohan to be a close friend with her really sad that she does not get much attention well in my point of view and the other part i liked is that cell finally got to meet the dark lord voldemort can't wait to see how strong cell will interact with voldemort and how he will change with his help and how voldemort will be affected with cell will he get stronger or will he change alot or stay the same but with some minor changes guess i'll have to wait and see aside from that great job on this and keep it up can't wait to see the next chapter (that is if your still continueing this and please consider makeing luna a main character get to have a stornger relationship with gohan and the othere especially gohan lol XD)
5/21 c9 BadazzEXE
great chapter like all ways really like how it came out but if i had to say the lessons for the Expecto Patronum was the part that really intrested me especially gohan second try when i saw that he heard a roar and since when some one uses the patronum it would some times take the form of a creature i would say that gohans was the oozaru or shenlong i personally hope it's shenlong but aside from that great job on this and keep it up
great chapter like all ways really like how it came out but if i had to say the lessons for the Expecto Patronum was the part that really intrested me especially gohan second try when i saw that he heard a roar and since when some one uses the patronum it would some times take the form of a creature i would say that gohans was the oozaru or shenlong i personally hope it's shenlong but aside from that great job on this and keep it up
5/20 c8 BadazzEXE
really like the idea of gohan geting a scouter for detecting magic that should prove useful aside from that great job on this keep it up
really like the idea of gohan geting a scouter for detecting magic that should prove useful aside from that great job on this keep it up
5/20 c7 BadazzEXE
things are really geting intresting hope to see the next chapter hold a unexpected twist or at least something new from what i am currently reading you following the story of prison of azkaban aside from that i still like how this came out great job and keep it up
things are really geting intresting hope to see the next chapter hold a unexpected twist or at least something new from what i am currently reading you following the story of prison of azkaban aside from that i still like how this came out great job and keep it up
5/20 c5 BadazzEXE
damn it forgot to review the last chapter and the chapter after that sorry about that anyways glad that you included icarus in the story really liked it and i all so am confused as to way the boggart transformed in to raditz well guess i'll have to keep reading to find out anyways besides that great job on this and keep it up
damn it forgot to review the last chapter and the chapter after that sorry about that anyways glad that you included icarus in the story really liked it and i all so am confused as to way the boggart transformed in to raditz well guess i'll have to keep reading to find out anyways besides that great job on this and keep it up
5/19 c2 BadazzEXE
can't wait to see what piccolo gave gohan and hope to see something unexpected later in the chapters aside from that like all ways great job and keep it up
can't wait to see what piccolo gave gohan and hope to see something unexpected later in the chapters aside from that like all ways great job and keep it up
5/19 c1 BadazzEXE
just finished reading your first story of Harry Potter and the Super Saiyan Wizard and i have to say loved it could not stop reading most of the time or stop to put a review which i feel bad for my bad heck i stayed up all the way to 4:00 AM just to be able to read more and since i did not put review for your first story i though that i should put a review for the first chapter of this story hope your still countinueing this and great job on this chapter really like how connected gohan is with harry and the others again great job on this expect to see great thing from this fanfic oh and i hope you add some other DBZ villians mostly the once that show up after the cell games like broly since he shows up later but then again that's your choice again hope you don't give up on this keep it up (if i made any mistakes writing this sorry kind of rushed this to get to read the next chapter lol XD)
just finished reading your first story of Harry Potter and the Super Saiyan Wizard and i have to say loved it could not stop reading most of the time or stop to put a review which i feel bad for my bad heck i stayed up all the way to 4:00 AM just to be able to read more and since i did not put review for your first story i though that i should put a review for the first chapter of this story hope your still countinueing this and great job on this chapter really like how connected gohan is with harry and the others again great job on this expect to see great thing from this fanfic oh and i hope you add some other DBZ villians mostly the once that show up after the cell games like broly since he shows up later but then again that's your choice again hope you don't give up on this keep it up (if i made any mistakes writing this sorry kind of rushed this to get to read the next chapter lol XD)
4/29 c11 A Brilliant Loser
Color me surprised that I actually read a HPDBZ crossover that I enjoyed. Your series is really well written, and everyone's in character and just...
It's awesome.
I hope to see a continuation of Year 3 (two? Two for Gohan as a third year) in the future :D
Color me surprised that I actually read a HPDBZ crossover that I enjoyed. Your series is really well written, and everyone's in character and just...
It's awesome.
I hope to see a continuation of Year 3 (two? Two for Gohan as a third year) in the future :D
4/2 c11 mfmxxx
Liked it. Shame its probably abandoned. Vegeta seems to like GOhan in this which is cool
Liked it. Shame its probably abandoned. Vegeta seems to like GOhan in this which is cool
12/2/2012 c1 Your Biggest Fan
Another thing I love to Point out...How are you going to pull of Goblet of Fire when you get to it...for one thing you can't get Gohan to Compete in the triwizard tournament, cause his Powers and Abilities are pretty much unfair...nor shall the story be any interesting if Gohan just sat and watched through the side lines...
I do though have a small Idea what you could do to make it work out well.
for most part Gohan may have to sit himself out of it (having him in the Triwizard Cup is a little unfair, less you put rules on him to only use his wand none of his Ki energy) though it be best for him to sit it out and have to wait till Harry is in utter Danger (have it in a way Gohan must have utter faith in his wizard friend)
another in my Opinion is to not have Cell appear again but instead appear in front of the Z-Fighters and Order of Phoenix members in the fifth book, be fun if the Androids join in too so it seems 17 and 18 would have a sort of vendetta on Cell for Absorbing them and hopeless try to fight only to lose, leaving Gohan the only one capable to fight Cell but fail to kill him again. (I don't know it be more suspensful for Gohan to see over 2 years of hiding and now allying with Voldermort Cell has managed to get even stronger within those 2 years of hiding)
While it would seem Gohan would have less to do, he would still see some things that were left out from the book, like meeting the other House Elves who cook in the kitchen and Clean up, having been forced out of friendship to help Hermonie with that SPEW thing, heck even trying to avoid this certain made up Character to go to the Yule ball with.
I also Imagine him, giving Cedric's Parents small comfort that Cedric is probably in Other World with Goku probably by fate getting some form of Training from Goku and King Kai (another thought I had was to have Gohan suggest using the Dragon Balls...but I to me it would seem anti-climatic, seeing Cedric's Death triggers a certain event in the Story) and by chance through Baba both Goku and Cedric Arrive to help in the final Battle of Hogwarts and everyone amazed how buffed Cedric is and Cho having a tearful reunion before Cedric has to return back to Other World with Goku.
(You can have Buu in the story, but it would seem overly anti-climatic to have him there...though it was him that triggered the Fusion Saga and the development of Mystic Gohan through the Supreme Kai)
Another thought is cause onward in the Harry Potter story, are going to use Dragon Balls to resurrect the ones that died in the final Battle? just wondering.
anyway just some ideas I wanted to share...you don't need to use them, but who knows may come in handy keep it up and make sure to keep in check of any information on both Wikis and make sure to revise and check your story for mistakes or in places that need improving on.
Another thing I love to Point out...How are you going to pull of Goblet of Fire when you get to it...for one thing you can't get Gohan to Compete in the triwizard tournament, cause his Powers and Abilities are pretty much unfair...nor shall the story be any interesting if Gohan just sat and watched through the side lines...
I do though have a small Idea what you could do to make it work out well.
for most part Gohan may have to sit himself out of it (having him in the Triwizard Cup is a little unfair, less you put rules on him to only use his wand none of his Ki energy) though it be best for him to sit it out and have to wait till Harry is in utter Danger (have it in a way Gohan must have utter faith in his wizard friend)
another in my Opinion is to not have Cell appear again but instead appear in front of the Z-Fighters and Order of Phoenix members in the fifth book, be fun if the Androids join in too so it seems 17 and 18 would have a sort of vendetta on Cell for Absorbing them and hopeless try to fight only to lose, leaving Gohan the only one capable to fight Cell but fail to kill him again. (I don't know it be more suspensful for Gohan to see over 2 years of hiding and now allying with Voldermort Cell has managed to get even stronger within those 2 years of hiding)
While it would seem Gohan would have less to do, he would still see some things that were left out from the book, like meeting the other House Elves who cook in the kitchen and Clean up, having been forced out of friendship to help Hermonie with that SPEW thing, heck even trying to avoid this certain made up Character to go to the Yule ball with.
I also Imagine him, giving Cedric's Parents small comfort that Cedric is probably in Other World with Goku probably by fate getting some form of Training from Goku and King Kai (another thought I had was to have Gohan suggest using the Dragon Balls...but I to me it would seem anti-climatic, seeing Cedric's Death triggers a certain event in the Story) and by chance through Baba both Goku and Cedric Arrive to help in the final Battle of Hogwarts and everyone amazed how buffed Cedric is and Cho having a tearful reunion before Cedric has to return back to Other World with Goku.
(You can have Buu in the story, but it would seem overly anti-climatic to have him there...though it was him that triggered the Fusion Saga and the development of Mystic Gohan through the Supreme Kai)
Another thought is cause onward in the Harry Potter story, are going to use Dragon Balls to resurrect the ones that died in the final Battle? just wondering.
anyway just some ideas I wanted to share...you don't need to use them, but who knows may come in handy keep it up and make sure to keep in check of any information on both Wikis and make sure to revise and check your story for mistakes or in places that need improving on.