for I am what!2/11 c14 yesenia
i love this story
i love this story
11/6/2012 c11 Guest
I think it will be 1 because it will be intesting to add a another chapter in thr middle,but you siad that you THINK. Well I think it will be great to choose 1.
I think it will be 1 because it will be intesting to add a another chapter in thr middle,but you siad that you THINK. Well I think it will be great to choose 1.
11/6/2012 c9 Paula Ly
I wiil think it's B.
I wiil think it's B.
5/8/2012 c3 grammar nazi
clothes has an e in it **head and get a **ing dictionary. p.s. yami sounds like a retard when he says " I love you with all ME heart." he's japanese ** not irish!
clothes has an e in it **head and get a **ing dictionary. p.s. yami sounds like a retard when he says " I love you with all ME heart." he's japanese ** not irish!
5/4/2012 c5 
1princesskisara
Another drama came. 2 deep drama actually well... I'll just see how you will take this story goes...
1princesskisaraAnother drama came. 2 deep drama actually well... I'll just see how you will take this story goes...
5/4/2012 c4 princesskisara
Wow... Plan b. The safest progrest. Well not the safest progres i still wondering about tea's school... This is indeed a warm chapter...
Wow... Plan b. The safest progrest. Well not the safest progres i still wondering about tea's school... This is indeed a warm chapter...
5/3/2012 c3 princesskisara
I am glad yami will accept tea. But i kind of worry about tea's parent. I am afraid they will force tea to go to abortion to kill the baby. Well you know... Conflick has progress nicelly.
I am glad yami will accept tea. But i kind of worry about tea's parent. I am afraid they will force tea to go to abortion to kill the baby. Well you know... Conflick has progress nicelly.
5/2/2012 c2 princesskisara
That was a deep conflict. A lot... And a deep drama. I want to know how you will handle this story. Then oh yeah, i found a few mistake in grammar becarefull next time.
That was a deep conflict. A lot... And a deep drama. I want to know how you will handle this story. Then oh yeah, i found a few mistake in grammar becarefull next time.
4/26/2012 c1 princesskisara
I sense drama here. Hmm., i would like to know how you will handle this story goes...
I sense drama here. Hmm., i would like to know how you will handle this story goes...
2/15/2012 c1 53The Strange Writer
God, I read this ages ago and only just remembered it! Spent the last 2 days tracking it down! So worth it :)
53The Strange WriterGod, I read this ages ago and only just remembered it! Spent the last 2 days tracking it down! So worth it :)
7/6/2010 c13 lizzy
I really like your story
this chapter was great
Oh, and the Kameo game is not that hard I finished the game in about a week
any way, great job the story is unique I have never read an other story where Tea or any other character become pregnant.
I really like your story
this chapter was great
Oh, and the Kameo game is not that hard I finished the game in about a week
any way, great job the story is unique I have never read an other story where Tea or any other character become pregnant.
10/2/2009 c15 5KingAtemOfEgypt
Very nice story. There are some grammer mistakes, but overall it was great!
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Atem
5KingAtemOfEgyptVery nice story. There are some grammer mistakes, but overall it was great!
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Atem
3/19/2009 c15 10Princess Of Sorrow
I love this story so much! it's awesome! well, I know I took long to read it, and again I'm so sorry! but I assure you this story is so great, and everytime I see Yami calling her 'babe' I feel shivers running down my spine! lol, silly huh?
10Princess Of SorrowI love this story so much! it's awesome! well, I know I took long to read it, and again I'm so sorry! but I assure you this story is so great, and everytime I see Yami calling her 'babe' I feel shivers running down my spine! lol, silly huh?