for Artful Dodger2/16/2009 c49 
7Taura Callisto
And so it comes to an end. This was a great story, I felt very satisfied with the out come. =)
7Taura CallistoAnd so it comes to an end. This was a great story, I felt very satisfied with the out come. =)
2/8/2009 c49 19Serialgal
Finally got the time to catch up with the end of this one - that was quite a plot! I love a story with a plot that makes you think. The characterizations were great, too. Great job!
19SerialgalFinally got the time to catch up with the end of this one - that was quite a plot! I love a story with a plot that makes you think. The characterizations were great, too. Great job!
1/31/2009 c49 6Just Ducky 722
This was a fantastic story. Its a crime you don't have more reviews. What I really liked was that it was really simpplistic-it was like a real crime that had twists and turns, but all made sense by the end. Great work!
6Just Ducky 722This was a fantastic story. Its a crime you don't have more reviews. What I really liked was that it was really simpplistic-it was like a real crime that had twists and turns, but all made sense by the end. Great work!
1/24/2009 c49 36insertappropropriatenamehere
... and what happened to Charlie's classes at Cal Sci? They just suddenly dropped off the map and left a big plot hole.
36insertappropropriatenamehere... and what happened to Charlie's classes at Cal Sci? They just suddenly dropped off the map and left a big plot hole.
1/23/2009 c48 Ms.GrahamCracker
Wow. Lots of family backstabbing going on here. And I'm not quite sure what to make of Cary. I could believe everything she said about the boy, but it sounds like she was ready to kill the cops if they tried to stop the theft - and even after she shot Don the first time and KNEW she had hurt him, she shot him AGAIN! Hm, not sure about her.
Ready for numb3r 49.
Wow. Lots of family backstabbing going on here. And I'm not quite sure what to make of Cary. I could believe everything she said about the boy, but it sounds like she was ready to kill the cops if they tried to stop the theft - and even after she shot Don the first time and KNEW she had hurt him, she shot him AGAIN! Hm, not sure about her.
Ready for numb3r 49.
1/23/2009 c47 Ms.GrahamCracker
Wow, the plot thickens. Again, I love the way (you) David and Megan and Don handled the interrogations.
Great job.
Wow, the plot thickens. Again, I love the way (you) David and Megan and Don handled the interrogations.
Great job.
1/23/2009 c45 Ms.GrahamCracker
I loved Don resigning himself to Alan taking his temperature; "Go ahead, feel my forehead."
I loved; "Scrabble is evil." "Only to the illiterate,"
I loved Don confronting Colby about his chair.
And, last, but certainly not least, I loved your little explanation about Greg Spencer's lineage and the magic of fiction.
I loved Don resigning himself to Alan taking his temperature; "Go ahead, feel my forehead."
I loved; "Scrabble is evil." "Only to the illiterate,"
I loved Don confronting Colby about his chair.
And, last, but certainly not least, I loved your little explanation about Greg Spencer's lineage and the magic of fiction.
1/4/2009 c44 Ms.GrahamCracker
Love Don on medical leave; weak, drugged and still ready for Liz to join him in bed.
Charlie even got a little nap - so when do David, Megan and Colby get some shut eye?
Great update. Keep 'em coming.
Love Don on medical leave; weak, drugged and still ready for Liz to join him in bed.
Charlie even got a little nap - so when do David, Megan and Colby get some shut eye?
Great update. Keep 'em coming.
1/3/2009 c43 Ms.GrahamCracker
You would think, as an FBI agent, Don would be more observant and pay attention to instructions from a doctor. I will, however, give him the benefit of the doubt, since he was in serious pain a the time. Wow! Two oxys at the same time. It's a wonder he was able to stand up at all. And I loved Alan catching the last bit of Charlie and Don's conversation about making sure Don didn't stop breathing. Ha Ha.
David and Colby's interview with Ellen's husband was interesting and slightly revealing. I really feel for the poor man.
Great update. Thanks for sending it our way so soon.
You would think, as an FBI agent, Don would be more observant and pay attention to instructions from a doctor. I will, however, give him the benefit of the doubt, since he was in serious pain a the time. Wow! Two oxys at the same time. It's a wonder he was able to stand up at all. And I loved Alan catching the last bit of Charlie and Don's conversation about making sure Don didn't stop breathing. Ha Ha.
David and Colby's interview with Ellen's husband was interesting and slightly revealing. I really feel for the poor man.
Great update. Thanks for sending it our way so soon.
1/3/2009 c42 Ms.GrahamCracker
I was so happy to see the New Year brought a new update from you. I hope this review gets to you. This site seems to be having some problems the last few days. Anyway, love this update. Don on pain medication is just too cute. I love the way you have action and everyday family life merging together. It's so realistic.
Hope to see you again soon.
I was so happy to see the New Year brought a new update from you. I hope this review gets to you. This site seems to be having some problems the last few days. Anyway, love this update. Don on pain medication is just too cute. I love the way you have action and everyday family life merging together. It's so realistic.
Hope to see you again soon.
1/2/2009 c1 k
hey, i just wanna say that i LOVE your title. Oliver Twist reference! hehe, its great and it made me laugh, so thanks!
hey, i just wanna say that i LOVE your title. Oliver Twist reference! hehe, its great and it made me laugh, so thanks!