for The Trust 'Verse, Parts I, II & III5/19 c1 anon
"Sai wondered whether he should have stopped Naruto before the sixth glass of sake… but then again, generally speaking, Naruto could hold his alcohol as well as he could hold his food, most poisons, his breath and Sai's **."
I chuckled reading this. That last sentence ended unexpectedly.
"Sai wondered whether he should have stopped Naruto before the sixth glass of sake… but then again, generally speaking, Naruto could hold his alcohol as well as he could hold his food, most poisons, his breath and Sai's **."
I chuckled reading this. That last sentence ended unexpectedly.
4/29 c16 
4Catharmel
Fantastic. Absolutely absolutely fantastic. The depth and realism of your characters, I wasn't even all that torn up about Sai's death; I feel like you brought us to a place where we were able to appreciate his years with Naruto, and be thankful for that, before moving on to the future. And it's a remarkable thing you've done, with the cohesion of the whole story from the first chapter to this one. I cannot, with all honesty, wait until the next chapter, whenever it may come. Brilliant read.
4CatharmelFantastic. Absolutely absolutely fantastic. The depth and realism of your characters, I wasn't even all that torn up about Sai's death; I feel like you brought us to a place where we were able to appreciate his years with Naruto, and be thankful for that, before moving on to the future. And it's a remarkable thing you've done, with the cohesion of the whole story from the first chapter to this one. I cannot, with all honesty, wait until the next chapter, whenever it may come. Brilliant read.
3/27 c16 Qyu
This is really one of the best Naruto/Sai stories out there, and I even love Iwa. I'm not a fan of other characters, but I made huge exceptions for him and Nari! Please continue this story. I know its been a while, but if you ever come back to finish, I'm sure all your fans would be most appreciative!
This is really one of the best Naruto/Sai stories out there, and I even love Iwa. I'm not a fan of other characters, but I made huge exceptions for him and Nari! Please continue this story. I know its been a while, but if you ever come back to finish, I'm sure all your fans would be most appreciative!
3/14 c16 morgaine has won
Wow. Pointing out your incredible writing style would be sort of unnecessary, wouldn't it?
Yeah, well, I'll do it regardless. I love the way you approached the relationship of Sai and Naruto, Sasuke and Naruto (before Sasuke loses all screentime :D), and especially this weird, creepy, mysterious, enticing thing between Naruto and Iwa. Although it reeks of pedophilia a bit ... but, technically it's not since it's one-sided so far. SO FAR! *laughs maniacally*
... yeah, okay.
I think you did an awesome job developing Iwa's character - what with being similar to Itachi and all. In my opinion you managed it very well not to make him an Itachi clone (and I take it you used the Itachi from before 'the reveal' as a reference), but instead fleshed him out as very independent from his similarity to his 'uncle'. (Heh. Itachi is an uncle.)
If I had any problems concerning your plotline I forgot them. Just can't think of anything that displeases me about your story...
Although, admittedly, I don't see Naruto and Sai getting together in canon ... but I see also noone else in the series getting together in canon, so there.
Very, very well done!
... oh, and, please continue soon! :)
Wow. Pointing out your incredible writing style would be sort of unnecessary, wouldn't it?
Yeah, well, I'll do it regardless. I love the way you approached the relationship of Sai and Naruto, Sasuke and Naruto (before Sasuke loses all screentime :D), and especially this weird, creepy, mysterious, enticing thing between Naruto and Iwa. Although it reeks of pedophilia a bit ... but, technically it's not since it's one-sided so far. SO FAR! *laughs maniacally*
... yeah, okay.
I think you did an awesome job developing Iwa's character - what with being similar to Itachi and all. In my opinion you managed it very well not to make him an Itachi clone (and I take it you used the Itachi from before 'the reveal' as a reference), but instead fleshed him out as very independent from his similarity to his 'uncle'. (Heh. Itachi is an uncle.)
If I had any problems concerning your plotline I forgot them. Just can't think of anything that displeases me about your story...
Although, admittedly, I don't see Naruto and Sai getting together in canon ... but I see also noone else in the series getting together in canon, so there.
Very, very well done!
... oh, and, please continue soon! :)
12/31/2012 c15 3Deranged and Morbid
I think I might love you. This is the best thing I've read in ages. NaruSai esp.
3Deranged and MorbidI think I might love you. This is the best thing I've read in ages. NaruSai esp.
12/28/2012 c16 druneko
mrow, Mew hopes chu well and enjoying chu holidays, and would LOVE an update soon, the suspense ish horribles .
mrow, Mew hopes chu well and enjoying chu holidays, and would LOVE an update soon, the suspense ish horribles .
12/21/2012 c7 Guest
The end XD
Sometimes it was hard being beautiful,freaking Sasuke
I also wanted to hug the ** out of Iwa,he seems like such a cutie!
The end XD
Sometimes it was hard being beautiful,freaking Sasuke
I also wanted to hug the ** out of Iwa,he seems like such a cutie!
11/24/2012 c4 AbBytoTs
YEEEEEEEEEESH! omg. omg. That is just sooooooooooooooo SWEET! ahahaha. a promise sealed with a KISS?! DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!
YEEEEEEEEEESH! omg. omg. That is just sooooooooooooooo SWEET! ahahaha. a promise sealed with a KISS?! DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!
11/24/2012 c3 AbBytoTs
OH YES! YESSSSSSSSSS! FINally a narusai fic! And it's a good read too! YAHOO! Keep up the good work! XD
OH YES! YESSSSSSSSSS! FINally a narusai fic! And it's a good read too! YAHOO! Keep up the good work! XD
11/8/2012 c16 Guest
next one!
next one!
11/2/2012 c16 DevianYUE
WOW loveeee this story. when i first starting reading. i had no idea it was going to be so complex BUT cool at the same time!
update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee
WOW loveeee this story. when i first starting reading. i had no idea it was going to be so complex BUT cool at the same time!
update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee