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3/28/2012 c2 spacekitten2700
you gave me good laugh more please
2/22/2012 c2 makeup addict004
Loved it! If there is another bet to this story, it would be how long Alex can go without being sarcastic. I think he would win that one, especially if he were to get Logan in on the act!
6/21/2008 c2 6Quantum Cross Ranger
Bobby can never win! :D

The next bet should be who can tie their shoelaces the fastest! Yeah that's random, but it'd be funny... I think...
6/20/2008 c2 35The Confused One
ROFLMAO I love it. It's fabulous. Very cute. I love that Alex won. There's just an...undercurrent with that second bet that makes me happy. :) I'm such a hopeless shipper...LOL I'm looking forward to you writing another bet. :)
6/18/2008 c2 210PlatinumRoseLady
I LOVE this story!

Next bet... hm... Bobby has to get one one knee and confess to Eames just how much he loves her in the middle of the Squad Room.

In a tux.

With a HUGE bouquet of red roses.
6/15/2008 c2 2rindy713
hey, i would LOVE to go to shea with bobby! seems to me that's a win-win proposition.

maybe alex and bobby need to bet on a wrestling/judo match. i'll bet alex could take him, even though he's bigger.
6/15/2008 c2 Fanmlz
Cute. Very well done. Keep this story going.
6/14/2008 c2 11TeddyMo
Cute ! Really, really well done-

Who says Bobby should ever win?
6/14/2008 c2 chlark4
Nice. You just proved that women can work on cars and fix them correctly. I am glad she won that one. As to another bet, I cannot think of one at this time but I am looking forward to another chapter. Post more soon.
6/13/2008 c1 8gorengal
I'm so glad you put this up here (since it got too long for the challenge). Very cute and funny. :)
6/4/2008 c1 4RavennaNightwind
Haha. Very funny. I could totally see them betting. I liked the end where she was actually subscribed to it as well. Very nice job.
5/24/2008 c1 49superfelix
Haha!

It is so difficult to stop yourself if you write these little 100 challenges. I had loved it, if you post it on the LJ, but now I read it here.

What was their stake?

Alex is a nibbling cat and Bobby can't hold his brain. wonderful!
5/1/2008 c1 2rindy713
that's cute! and of course, alex must win every bet. i love her musings about his lower lip, just like her nephew.
4/29/2008 c1 22I-am-LMR
:) See that? Yeah, that. That is my happy face (:)) It is there because this story cracked me up in the best way. I think Alex deserves a free bag of Skittles for wading through that stupid magazine. Though I must say, I'm quite sure a subscription and the time spent reading it were worth more than the actual candy, so I'm going to say she just wanted the pleasure of beating the snot out of him at something. I want to know what she was going to dish up if he had won. You will notice that I am putting this story on alert which means you are expected to deliver another chapter with another bet which Alex will lose terribly and have to fork something over to Bobby dearest. I love that you write out the characters' thoughts so well. *guilty look* You always know exactly what they're thinking. Love that bottom lip thing. (And I would like to add that you exercised admirable restraint as far as Alex's thoughts on said lip.)

I have your last name and personal email address, so be advised that I can hunt you down and cause you serious distress should you not decide to continue this gem. No pressure. ;)
4/28/2008 c1 64TriStateCopFan
Cute...a 7th subscriber! LOL
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