for Uncle10/23/2008 c2 
1Morgomir
Although this is a great piece of writing. I can't overcome my hatred for Kinsey. Keep up the good work.
1MorgomirAlthough this is a great piece of writing. I can't overcome my hatred for Kinsey. Keep up the good work.
10/23/2008 c2 9PatriciaS
Nice to see this one extended and you've got the feel of him ... willing to wait before pouncing. Looking forward to his plotting thanks for sharing.
9PatriciaSNice to see this one extended and you've got the feel of him ... willing to wait before pouncing. Looking forward to his plotting thanks for sharing.
5/2/2008 c1 Anon
Suitably creepy concept... But how Jack would have been unaware that the guy's his uncle...
BTW... 52-39 = 13!
8-0
Suitably creepy concept... But how Jack would have been unaware that the guy's his uncle...
BTW... 52-39 = 13!
8-0
5/2/2008 c1 Quacked Lurker
NOO! Yikes!
Kinsey is O'Neill's uncle? That is twisted! In a good way.
Let me guess, Robbie is short for Robert. That's just a guess-and this was well written. I can see a young teenage boy taking that vow and being successful at it.
Plus this explains how and why those two are such enemies-and it seems no introduction was necessary.
narrative view-interesting, and how it ties in with the series was great! Loved it, in-spite of the ending. Forget that statment-the last half.
Angush and pain, but also joy and life. A perfect combination, as a well-written tie-in. (official series)
NOO! Yikes!
Kinsey is O'Neill's uncle? That is twisted! In a good way.
Let me guess, Robbie is short for Robert. That's just a guess-and this was well written. I can see a young teenage boy taking that vow and being successful at it.
Plus this explains how and why those two are such enemies-and it seems no introduction was necessary.
narrative view-interesting, and how it ties in with the series was great! Loved it, in-spite of the ending. Forget that statment-the last half.
Angush and pain, but also joy and life. A perfect combination, as a well-written tie-in. (official series)
5/2/2008 c1 mjm
oh! VERY promising start...
oh! VERY promising start...
5/2/2008 c1 9PatriciaS
Interesting idea and could explain a lot about their behaviour to each other. Thanks for sharing.
9PatriciaSInteresting idea and could explain a lot about their behaviour to each other. Thanks for sharing.
5/1/2008 c1 9iwrite4fun
OH! You know, you should write a whole story just based on this single idea- this is something I've never even thought about before and should really be explored! Think of all the nasty things you could have Kinsey do to Jack over the years...
9iwrite4funOH! You know, you should write a whole story just based on this single idea- this is something I've never even thought about before and should really be explored! Think of all the nasty things you could have Kinsey do to Jack over the years...