for The Heart Within11/2/2012 c12 
2warrioroftheravens
Great plot and nice writing style. Captivating scenes make this a very enjoyable story. I like your take on Mytho's character. Keep writing please!
2warrioroftheravensGreat plot and nice writing style. Captivating scenes make this a very enjoyable story. I like your take on Mytho's character. Keep writing please!
8/15/2012 c10 Mara
So I know I already awnsered why I don't like Ranulf but I changed my my mind on my awnser. I rurally don't like him because he seems to be a perfect prince like Mytho. I also don't like him because I really like Fakir and Ahiru as a couple and I think he might come in between them.
So I know I already awnsered why I don't like Ranulf but I changed my my mind on my awnser. I rurally don't like him because he seems to be a perfect prince like Mytho. I also don't like him because I really like Fakir and Ahiru as a couple and I think he might come in between them.
7/26/2012 c10 Mara
I don't like Ranulf very much because he's too nice or something like that I really don't know why I don't like him. He's just a weird character I think.
I don't like Ranulf very much because he's too nice or something like that I really don't know why I don't like him. He's just a weird character I think.
7/26/2012 c1 Mara
I have read a few Princess Tutu fanfics and this is one of my favorites and I have only read the first chapter!
I have read a few Princess Tutu fanfics and this is one of my favorites and I have only read the first chapter!
7/3/2012 c12 Guest
Thank goodness now you need to make fakir tell her his feelings it will be do sad when she rejects him and he immediately go after runulf thinking that she loves him even thou he's the " presence"
Thank goodness now you need to make fakir tell her his feelings it will be do sad when she rejects him and he immediately go after runulf thinking that she loves him even thou he's the " presence"
7/1/2012 c12 Guest
AHHHHHH! NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE!
AHHHHHH! NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE!
6/29/2012 c12 Guest
Please keep writing! I love this, and I am anxiously awaiting the next parts. I hope you keep working on this!
Please keep writing! I love this, and I am anxiously awaiting the next parts. I hope you keep working on this!
5/26/2012 c12 11KittyRin
This story is one of the best I've seen out there! You're a very talented person. :)
-KittyRin
11KittyRinThis story is one of the best I've seen out there! You're a very talented person. :)
-KittyRin
5/23/2012 c12 3camelon
you are a wonderful story writer. i have only just recently found you but i love your take on it. you have inspired me to write my own verson. i truly hope you will be able to finish this because it is wonderful and it makes me smile and laugh to read it. i feel like i understand the story and the characters even more. you have such a god away of conecting with the characters that it makes me feel like you were there when they were created. i hope to see more chpeters in the future. you are an amazig writer. keep up the hard work.
3camelonyou are a wonderful story writer. i have only just recently found you but i love your take on it. you have inspired me to write my own verson. i truly hope you will be able to finish this because it is wonderful and it makes me smile and laugh to read it. i feel like i understand the story and the characters even more. you have such a god away of conecting with the characters that it makes me feel like you were there when they were created. i hope to see more chpeters in the future. you are an amazig writer. keep up the hard work.
10/14/2011 c11 215kitty
I can't wait for the next chapter!
I absolutely love your story. The characters are true to the episodes, and your story is nicely paced. As for ranulf, I have no problem with him as long as fakir gets ahiru. in my eyes, he doesn't seem like a marty sue.
Now I'm just worried about what will happen.something ominous is surely looming. I just hope there are more tender moments with ahiru and fakir.
Update soon!
215kittyI can't wait for the next chapter!
I absolutely love your story. The characters are true to the episodes, and your story is nicely paced. As for ranulf, I have no problem with him as long as fakir gets ahiru. in my eyes, he doesn't seem like a marty sue.
Now I'm just worried about what will happen.something ominous is surely looming. I just hope there are more tender moments with ahiru and fakir.
Update soon!