for Unlikely Intrusion4/17 c20 SHAKILA MAHIRA
HI. I NEED TO KNOW THE END OF THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
HI. I NEED TO KNOW THE END OF THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
9/24/2012 c20 Guest
Please please update soon! This and remember me! I'm as impatient as scam when it comes to waiting for updates on books I love! Please update soon! Xx- Constance
Please please update soon! This and remember me! I'm as impatient as scam when it comes to waiting for updates on books I love! Please update soon! Xx- Constance
8/3/2012 c20
24KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun
I decided to give this story a try, I was curious about scams mind reading and wouldnt you know it-I love it! Oh it is too awesome for words! Pretty please update this?
24KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFunI decided to give this story a try, I was curious about scams mind reading and wouldnt you know it-I love it! Oh it is too awesome for words! Pretty please update this?
6/11/2012 c20 JBA
OMG They switched bodies! Creepy but cool! I really like this story so far so please write more and fast! :) :) :)
OMG They switched bodies! Creepy but cool! I really like this story so far so please write more and fast! :) :) :)
6/11/2012 c18 JBA
OMG OMG OMG
OMG OMG OMG
6/11/2012 c12 JBA
I know what her secret is ! :)
I know what her secret is ! :)
2/28/2012 c20
1Miss Riley Belle Shadows
Let Sam turn her body back nito her own! NOW! Luv the story BTW
1Miss Riley Belle ShadowsLet Sam turn her body back nito her own! NOW! Luv the story BTW
1/24/2012 c1 beautyangel2
OMG OOMMGG !this story is amazing! What will happen next? Please continue it!
OMG OOMMGG !this story is amazing! What will happen next? Please continue it!
9/12/2011 c20
17Athena Katorea Knightstar
Sam's slowly turning into Tim but does it means that Tim's turning into Sam? I really enjoyed your and Poison Ivy's works. Please update ASAP!
17Athena Katorea KnightstarSam's slowly turning into Tim but does it means that Tim's turning into Sam? I really enjoyed your and Poison Ivy's works. Please update ASAP!
9/10/2011 c20
8WOW101
OMG i like this story... A LOT its super amazing and u just have to update soon!
8WOW101OMG i like this story... A LOT its super amazing and u just have to update soon!
9/10/2011 c20
117Poison's Ivy
So omg OMGOMGOMGOMGMOGOMGMOGMOGMOGMO I LOVE UI SO MUCH .
omg
o
m
g
DO YOU UNDERSTAND MY EXCITEMENT?
because I am SO
so
so
very excited.
[She had been working all night. Ever since she had gotten back from meeting Tim she had spent every second working hard.] because this girl LITERALLY LIVES to please you. omg that's so **ing hot.
I want to write a slave fic. A fic where Scam is the master of Sam's actions, her Master, and he does it for so long that she ends up secretly being pleased with being submissive to him. omg.
[A quick grin forming on her lips Sam knew her discomfort was nothing when it came to the thought of Tim Scam.] OMG I LOVE IT WHEN SAM'S SMART.
omg.
[Like anesthesia,
and when he was on her mind...
She could feel no pain.] I LOVE THAT ANALOGY SO MUCH OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
OMG SHE SOUNDS SO EXCITED ABOUT WEAPONS JUST LIKE SCAM OMGMGOOMGOMGOMGMO
["He will love me..." Sam drawled out, grinning happily because she knew he would. Tim was a selfish man, a betrayer, a narcissist. "Then he just has to love me..."]
OMG. I LOVE THE SENTENCE: "She WAS Tim." that is the perfect sentence to describe Sam right now omgomgmogomgom
[ To her it felt like it was HIM, Tim Scam there in her hands, in her reach]OMGMOGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOM THATS SO HOT.
[Because this weapon made her think of her Tim. And he?
Was worth more to her than all the diamonds in the world.] AHHHHHH
[Being with Tim Scam...would be something indescribable] I like Sam so much right now. This makes up for her idiotness EVERYWHERE ELSE. :P
Omg i love how psychotic she seems ITS AMAZING OMGOGOMGOMGOM
[Because if he found out she knew he would want to be involved.] omg they make such a good bonnie and clyde. OMG I SHOULD WRITE A FIC WHERE SCAM CONTEMPLATES MAKING SAM HIS OWN PERSONAL BONNIE, but they’d be so much better, because they wouldn’t be caught. Omg that will be the summary. Omg yay. I wish i could keep my eyes open right now otherwise i would be like “write this now **” to myself! :P
AHHHH SHE LOVES HIM SO MUCH OGMMOGMOGOMGOGOGMMOGMO
AHHHHHHH SHE KNOWS HE’S HER EQUAL OMGOMGOMGMO
[Mrs. Samantha Scam] MY DREAM NAME OMGOMGMOGOMG
[It had been too long, far too long loving him in secret and now she needed a life with him that would not be hindered by WOOHP's interruptions] – OMG YES I LOVE AN IDEAL WORLD WITHOUT WOOHP AHHHHH ADAM!
[Of carnage and revenge] = THAT SOUNDS SO SEXY OMG YOU DONT UNDERSTAND OMGOMGOMGOMGMOGMOGMOGMOMOG
Omg you know what other heat is missing? Cough hint. Ssc :P
["I need you Tim...God I need you so bad," she whispered, torn as she lay there yearning for her body in the place of her blanket.] omg that is such a coughmasturbationcough scene. Omg now i want to write one of those. Rated m obviously. Her thikning about him omgomgmogomgmogomgomgmog and he tends to taunt her and make her want it and get her all hot omg now im in the mood lolllll
[completely out of control] – thats hot :P
I definitely love the “you are him” mantra. I wanna write an abstract fic about it like how Sam is seeing how similar she is to Scam in the right circumstances and its scares her; oooh i like it. And i’ll give you and UI credit of courseeeee :P
[Sam grinned as she tapped the ring on her finger, a WOOHP gadget that Jerry had handed out that made one temporarily invisible and had forgotten to take back. And now he would be paying for his carelessness.] YES JERRY BASHING! :P
["And then maybe while we shop and then go catch a movie we can reconnect as friends," she thought, hoping that was how it would go because Alex and her both thought they all desperately needed bonding time. For some reason it felt like Sam was drifting farther and farther away from them and they didn't know why.] OMG KINDA-CLOVER BASHING TOO? BEST CHAPTER EVER! Jk :P (No Alex bashing though; Alex is too awesome :P)
[Watching Clover with an impassive face, Sam struggled to keep from raising a hand and bashing her skull in. How could she even think she would want to go shopping? That she would want to go out and buy things to make her happy, to please her when she was finally complete and content with her life now] OMGOMGMOGOMGMOGOM REALLLLL CLOVER BASHING AHHHHHHHHHHH YAYYYYYY TY :p
OMGOMGMOGOGMMOG I LOVEEEEEEEE HOW MUCH SAM HAS CHANGED OMGMOGMOGMOG :P
Omg scam and his sexy hands and his sexy self can do wahtever he wants to sam... (and kill the rest of woohp with his bare hands but that comes after)
OMG i love the “crazy mental or insane” part but you can FEEL Sam’s sanity dripping away and omgmogomgmogmogom its AMAZINGNGGGGGGGGGGGGG
[THEIR enemy; HER Tim] AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
GMO
MGO
MGO
MGO
GMO
OMG
MOGOMGMOGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGMOGM
OG
MOG
MOG
OMG
MOG
MOG
OMG
OGM
GOM
*BREATHE*
:P
Omgmogmgogo i love her adrenaline when she plants the bomb omgmogomgomgmogom
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHE SEES HIM AS HIS LIFE FORCE omgomgmog
Omg
Omgmog
Omg
Omg
Mog
Mog
Mogmogm
Og
Mog
For “sharing is caring” omg we should use a life force analogy omgfmogomgmog like they cant survive if the other dies or something and it grows wayyyyyy more intense than scam expected.
His instincts are **ing sexy thats what they never lie :P jk that made no sense im too hyper lmao :P
OGMOMGGOMMOGOMG YES
HE CAN HEAR HER THOUGHTS OMG HOW DID I FORGET THAT OMGMOGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGM DO YOU KNOW HOW SEXY THAT IS DURING SSC OMGOMGMOGOMGMOGMO im high.
["Sam no!" he found himself screaming as agony filled him. Sam didn't know all of WOOHP's security system. He knew she must have hacked into the WOOHP database and studied the blueprint but the core of WOOHP was no joke] OMGOMGOMGOMGOM HE CARES ABOUT HER SO MUCH OMGOMGOMGMOGMOGM
GMOG
MOGM
OG
MOGMOGOMGMOMGO
["I'll prove him wrong," Sam thought as she slipped under the final laser and kept moving forward. She would show him she was just like him and didn't come back empty-handed] OH NO SAM LISTEN TO SCAM YOU DUMB GIRL OMG (i’m so fickle lmao)
Im sick and tired of woohp’s interference as well. Sam’s got the right idea at least... :P
Omggggggggggggggg ** SHE GOT THE WRONG IDEA AT HIS SPEECHLESSNESS WITH THE “I LOVE YOU” CONFIRMATION DAMMIT SCAM GET HER OUT OF THERE AND sscherwithinaninchofherlife.
[She would die because she did this for HIM. To be near HIM without WOOHP getting in the way. "She did this for me..." he thought as he couldn't help but feel, for the first time in his life, awe for someone else. "She did it for me," he told himself, quickly realizing that this was the ultimate poof of her desire to please him, of the lengths she would go to. Doing something no on else would do, no on else would DARE to do, just to try and be relevant in eyes.] AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMGMOGOMGMOGMOGMOGMOGMOG HE REALIZES IT FOR REAL OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG
[Because Sam was his equal in every way. And she had proven that with all the certainty in the world today] YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OMGMOGMOGMOGOGMM THIS IS THE BEST NEWS EVER OMGMOGMOGMOGMOGMOGOMGOMG
[His counterpart,
his only equal] OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO
[And because he was too focused on Sam and getting her out of WOOHP he never noticed how his own body was slowly starting to go slack and become motionless] omg omg omg omg WHAT IS HAPPENING? :(
... holy ** HOLY ** THEY SWITCHED BODIES NOW OMGOMGOMOMGOMGOG and i actually forgot what happened after this but THAT MAKES IT EVEN MORE EXCITING BECAUSE I DIDNT SEE IT COMING BUT OMG YOU DESCRIBED IT SO WELL AND DID I MENTION HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS CHAPTE THANK YOUU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
Love,
A hyper Ivy :P
117Poison's IvySo omg OMGOMGOMGOMGMOGOMGMOGMOGMOGMO I LOVE UI SO MUCH .
omg
o
m
g
DO YOU UNDERSTAND MY EXCITEMENT?
because I am SO
so
so
very excited.
[She had been working all night. Ever since she had gotten back from meeting Tim she had spent every second working hard.] because this girl LITERALLY LIVES to please you. omg that's so **ing hot.
I want to write a slave fic. A fic where Scam is the master of Sam's actions, her Master, and he does it for so long that she ends up secretly being pleased with being submissive to him. omg.
[A quick grin forming on her lips Sam knew her discomfort was nothing when it came to the thought of Tim Scam.] OMG I LOVE IT WHEN SAM'S SMART.
omg.
[Like anesthesia,
and when he was on her mind...
She could feel no pain.] I LOVE THAT ANALOGY SO MUCH OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
OMG SHE SOUNDS SO EXCITED ABOUT WEAPONS JUST LIKE SCAM OMGMGOOMGOMGOMGMO
["He will love me..." Sam drawled out, grinning happily because she knew he would. Tim was a selfish man, a betrayer, a narcissist. "Then he just has to love me..."]
OMG. I LOVE THE SENTENCE: "She WAS Tim." that is the perfect sentence to describe Sam right now omgomgmogomgom
[ To her it felt like it was HIM, Tim Scam there in her hands, in her reach]OMGMOGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOM THATS SO HOT.
[Because this weapon made her think of her Tim. And he?
Was worth more to her than all the diamonds in the world.] AHHHHHH
[Being with Tim Scam...would be something indescribable] I like Sam so much right now. This makes up for her idiotness EVERYWHERE ELSE. :P
Omg i love how psychotic she seems ITS AMAZING OMGOGOMGOMGOM
[Because if he found out she knew he would want to be involved.] omg they make such a good bonnie and clyde. OMG I SHOULD WRITE A FIC WHERE SCAM CONTEMPLATES MAKING SAM HIS OWN PERSONAL BONNIE, but they’d be so much better, because they wouldn’t be caught. Omg that will be the summary. Omg yay. I wish i could keep my eyes open right now otherwise i would be like “write this now **” to myself! :P
AHHHH SHE LOVES HIM SO MUCH OGMMOGMOGOMGOGOGMMOGMO
AHHHHHHH SHE KNOWS HE’S HER EQUAL OMGOMGOMGMO
[Mrs. Samantha Scam] MY DREAM NAME OMGOMGMOGOMG
[It had been too long, far too long loving him in secret and now she needed a life with him that would not be hindered by WOOHP's interruptions] – OMG YES I LOVE AN IDEAL WORLD WITHOUT WOOHP AHHHHH ADAM!
[Of carnage and revenge] = THAT SOUNDS SO SEXY OMG YOU DONT UNDERSTAND OMGOMGOMGOMGMOGMOGMOGMOMOG
Omg you know what other heat is missing? Cough hint. Ssc :P
["I need you Tim...God I need you so bad," she whispered, torn as she lay there yearning for her body in the place of her blanket.] omg that is such a coughmasturbationcough scene. Omg now i want to write one of those. Rated m obviously. Her thikning about him omgomgmogomgmogomgomgmog and he tends to taunt her and make her want it and get her all hot omg now im in the mood lolllll
[completely out of control] – thats hot :P
I definitely love the “you are him” mantra. I wanna write an abstract fic about it like how Sam is seeing how similar she is to Scam in the right circumstances and its scares her; oooh i like it. And i’ll give you and UI credit of courseeeee :P
[Sam grinned as she tapped the ring on her finger, a WOOHP gadget that Jerry had handed out that made one temporarily invisible and had forgotten to take back. And now he would be paying for his carelessness.] YES JERRY BASHING! :P
["And then maybe while we shop and then go catch a movie we can reconnect as friends," she thought, hoping that was how it would go because Alex and her both thought they all desperately needed bonding time. For some reason it felt like Sam was drifting farther and farther away from them and they didn't know why.] OMG KINDA-CLOVER BASHING TOO? BEST CHAPTER EVER! Jk :P (No Alex bashing though; Alex is too awesome :P)
[Watching Clover with an impassive face, Sam struggled to keep from raising a hand and bashing her skull in. How could she even think she would want to go shopping? That she would want to go out and buy things to make her happy, to please her when she was finally complete and content with her life now] OMGOMGMOGOMGMOGOM REALLLLL CLOVER BASHING AHHHHHHHHHHH YAYYYYYY TY :p
OMGOMGMOGOGMMOG I LOVEEEEEEEE HOW MUCH SAM HAS CHANGED OMGMOGMOGMOG :P
Omg scam and his sexy hands and his sexy self can do wahtever he wants to sam... (and kill the rest of woohp with his bare hands but that comes after)
OMG i love the “crazy mental or insane” part but you can FEEL Sam’s sanity dripping away and omgmogomgmogmogom its AMAZINGNGGGGGGGGGGGGG
[THEIR enemy; HER Tim] AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
GMO
MGO
MGO
MGO
GMO
OMG
MOGOMGMOGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGMOGM
OG
MOG
MOG
OMG
MOG
MOG
OMG
OGM
GOM
*BREATHE*
:P
Omgmogmgogo i love her adrenaline when she plants the bomb omgmogomgomgmogom
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHE SEES HIM AS HIS LIFE FORCE omgomgmog
Omg
Omgmog
Omg
Omg
Mog
Mog
Mogmogm
Og
Mog
For “sharing is caring” omg we should use a life force analogy omgfmogomgmog like they cant survive if the other dies or something and it grows wayyyyyy more intense than scam expected.
His instincts are **ing sexy thats what they never lie :P jk that made no sense im too hyper lmao :P
OGMOMGGOMMOGOMG YES
HE CAN HEAR HER THOUGHTS OMG HOW DID I FORGET THAT OMGMOGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGM DO YOU KNOW HOW SEXY THAT IS DURING SSC OMGOMGMOGOMGMOGMO im high.
["Sam no!" he found himself screaming as agony filled him. Sam didn't know all of WOOHP's security system. He knew she must have hacked into the WOOHP database and studied the blueprint but the core of WOOHP was no joke] OMGOMGOMGOMGOM HE CARES ABOUT HER SO MUCH OMGOMGOMGMOGMOGM
GMOG
MOGM
OG
MOGMOGOMGMOMGO
["I'll prove him wrong," Sam thought as she slipped under the final laser and kept moving forward. She would show him she was just like him and didn't come back empty-handed] OH NO SAM LISTEN TO SCAM YOU DUMB GIRL OMG (i’m so fickle lmao)
Im sick and tired of woohp’s interference as well. Sam’s got the right idea at least... :P
Omggggggggggggggg ** SHE GOT THE WRONG IDEA AT HIS SPEECHLESSNESS WITH THE “I LOVE YOU” CONFIRMATION DAMMIT SCAM GET HER OUT OF THERE AND sscherwithinaninchofherlife.
[She would die because she did this for HIM. To be near HIM without WOOHP getting in the way. "She did this for me..." he thought as he couldn't help but feel, for the first time in his life, awe for someone else. "She did it for me," he told himself, quickly realizing that this was the ultimate poof of her desire to please him, of the lengths she would go to. Doing something no on else would do, no on else would DARE to do, just to try and be relevant in eyes.] AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMGMOGOMGMOGMOGMOGMOGMOG HE REALIZES IT FOR REAL OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG OGMOGOMGMOGOMGOMGOMGMOG
[Because Sam was his equal in every way. And she had proven that with all the certainty in the world today] YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OMGMOGMOGMOGOGMM THIS IS THE BEST NEWS EVER OMGMOGMOGMOGMOGMOGOMGOMG
[His counterpart,
his only equal] OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO OMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMO
[And because he was too focused on Sam and getting her out of WOOHP he never noticed how his own body was slowly starting to go slack and become motionless] omg omg omg omg WHAT IS HAPPENING? :(
... holy ** HOLY ** THEY SWITCHED BODIES NOW OMGOMGOMOMGOMGOG and i actually forgot what happened after this but THAT MAKES IT EVEN MORE EXCITING BECAUSE I DIDNT SEE IT COMING BUT OMG YOU DESCRIBED IT SO WELL AND DID I MENTION HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS CHAPTE THANK YOUU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
Love,
A hyper Ivy :P
9/10/2011 c20 AppleGirlin
Whaaaat? I thought I knew what was going to happen for a minute but then everything changed again! Please update soon.
Whaaaat? I thought I knew what was going to happen for a minute but then everything changed again! Please update soon.
9/9/2011 c20
3WolfGirlKickButt
You updated it!
I love it I hope Sam and Scam are both alright. At least Sam has Tim's body now.
3WolfGirlKickButtYou updated it!
I love it I hope Sam and Scam are both alright. At least Sam has Tim's body now.
