for Songs of the Dead12/5/2010 c8 
1Iceqbz
All of these song fics, are really great. Every single one almost brought tears to my eyes XD. They're really sad. The 8th one had some small, happyfulness, but much more sad. They're really great. I listened to the song while reading and seriously every single one fits in perfectly. "Too Late to Apologize - One Republic" The song finished right when I finished the last line. Now that was really emotional ;(. I hope you update soon :)
~Ice
1IceqbzAll of these song fics, are really great. Every single one almost brought tears to my eyes XD. They're really sad. The 8th one had some small, happyfulness, but much more sad. They're really great. I listened to the song while reading and seriously every single one fits in perfectly. "Too Late to Apologize - One Republic" The song finished right when I finished the last line. Now that was really emotional ;(. I hope you update soon :)
~Ice
11/14/2010 c8 4Mainn
These are fantastic. I really think you need to do more where ALex is cold and lethal and doesn't want to get out so badly. THis last one was my favorite. I look forward to more.
4MainnThese are fantastic. I really think you need to do more where ALex is cold and lethal and doesn't want to get out so badly. THis last one was my favorite. I look forward to more.
5/23/2009 c7 Sgt Andy McNab
A great idea and some wonderful songs aswell.
Have you thought of doing a song fic from K Units POV?
A great idea and some wonderful songs aswell.
Have you thought of doing a song fic from K Units POV?
3/14/2009 c7 randomness
i almost cried :'(
i almost cried :'(
3/6/2009 c7 10ToiletFacility
What the hell is everyone's problem? I was feeling lazy and couldn't be bothered reviewing but, SERIOUSLY? Why is everyone flaming you? This is an awesome, emotional story that made me exteremely sad... (in a good way.) I never thought Alex would be suicidal, but you portrayed him brilliantly. Anyway, I have seen far worse review-requests, and I didn't think there was anything at all wrong with yours. Good job, and don't let those other reviewers get to you.
10ToiletFacilityWhat the hell is everyone's problem? I was feeling lazy and couldn't be bothered reviewing but, SERIOUSLY? Why is everyone flaming you? This is an awesome, emotional story that made me exteremely sad... (in a good way.) I never thought Alex would be suicidal, but you portrayed him brilliantly. Anyway, I have seen far worse review-requests, and I didn't think there was anything at all wrong with yours. Good job, and don't let those other reviewers get to you.
3/6/2009 c7 9Lady Zarobiti
ok that button is totally not blue. haha. nice chapter- very dark and deep. i like how even in the end he was still trying to help others (talking to jack). great chapter though you did repeat your description once or twice (not same sentence but small identical phrases.)
9Lady Zarobitiok that button is totally not blue. haha. nice chapter- very dark and deep. i like how even in the end he was still trying to help others (talking to jack). great chapter though you did repeat your description once or twice (not same sentence but small identical phrases.)
6/19/2008 c5 17your knight in tinfoil armor
This one made me cry. I don't know why the others didn't but this one did. Maybe it's finally having Alex acknoledge what they took away from him.
~Dark
-jack-
17your knight in tinfoil armorThis one made me cry. I don't know why the others didn't but this one did. Maybe it's finally having Alex acknoledge what they took away from him.
~Dark
-jack-
5/15/2008 c6 15freakily obsessed Yassen fan
can i just say, i've been readin the other reviews and can't see what the huge problem is that others seem to have with your story. ok, you shouldn't have put in the A/N in the middle, but your writing is good and original. I really like this story and can't wait for the next update! try and put in a bit more detail, the last one was mostly lyrics. but so far so good!
PW
15freakily obsessed Yassen fancan i just say, i've been readin the other reviews and can't see what the huge problem is that others seem to have with your story. ok, you shouldn't have put in the A/N in the middle, but your writing is good and original. I really like this story and can't wait for the next update! try and put in a bit more detail, the last one was mostly lyrics. but so far so good!
PW
5/14/2008 c7 2sheluby94dreamer
Again, you confused me at the beginning. You probably don't want to hear this again, but too bad. Where's the detail? Where's the work where your reader knows you took the time and looked something up or went through and edited with more information again and again until it held enough information to keep the reader there?
2sheluby94dreamerAgain, you confused me at the beginning. You probably don't want to hear this again, but too bad. Where's the detail? Where's the work where your reader knows you took the time and looked something up or went through and edited with more information again and again until it held enough information to keep the reader there?
5/14/2008 c5 sheluby94dreamer
that's not very nice.
Number one, I don't care if you're the queen of Sheba you don't write that. You do realize that this is against the rules right? You said you're hard work?
Right... you barely wrote anything! Most of those chapters were mostly song lyrics. If you want my attention, then you better pipe up and grin and bare it. Trust me, you won't get anywhere with that attitude.
that's not very nice.
Number one, I don't care if you're the queen of Sheba you don't write that. You do realize that this is against the rules right? You said you're hard work?
Right... you barely wrote anything! Most of those chapters were mostly song lyrics. If you want my attention, then you better pipe up and grin and bare it. Trust me, you won't get anywhere with that attitude.
5/14/2008 c3 sheluby94dreamer
Now I'm confused. That's not a good thing for a reader to be confused. You are most likely going to lose readers this way, so I would be very careful...
Now I'm confused. That's not a good thing for a reader to be confused. You are most likely going to lose readers this way, so I would be very careful...
5/14/2008 c1 sheluby94dreamer
Oh jeez.
This part is very redundant.
"He was like a son to her. He reminded her of her son that had died so many years ago. She loved him like a son."
Okay, first off, duh if he was like a son to her she's going to love him like one.
Second off, what were you thinking to kill Alex especially in the first chapter? At the end of the story fine, but in the first chapter? He's the main character!
I'm going to read some more to see why you killed him, but that's pretty much it. Hopefully, it will get better.
Oh jeez.
This part is very redundant.
"He was like a son to her. He reminded her of her son that had died so many years ago. She loved him like a son."
Okay, first off, duh if he was like a son to her she's going to love him like one.
Second off, what were you thinking to kill Alex especially in the first chapter? At the end of the story fine, but in the first chapter? He's the main character!
I'm going to read some more to see why you killed him, but that's pretty much it. Hopefully, it will get better.
5/14/2008 c5 22Magna Parva
Ok. I'm reading this author's note you have here, and I'm thinking only TWO things.
1) ATTITUDE problem, and 2) GROW UP.
Oh, no. There's THREE things that come to mind actually.
3) Author's notes posted as sole chapters are against site regulations. I could report you for that.
You can't EXPECT people to review your story. And you can't expect them to do it STRAIGHT AWAY. It doesn't work like that. Here's how the deal REALLY works.
You write something, edit it, post it up. Wait a few days. Reviews start pouring in (hopefully) after the first day. Well, if the story's well written, that is.
If you post multiple chapters all on the same day, you have got to be retarded to assume that people are going to be quick to react to them.
Also, if you use textspeak, you lose readers. If you swear, or somehow insult people in your chapters, you lose readers. If the plotline is cheesy/overdone/crap/undeveloped, you lose readers.
Another point - the Alex Rider fandom isn't that large a one. What does that mean? Let me tell you. Less fanfics mean less readers and less reviewers. Well, unless you're as brilliant as amitai - she's got a gazillion readers! If you were to post somewhere else, however, such as Harry Potter, you would receive a larger review count.
So, really, what I'm saying is, if you're not getting any reviews, IT'S ALL YOUR OWN FAULT. You need to grow up, cool your attitude and be more polite. Improve your writing and try thinking about what your readers might like to see instead of just pleasing yourself.
~ KJ
22Magna ParvaOk. I'm reading this author's note you have here, and I'm thinking only TWO things.
1) ATTITUDE problem, and 2) GROW UP.
Oh, no. There's THREE things that come to mind actually.
3) Author's notes posted as sole chapters are against site regulations. I could report you for that.
You can't EXPECT people to review your story. And you can't expect them to do it STRAIGHT AWAY. It doesn't work like that. Here's how the deal REALLY works.
You write something, edit it, post it up. Wait a few days. Reviews start pouring in (hopefully) after the first day. Well, if the story's well written, that is.
If you post multiple chapters all on the same day, you have got to be retarded to assume that people are going to be quick to react to them.
Also, if you use textspeak, you lose readers. If you swear, or somehow insult people in your chapters, you lose readers. If the plotline is cheesy/overdone/crap/undeveloped, you lose readers.
Another point - the Alex Rider fandom isn't that large a one. What does that mean? Let me tell you. Less fanfics mean less readers and less reviewers. Well, unless you're as brilliant as amitai - she's got a gazillion readers! If you were to post somewhere else, however, such as Harry Potter, you would receive a larger review count.
So, really, what I'm saying is, if you're not getting any reviews, IT'S ALL YOUR OWN FAULT. You need to grow up, cool your attitude and be more polite. Improve your writing and try thinking about what your readers might like to see instead of just pleasing yourself.
~ KJ