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6/17 c13 PSay
This is a good chapter. I'm glad Harry only has to stay at the Dursley's for 2 weeks. That is more than enough. I look forward to part 2. pms
6/16 c9 PSay
Hagrid and his dragon. They handled things well but without the cloak when they came down from the tower Filch caught them. Now they have to go to the forest with Malfoy of all people. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
6/16 c8 PSay
This would be a very hard thing to explain to parents. Hermione basically said that she really likes Harry and he likes her and she wants her parents to meet him. Explaining about the bond is not going to go well when we are talking about an 11 year old boy and a 12 year old girl. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms
6/16 c7 PSay
This is similar but different. The bond makes all the difference. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
6/16 c6 PSay
Things are moving right along. The Quidditch game went well. Hermione did what she did in the movie. I like that scene. Of course they are learning more and more about the mystery on the 3rd floor. I look forward to more of this story. pms
6/16 c5 PSay
I'm really glad you are including Neville in these adventures. He and Ron together stopped the Troll. That was very well done. Thanks for writing. pms
6/16 c4 PSay
I'm so glad to see Neville included in their adventure instead of trying to stop them and getting petrified. Harry and Hermione want to help Neville. Ron probably won't help. I look forward to what happens next. pms
6/15 c3 PSay
Ok. The manipulations are beginning. Dumbledore is trying to control the bond as it develops. That could have bad repercussions. I look forward to more of this story. pms
6/15 c2 PSay
This is progressing really fast. I'm glad Harry and Hermione are comfortable with this so far. I was surprised in a way that they were so open with the Headmaster and Professor McGonagal. I look forward to more of this story. pms
6/15 c1 PSay
This is a really different beginning. It seems Harry had two girls he could have bonded with but Hermione is the one that he ended up choosing. I'm glad he spent the trip with Neville and Ron too. It is a great beginning of friendship between them all. Thanks for writing. pms
5/29 c2 eldron
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5/25 c13 Guest
Awesome! Make part2 plz!
4/13 c1 Eternal Downfall
Why is Hermione scared of the name Voldemort, she's a muggle-born.
3/4 c13 Kalladin1989
Awesome story. Love it. Always enjoy a great h/hr story.
2/20 c5 bobcox26
I agree with Runecutter plus Ron is no better then the Dursleys and Draco as he is a bully, lazy, bigit ect
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