for I'm Not That Girl12/26/2012 c1 
4Sweetly Sour Roses
Thats sweet, its like a love triangle, but Daisy is the only onein the story who can only love and not be loved in return
4Sweetly Sour RosesThats sweet, its like a love triangle, but Daisy is the only onein the story who can only love and not be loved in return
7/6/2011 c1 888Hawki
Well, if it's any consolation Daisy, I'm sure Pauline feels the same way. ;)
Anyway, this does seem to work in form, though analyzing songfics isn't really in my realm of expertise. In terms of content...well, I can see it working sort of, though to be frank, I've often found 'Super Mario' characters to be restricted in personality. Still, it does highlight the fact that Mario saved Daisy before Peach, yet this wasn't followed up on effectively.
888HawkiWell, if it's any consolation Daisy, I'm sure Pauline feels the same way. ;)
Anyway, this does seem to work in form, though analyzing songfics isn't really in my realm of expertise. In terms of content...well, I can see it working sort of, though to be frank, I've often found 'Super Mario' characters to be restricted in personality. Still, it does highlight the fact that Mario saved Daisy before Peach, yet this wasn't followed up on effectively.
9/7/2009 c1 Luna Goddess of the Night
oh wow, nice angst. i hope you write up new fics soon! i would love to read them!
-luna
p.s.
new sailor moon fic out now, sailor moon: street racing. check it out when you can, k?
oh wow, nice angst. i hope you write up new fics soon! i would love to read them!
-luna
p.s.
new sailor moon fic out now, sailor moon: street racing. check it out when you can, k?
5/26/2009 c1 153candelight
Oh...that is so cute...and it puts a brand new light on both characters. Cool job.
153candelightOh...that is so cute...and it puts a brand new light on both characters. Cool job.
6/18/2008 c1 20Im-On-A-Roll
Okay, I love Daisy, I love Wicked, and I LOVE this song, but I don't think it's fair that the hotter princess has to be the jealous one! I also don't seem to remember Daisy ever having a thing for Mario. I love the way this is written, I just don't like that Daisy is jealous of Peach.
However, it's a coincidence that you wrote a story about Daisy being jealous of Peach and I wrote a story about Peach being jealous of Daisy. If you haven't yet, please read "The Princess Ball", written by yours truly, and find out what I mean.
20Im-On-A-RollOkay, I love Daisy, I love Wicked, and I LOVE this song, but I don't think it's fair that the hotter princess has to be the jealous one! I also don't seem to remember Daisy ever having a thing for Mario. I love the way this is written, I just don't like that Daisy is jealous of Peach.
However, it's a coincidence that you wrote a story about Daisy being jealous of Peach and I wrote a story about Peach being jealous of Daisy. If you haven't yet, please read "The Princess Ball", written by yours truly, and find out what I mean.
6/9/2008 c1 34Walkazo
You have a way with taking the unbeaten path when it comes to characters... Or however that metaphor goes XP
I've actually never really considered Daisy's feelings if she DID like Mario, mostly I just think of their post-SML relationship as a fling (at most), shame at me for not thinking outside the box! And kudos to you for doing it yourself.
34WalkazoYou have a way with taking the unbeaten path when it comes to characters... Or however that metaphor goes XP
I've actually never really considered Daisy's feelings if she DID like Mario, mostly I just think of their post-SML relationship as a fling (at most), shame at me for not thinking outside the box! And kudos to you for doing it yourself.
5/9/2008 c1 22Twanny Bizzle
HA! 'bout time you got an account! Nice story. I can't wait to see more!
~Later & Out
22Twanny BizzleHA! 'bout time you got an account! Nice story. I can't wait to see more!
~Later & Out