for Lost in love3/4 c6 Kristine
I think you do geate just keep going like that;). i hoe the next chapter soon will comemaybe in this week nor next week i'll be whatching your storto the very end ;).
I think you do geate just keep going like that;). i hoe the next chapter soon will comemaybe in this week nor next week i'll be whatching your storto the very end ;).
3/2 c5 Kristine
Please Continue The story PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EASE don't let it end here please keep going on the story PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! X'D.
Please Continue The story PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EASE don't let it end here please keep going on the story PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! X'D.
10/3/2010 c1 
1Aya El maghrabi
That was very good i read this story 3 times and i hope u update very soon
1Aya El maghrabiThat was very good i read this story 3 times and i hope u update very soon
9/18/2010 c6 aya mohamed
i loved this story very much please update soon i cant wait to know what will happend next
i loved this story very much please update soon i cant wait to know what will happend next
8/16/2010 c6 aya mohamed
This was a great Please, type the next chapter
This was a great Please, type the next chapter
11/13/2009 c6 13CrimsonZero
Woww... I felt really bad for Tea... I'm glad she's in good hands, at last! As for your grammar, it isn't too horrible. I always feel grammar is something one has to keep practicing with. The more ya use it, the more proficient you'll become, I think. But, honestly, I don't really see anything wrong.
I'm really curious on this "feeling" Atem has... I wonder what's gonna happen! I'm eager to read your next chapter! Also, I like Mana. She seems very bubbly, LOL.
13CrimsonZeroWoww... I felt really bad for Tea... I'm glad she's in good hands, at last! As for your grammar, it isn't too horrible. I always feel grammar is something one has to keep practicing with. The more ya use it, the more proficient you'll become, I think. But, honestly, I don't really see anything wrong.
I'm really curious on this "feeling" Atem has... I wonder what's gonna happen! I'm eager to read your next chapter! Also, I like Mana. She seems very bubbly, LOL.
11/7/2009 c6 The Fandom
Another great chapter. can't wait to read more.
Another great chapter. can't wait to read more.
11/4/2009 c6 12fantasia-49
yeah they see each other i'm happy! and atem what you feel it is so much love for her so be quick to understand that lol
it was amazing and i don't think they are so mistake with your grammar but i'm not so good too so...
i will wait to read more chapter!
12fantasia-49yeah they see each other i'm happy! and atem what you feel it is so much love for her so be quick to understand that lol
it was amazing and i don't think they are so mistake with your grammar but i'm not so good too so...
i will wait to read more chapter!
11/3/2009 c6 9Master of Death and Darkness
Another nice chapter. And I really didn't want to sound like a bad critic about your grammar. But if you want, I could help you a bit. Several people actually call me a Grammar Nazi since I keep trying to fix spelling errors. xP
9Master of Death and DarknessAnother nice chapter. And I really didn't want to sound like a bad critic about your grammar. But if you want, I could help you a bit. Several people actually call me a Grammar Nazi since I keep trying to fix spelling errors. xP
11/3/2009 c6 2Atem's Sister Atea
Don't worry about it! As long as you updated, we're all okay with it!
Dang! Atem had to wake up before SUNRISE to train with Mahad? YIKES!
Oh! I'm sensing love here! Atem and Teana are SO falling for each other! I give it at LEAST 5 chapters before they confess their undying love to each other!
You're looking for a new beta reader? I'll be happy to be your beta! If you're interested of course.
Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!
2Atem's Sister AteaDon't worry about it! As long as you updated, we're all okay with it!
Dang! Atem had to wake up before SUNRISE to train with Mahad? YIKES!
Oh! I'm sensing love here! Atem and Teana are SO falling for each other! I give it at LEAST 5 chapters before they confess their undying love to each other!
You're looking for a new beta reader? I'll be happy to be your beta! If you're interested of course.
Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!
11/2/2009 c5 1ichika7walkure
Oh... the story is getting interesting! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!...XD... Though, it was a waste that the original version of this chapter was deleted. Even still, this version is good! :D
1ichika7walkureOh... the story is getting interesting! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!...XD... Though, it was a waste that the original version of this chapter was deleted. Even still, this version is good! :D
10/31/2009 c5 The Fandom
Very good. Update soon.
Very good. Update soon.