for Thou Art to Me A Delicious Torment7/22/2010 c1 Kaci
Another amazing story. I wish you would write a whole book! I don't care what the story is. As long as you write it, I'll read it. Seriously, you're very talented, so please, write more!
Beautifully written.
Another amazing story. I wish you would write a whole book! I don't care what the story is. As long as you write it, I'll read it. Seriously, you're very talented, so please, write more!
Beautifully written.
4/13/2009 c1 
13lou-thewriter
I truly enjoyed this story. It was simply, and yet the writing was sophisticated. This was great work and I enjoy reading more of your writing.
13lou-thewriterI truly enjoyed this story. It was simply, and yet the writing was sophisticated. This was great work and I enjoy reading more of your writing.
5/25/2008 c1 Guest
VERY nice. very well-done.
VERY nice. very well-done.
5/23/2008 c1 2NonTwilightAlice
Very misleading until the very end. First I thought that it was Edward and Bella, then Jasper and Alice (blond hair). I didn't even think of Esme and Carlisle until his name was said.
Good work and a unique style.
2NonTwilightAliceVery misleading until the very end. First I thought that it was Edward and Bella, then Jasper and Alice (blond hair). I didn't even think of Esme and Carlisle until his name was said.
Good work and a unique style.
5/23/2008 c1 An LOTR Freak
*hands you a plate* cute. very cute.
*hands you a plate* cute. very cute.
5/23/2008 c1 Master Hamco
I have just one thing to say:
aww...how sweet...
Excellent job. Very well done. Thank you.
I have just one thing to say:
aww...how sweet...
Excellent job. Very well done. Thank you.