for Umi9/15/2012 c1 Nicola
This anime (and pairing, in my opinion!) needs more love! As I liked this a lot, you should be someone to keep writing!
I understood the Japenese, but some people might not...Plus the fact that no-one wanted to know where they where? Could've had some great fun with that...CoughTomamasacough!
This anime (and pairing, in my opinion!) needs more love! As I liked this a lot, you should be someone to keep writing!
I understood the Japenese, but some people might not...Plus the fact that no-one wanted to know where they where? Could've had some great fun with that...CoughTomamasacough!
11/1/2008 c1 sakR9
RUN ON SENTENCE OVERLOAD!
And... well the punctuation was perfect. I hate it when transliteration of Japanese is added in instead of plain english. it's unecessary... The kiss was compeltely out of no where? glad it happened though , hehehe.
Otherwise it had good setting, okay description... :) keep at it!
RUN ON SENTENCE OVERLOAD!
And... well the punctuation was perfect. I hate it when transliteration of Japanese is added in instead of plain english. it's unecessary... The kiss was compeltely out of no where? glad it happened though , hehehe.
Otherwise it had good setting, okay description... :) keep at it!
7/25/2008 c1 SodaFlavoredCheese
I LOVE THIS STORY! It was very very Kawaii! ♥
Yorihisa/Akane is my very favorite couple in Harukanaru Toki no Naka De! :D
I LOVE THIS STORY! It was very very Kawaii! ♥
Yorihisa/Akane is my very favorite couple in Harukanaru Toki no Naka De! :D