for Vampire's Kiss4/23/2012 c16 Petite Pixie524
If you take a break between updating chapters, you may want to do a recap or something at the beginning to remind us what's happened so far/recently. Good story though
If you take a break between updating chapters, you may want to do a recap or something at the beginning to remind us what's happened so far/recently. Good story though
4/22/2012 c16 
10xXxXxRoxasFanGirlxXxXx
... Major writers block hmmm ... is that the reason? Oh well It was a good chapter, and your poll is really pointless. You instinctively want the Happy ending so ... ^^ oh well. Happy writing hopefully~!
10xXxXxRoxasFanGirlxXxXx... Major writers block hmmm ... is that the reason? Oh well It was a good chapter, and your poll is really pointless. You instinctively want the Happy ending so ... ^^ oh well. Happy writing hopefully~!
4/21/2012 c14 xXxXxRoxasFanGirlxXxXx
Dear Review Whore,
I Have re-read your story due to your request. (Grumbles, she made me do it.) And I Like it a lot.(Love it more like *Fangirl squeal*)So update it finally. (*sigh*) Also I have a present for you. (*giggles on the inside*) Here you go. *Gives you a gagged and bound Itachi* Enjoy. (Bu Bye)
Roxy~! *kisses*
Dear Review Whore,
I Have re-read your story due to your request. (Grumbles, she made me do it.) And I Like it a lot.(Love it more like *Fangirl squeal*)So update it finally. (*sigh*) Also I have a present for you. (*giggles on the inside*) Here you go. *Gives you a gagged and bound Itachi* Enjoy. (Bu Bye)
Roxy~! *kisses*
2/5/2012 c15 matsujun
I'm confused... is iachi good or bad? I totally cRided when iruka and jiraiya said they would kill him...! : ( PLEASE CONTINUE... PLEASE I AM DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
I'm confused... is iachi good or bad? I totally cRided when iruka and jiraiya said they would kill him...! : ( PLEASE CONTINUE... PLEASE I AM DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
8/8/2011 c15 baby-A
really love your store
really love your store
7/31/2011 c15 16Through Darkness and Light
I couldn't find any big mistakes or anything. you really took your time to make sure everything was correct. The only problem I had in the middle and towards the end was that it was sometimes unclear who was saying what and I thought that the sentences that came after the dialogue were really short, harshly to the point. As if you were going to add something and instead just stopped the sentence right there.
I'm glad you've gotten rid of your writer's block and I'm sorry that I've been so busy lately. Things should settle down after the move and with the time difference changing to a minimum (the difference will only be two hours) we can probably find more time to rp =)
16Through Darkness and LightI couldn't find any big mistakes or anything. you really took your time to make sure everything was correct. The only problem I had in the middle and towards the end was that it was sometimes unclear who was saying what and I thought that the sentences that came after the dialogue were really short, harshly to the point. As if you were going to add something and instead just stopped the sentence right there.
I'm glad you've gotten rid of your writer's block and I'm sorry that I've been so busy lately. Things should settle down after the move and with the time difference changing to a minimum (the difference will only be two hours) we can probably find more time to rp =)
7/26/2011 c6 1StraightLineStitchxD
Whoa, the last part. Only thing running through my mind now is 'Ohshitohshitohsit.'
Overall I enjoy your story.
1StraightLineStitchxDWhoa, the last part. Only thing running through my mind now is 'Ohshitohshitohsit.'
Overall I enjoy your story.