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2/19/2012 c1 30Frodo's sister
This is a good story.
12/12/2010 c1 48Jacal Ste. Worme
Like this! It's so cool! SEQUEL! xD
12/18/2008 c1 18ibelieveintruelove
Hahaha very far from a brother! lol That was cute! Peter was being all moody, and I liked that Caspian stepped up when Peter felt too guilty to. Nice job!
6/26/2008 c1 1heathenrespite
This was perfect! I can imagine the scene quite clearly in my mind...
6/21/2008 c1 2Kat-Princess-Kitty
I loved your take on the story!

It would be great if you could fill in the other blank spaces with Susan and Caspian.
6/20/2008 c1 124Casa Circe
Another very satisfying one-shot. Again, you captured the characters superbly, especially describing the tension that followed the unsuccessful attack on the castle. I like how Susan talked about her brothers and how you mentioned the "surviving on apples alone" part of the book. And I just love the last line. You are good at this.
6/12/2008 c1 Suspian Forever
AWESOME!
6/9/2008 c1 ScarletCanarii
Aww poo, did you have to end it there? :( You so have to continue this, doll!
6/9/2008 c1 52mistressbabette51
Very nice missing scene. Excellent character development in just these few pages. Aww, Susan, we know, we know!:D
6/9/2008 c1 18jichulets
nice...and left me wanting more!
6/4/2008 c1 SqueeFest
u HAVE to continue this. if u don't, ill wound u.
6/3/2008 c1 2Rishtalak
Nice. I always enjoy reading interlude fics. It fleshes out the movie for us fans, since the movie couldn't put every little thing in.

Just a thought, but would a companion fic to this piece be possible in the future? You're a good writer, and I can never get enough from the really good writers.
6/3/2008 c1 5GirlxWithxThexWorldxOfxChances
I love the end very good
6/3/2008 c1 Crimson-Kiss17
Adorable and more than worthy of an epilogue, perhaps?
6/3/2008 c1 1JemiSmitchie4ever20
aw hot cute!
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