for Ouran High School & Fruits Basket7/10/2010 c5 RisingAngel07
woaw..Kyo and Kyoya uwahhh hard choice .! ^-^ ooohhh but I dont mind either one! ^-^ :p hahah :v
woaw..Kyo and Kyoya uwahhh hard choice .! ^-^ ooohhh but I dont mind either one! ^-^ :p hahah :v
1/17/2010 c13 OuranOtaku99
Your fanfic is awesome but I noticed one thing when Hatori was leaving the theatre I think you called Hunny Momiji. I'm not mocking you sometimes I do that! Anyways please keep writing! :D ~OuranOtaku99
Your fanfic is awesome but I noticed one thing when Hatori was leaving the theatre I think you called Hunny Momiji. I'm not mocking you sometimes I do that! Anyways please keep writing! :D ~OuranOtaku99
9/21/2009 c1 
5Echowish
Its good so far. Ohayou and arigatou have u's at the end. And I'm not sure if you know this so incase you don't and you want to know welcome home is okaiarinasai I think that's how you spell it. Well thats all I had to say so keep up the good work!
5EchowishIts good so far. Ohayou and arigatou have u's at the end. And I'm not sure if you know this so incase you don't and you want to know welcome home is okaiarinasai I think that's how you spell it. Well thats all I had to say so keep up the good work!
8/9/2009 c13 12Ariana-tan
Um, I would just like to point out a few things...
1) 7 yen is the equivalent of 7 cents. $7 would be 700 yen...
2) When you wrote "Bye, Hatori-chan!" in Chapter 13, you said that Momiji said that, but Momiji wasn't there - it was Hunny who said it, I believe...
However, overall, it was really, really good.
12Ariana-tanUm, I would just like to point out a few things...
1) 7 yen is the equivalent of 7 cents. $7 would be 700 yen...
2) When you wrote "Bye, Hatori-chan!" in Chapter 13, you said that Momiji said that, but Momiji wasn't there - it was Hunny who said it, I believe...
However, overall, it was really, really good.
7/10/2009 c13 pandazrule
This is an AWESOME story! PLZ keep it up! I read the entier story in one go! Best OC i've seen in a long time!
This is an AWESOME story! PLZ keep it up! I read the entier story in one go! Best OC i've seen in a long time!
3/29/2009 c12 8DreamWalker18
AKIRA-CHAN CHAN! SO CUTE! ITS GONNA BE TAMAi-CHAN ISN'T IT! AHA! I KNEW IT~! I TOLD U SO! IT CANT BE KYO HE'S THE CHARACTER THAT'S ME BUT I CAN'T REMEMBER HER NAME (looks up name) ASAMI! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! CHAPPIE 6! YES ok now u hav 2 update its spring break so its a must got it? lol jkjk luv ya! C JU 2MORO OR I KILL U... WIT MY BIG SWORD... THINGY!
8DreamWalker18AKIRA-CHAN CHAN! SO CUTE! ITS GONNA BE TAMAi-CHAN ISN'T IT! AHA! I KNEW IT~! I TOLD U SO! IT CANT BE KYO HE'S THE CHARACTER THAT'S ME BUT I CAN'T REMEMBER HER NAME (looks up name) ASAMI! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! CHAPPIE 6! YES ok now u hav 2 update its spring break so its a must got it? lol jkjk luv ya! C JU 2MORO OR I KILL U... WIT MY BIG SWORD... THINGY!
11/21/2008 c11 SnOw-CoVeReD-AnGeL
I like it nice plot...Its obvious its a Kyo x Oc fic right? LoL I'm gonna laugh at my own stupidity if its not Gomen..LoL well nice story AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON NOW PLEASE T.T Ja-Ne!
I like it nice plot...Its obvious its a Kyo x Oc fic right? LoL I'm gonna laugh at my own stupidity if its not Gomen..LoL well nice story AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON NOW PLEASE T.T Ja-Ne!
11/20/2008 c11 17Freezing Ember
Aw... That's kinda sad. The ending, I mean.
...Next time mom feeds me string beans, I'm gonna squirt one at her. XD
17Freezing EmberAw... That's kinda sad. The ending, I mean.
...Next time mom feeds me string beans, I'm gonna squirt one at her. XD