6/23/2008 c1 1Aligirl70
I know that you want people to read your story but when you put it on fanfiction under twilight most people are just going to read twilight fanfic... But what you can do to get people to read it is go to Sign up on there then put your story in... They have a section called original fandoms you could post it there and get more people to read it! Thats just some friendly advise...

Ok so my review on your story it's really interesting...keep going!