for From the Stars9/22/2012 c3 
4JAB9689
your story is fun to read and is different from others making it fresh and unique. update soon
4JAB9689your story is fun to read and is different from others making it fresh and unique. update soon
8/13/2010 c3 1Heise
Awww. It kept me smiiiling! LOL!
I love the weird stuff that Orihime comes up with. xDD Bring that back again!
1HeiseAwww. It kept me smiiiling! LOL!
I love the weird stuff that Orihime comes up with. xDD Bring that back again!
10/23/2009 c3 2Mysticbreez
Are you ever gonna update this again? =O
And lol at Yachiru and Orihime... xD
2MysticbreezAre you ever gonna update this again? =O
And lol at Yachiru and Orihime... xD
4/25/2009 c3 37Bullet in the Brainpan- Squish
-Bows deeply-
Kitsuru-nee-chan, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story. I was giggling through it all. It's perfect!
37Bullet in the Brainpan- Squish-Bows deeply-
Kitsuru-nee-chan, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story. I was giggling through it all. It's perfect!
2/7/2009 c3 adsf
its been awhile since i read something this funny keep up the good work
its been awhile since i read something this funny keep up the good work
1/5/2009 c3 Knight of shadow
I like it It has a happy light hearted feel that makes me WANT MORE. However when you conisder when it was first posted it seems unlike it will be finished soon but still please update it.
I like it It has a happy light hearted feel that makes me WANT MORE. However when you conisder when it was first posted it seems unlike it will be finished soon but still please update it.
1/3/2009 c3 45grandiloquentCaecity
Lol, loved it! It was fabulous and utterly hilarious! I really wanna read more! And I loved this line “Yachiru-neechan, you really shouldn’t try to eat people! They might not like it!”. ANyway, PLEASE update soon!
45grandiloquentCaecityLol, loved it! It was fabulous and utterly hilarious! I really wanna read more! And I loved this line “Yachiru-neechan, you really shouldn’t try to eat people! They might not like it!”. ANyway, PLEASE update soon!
12/29/2008 c3 1copperheadfightingninja
Omg, I love this. This chapter got even better! I'm so glad you updated. Like seriously. This story is getting better and better and I can't wait till the next one but wait...? You already have the next one on LJ?
*rushes to livejournal*
great story! 5 kudos! I hope you update soon!
-copperheadfightingninja
1copperheadfightingninjaOmg, I love this. This chapter got even better! I'm so glad you updated. Like seriously. This story is getting better and better and I can't wait till the next one but wait...? You already have the next one on LJ?
*rushes to livejournal*
great story! 5 kudos! I hope you update soon!
-copperheadfightingninja
12/29/2008 c3 19Darth Hawk 32
I like it. Very funny. Just a bit of criticism though: there are points in your writing where I'd suggest writing simpler. Surprisingly enough it actually helps the writing if you do that.
For example:
Change: Karin would only cook, in her own words, if the world were ending and Yuzu had lost all sense of taste and memory of her past ventures in the kitchen.
To: Karin would only cook if, in her own words, the world were ending and Yuzu had lost all sense of taste and memories of ever cooking before. (Or something to that extent).
Really the point of a writer is to be as invisible as possible, not to overwork the ethos. Or, in other words, sound smart by using too complicated language. Fiction is best when the sentences are as complicated as they need to be, but are as simple as they can be.
Hope that helped.
19Darth Hawk 32I like it. Very funny. Just a bit of criticism though: there are points in your writing where I'd suggest writing simpler. Surprisingly enough it actually helps the writing if you do that.
For example:
Change: Karin would only cook, in her own words, if the world were ending and Yuzu had lost all sense of taste and memory of her past ventures in the kitchen.
To: Karin would only cook if, in her own words, the world were ending and Yuzu had lost all sense of taste and memories of ever cooking before. (Or something to that extent).
Really the point of a writer is to be as invisible as possible, not to overwork the ethos. Or, in other words, sound smart by using too complicated language. Fiction is best when the sentences are as complicated as they need to be, but are as simple as they can be.
Hope that helped.
12/28/2008 c3 4m o o g l e d a i m e
Hee, poor poor Ichigo. I won't be surprised if by the end of this story the sisters will drive him crazy. （≧∇≦）ノ
4m o o g l e d a i m eHee, poor poor Ichigo. I won't be surprised if by the end of this story the sisters will drive him crazy. （≧∇≦）ノ
12/27/2008 c2 1copperheadfightingninja
OMG. kon...Kon...KoN...KON! HAHAHAAHA *falls out of chair and hits the floor* ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUS? *rolls all over the floor* That was spectacular! I'm still laughing! PERFECT! You have a sense of humor that really and I mean REALLY amuses me! But great..great..great. I can't wait for the next chapter!
-copperheadfightingninja
1copperheadfightingninjaOMG. kon...Kon...KoN...KON! HAHAHAAHA *falls out of chair and hits the floor* ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUS? *rolls all over the floor* That was spectacular! I'm still laughing! PERFECT! You have a sense of humor that really and I mean REALLY amuses me! But great..great..great. I can't wait for the next chapter!
-copperheadfightingninja
12/27/2008 c1 copperheadfightingninja
i love this, kitsuru. It's awesome. The line "pervert-san" had me CRACKING me up. Omg, I love it. Haha, it's awesome. (have i already said that?) Anywho, nice first chapter. I see that there is a second one and I'm rushing off to that one now. *rushing as she speaks*
-copperheadfightingninja
i love this, kitsuru. It's awesome. The line "pervert-san" had me CRACKING me up. Omg, I love it. Haha, it's awesome. (have i already said that?) Anywho, nice first chapter. I see that there is a second one and I'm rushing off to that one now. *rushing as she speaks*
-copperheadfightingninja