for Velocizompire Apocalypse10/25/2009 c1 
91Lothithil
LOL! Very clever! The line about the antique bicycles, velocipedes, and knitting made me howl with delight! Well done!
-Lothi
91LothithilLOL! Very clever! The line about the antique bicycles, velocipedes, and knitting made me howl with delight! Well done!
-Lothi
9/3/2009 c1 17TheShadowArchitect
and ya know what? I can actually see a velocizompire army comeing through the Gate...
17TheShadowArchitectand ya know what? I can actually see a velocizompire army comeing through the Gate...
5/30/2009 c1 6Crimson and Chrome 42
You can't shoot zombies, it just ** 'em off. I really liked this one, I'd love to read more in this vein.
6Crimson and Chrome 42You can't shoot zombies, it just ** 'em off. I really liked this one, I'd love to read more in this vein.
10/22/2008 c1 35Churnok
It's almost scary where Jack's mind goes when he's not saving the world. Where is this velocizompire website?
Why is Mac at the SGC? I feel like there is a story there that I'm missing. This is an amusing side story though. Particularly the end.
35ChurnokIt's almost scary where Jack's mind goes when he's not saving the world. Where is this velocizompire website?
Why is Mac at the SGC? I feel like there is a story there that I'm missing. This is an amusing side story though. Particularly the end.
9/28/2008 c1 7kittn
Great fic! Was that last bit a nod to "Stitches"? 'Cuz that would be fantastic!
I really wish I'd found these sooner. They're hilarious! I hope you post more!
7kittnGreat fic! Was that last bit a nod to "Stitches"? 'Cuz that would be fantastic!
I really wish I'd found these sooner. They're hilarious! I hope you post more!
9/11/2008 c1 34MacBedh
Ow! Hysterical!
“Better not let people hear you using words that size . . . They might figure out how smart you really are.”
And the bicycle. Beautiful. Lothi recommended you to me; I should have followed up sooner!
Beth
34MacBedhOw! Hysterical!
“Better not let people hear you using words that size . . . They might figure out how smart you really are.”
And the bicycle. Beautiful. Lothi recommended you to me; I should have followed up sooner!
Beth
9/5/2008 c1 18Destiny JoRayne Adams
I have to admit, I know nothing of Stargate, it was the 'MacGyver' in your summerary that got me.
As for Mac, I thought you did a great job in fitting his character and his personality.
Good job!
Desi
18Destiny JoRayne AdamsI have to admit, I know nothing of Stargate, it was the 'MacGyver' in your summerary that got me.
As for Mac, I thought you did a great job in fitting his character and his personality.
Good job!
Desi
9/1/2008 c1 23CubsKing
OK, I can see the zombie raptors, but I don't see how they'd become vampires at the same time... No matter, though. I loved the ending :-D
23CubsKingOK, I can see the zombie raptors, but I don't see how they'd become vampires at the same time... No matter, though. I loved the ending :-D
6/12/2008 c1 13memyselfandi89
ROTFL! OMG That is hilarious! I just about choked myself to death on my Mac 'n Cheese I was laughing so hard!
13memyselfandi89ROTFL! OMG That is hilarious! I just about choked myself to death on my Mac 'n Cheese I was laughing so hard!