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5kitty materia princess
This is a very interesting and very well put oneshot collection. I wonder why only a few people faved this. I hope you update this soon. Or kindda give this some closure. :)
5kitty materia princessThis is a very interesting and very well put oneshot collection. I wonder why only a few people faved this. I hope you update this soon. Or kindda give this some closure. :)
12/15/2009 c4 Apath Angel
Dear Lord.
That chapter was adorable.
I will continue to read more, so you keep updating.
Dear Lord.
That chapter was adorable.
I will continue to read more, so you keep updating.
9/14/2009 c9 23serenbach
I think your observation of Vincent as not being very devoted is fair as the others were suprised in the game when he came back at the end- but he did come back and that's the main thing, I guess. I like how you portrayed him as being suprised at the fact he DOES care for them.
Also, this line was awesome- 'Yuffie, why do you wear any clothing? I want a booty call.’ Hopefully Square Enix will make him actually say that at some point! *wishful thinking*
Loved it! :)
23serenbachI think your observation of Vincent as not being very devoted is fair as the others were suprised in the game when he came back at the end- but he did come back and that's the main thing, I guess. I like how you portrayed him as being suprised at the fact he DOES care for them.
Also, this line was awesome- 'Yuffie, why do you wear any clothing? I want a booty call.’ Hopefully Square Enix will make him actually say that at some point! *wishful thinking*
Loved it! :)
9/13/2009 c9 1Zaz9-zaa0
D'aww, flustered!Vince over Yuffie divulging the apparent meaning to his expressions... XD
Though, I'm glad she's so dialogue-heavy; I want to make sure I've got her in some semblance of down-to-pat for the next comic page. ;3
1Zaz9-zaa0D'aww, flustered!Vince over Yuffie divulging the apparent meaning to his expressions... XD
Though, I'm glad she's so dialogue-heavy; I want to make sure I've got her in some semblance of down-to-pat for the next comic page. ;3
8/18/2009 c8 7LM22102
It's a shame this has been outdated. Your representation of Valentine's inner monologue is hilarious.
7LM22102It's a shame this has been outdated. Your representation of Valentine's inner monologue is hilarious.
5/18/2009 c8 23serenbach
I really enjoyed these, especially numbers 4 and 7, for their excellent characterisation but I have to say I love the idea of Vincent getting his ** handed to him at hide and seek! I hope you write more :)
23serenbachI really enjoyed these, especially numbers 4 and 7, for their excellent characterisation but I have to say I love the idea of Vincent getting his ** handed to him at hide and seek! I hope you write more :)
1/25/2009 c8 26VeelaChic
Vincent Valentine has no idea how precious he is. I love how you write Vincent and Yuffie, it's positivley fluffy, and completely in-character.
26VeelaChicVincent Valentine has no idea how precious he is. I love how you write Vincent and Yuffie, it's positivley fluffy, and completely in-character.
8/24/2008 c8 9Plushietiger
Hilarious. Make me try not to crack up in front of everybody and look like a complete weirdo but i still ended up looking weird since i had to grit my teeth and grin like a mad(wo)man. My favorite part was:
I am NOT old.
She is simply too young.
Ah ha Vincent has a age complex XD
9PlushietigerHilarious. Make me try not to crack up in front of everybody and look like a complete weirdo but i still ended up looking weird since i had to grit my teeth and grin like a mad(wo)man. My favorite part was:
I am NOT old.
She is simply too young.
Ah ha Vincent has a age complex XD
8/14/2008 c2 6brood saint
I love Vincent's thoughts - cynical, sarcastic, regarding Yuffie as this weird little pet that keeps ruining his awesome (emo) black pants... I like the idea of her drooling all over him. It's cute and oddly romantic.
6brood saintI love Vincent's thoughts - cynical, sarcastic, regarding Yuffie as this weird little pet that keeps ruining his awesome (emo) black pants... I like the idea of her drooling all over him. It's cute and oddly romantic.
8/14/2008 c1 brood saint
This had me laughing so hard, if I had been drinking milk, it would have come out of my nose (totally attractive). Yuffie's thought process is adorable. And Vincent's. The line, "her shorts are going to fall.." was the most amazing, second only to:
"Oh my **ing God! Vampire!"
Priceless.
This had me laughing so hard, if I had been drinking milk, it would have come out of my nose (totally attractive). Yuffie's thought process is adorable. And Vincent's. The line, "her shorts are going to fall.." was the most amazing, second only to:
"Oh my **ing God! Vampire!"
Priceless.
8/14/2008 c8 12Jean V
Lol! Just admit you're old, Vinnie!
Haha that was awesome, as usual =) I don't like the intro either, just the Tifa pressing up against Vincent part though. The rest is lovely =)
12Jean VLol! Just admit you're old, Vinnie!
Haha that was awesome, as usual =) I don't like the intro either, just the Tifa pressing up against Vincent part though. The rest is lovely =)
8/5/2008 c1 2Waffo eater
I. Loved. It. Especially the seventh chapter. Yuffie's naming sense when it comes to food is awesome. ^^
2Waffo eaterI. Loved. It. Especially the seventh chapter. Yuffie's naming sense when it comes to food is awesome. ^^
8/4/2008 c8 10Clan Dragoodle
Again you keep par on such an auspicious piece. The update was brilliant - despite lacking the introduction that I loved - but I will agree that it didn't flow into the piece well.
The foil between the children and the adults was cute and i spoke to soon when i thought you should underline it more for as the piece went on it was a solid investment. And I love the image and concept of age weaving through the piece at the same time as the foil of the children.
Clever.
Once again the style was short and snippy in a humor unlike most. Loves it and I'll continue to watch.
Great job Foxy!
Aerith
10Clan DragoodleAgain you keep par on such an auspicious piece. The update was brilliant - despite lacking the introduction that I loved - but I will agree that it didn't flow into the piece well.
The foil between the children and the adults was cute and i spoke to soon when i thought you should underline it more for as the piece went on it was a solid investment. And I love the image and concept of age weaving through the piece at the same time as the foil of the children.
Clever.
Once again the style was short and snippy in a humor unlike most. Loves it and I'll continue to watch.
Great job Foxy!
Aerith