for Susan, the Gentle12/18/2008 c1 
18ibelieveintruelove
Hahaha Caspian's in love! lol That was really sweet. I especially liked how you were able to have Caspian decide for himself just how Susan was Queen Susan the Gentle. Nice job!
18ibelieveintrueloveHahaha Caspian's in love! lol That was really sweet. I especially liked how you were able to have Caspian decide for himself just how Susan was Queen Susan the Gentle. Nice job!
6/20/2008 c1 124Casa Circe
I love this, I really do. I had hoped that someone would do a piece on Caspian and Susan after the whole White Witch summoning fiasco. And this was absolutely satisfying. You were able to capture them both in character, explore the nuances of the White Witch's effect on Caspian, and bring forth the humanity of the Kings and Queens. This was a very admirable piece and an enjoyable read as well.
124Casa CirceI love this, I really do. I had hoped that someone would do a piece on Caspian and Susan after the whole White Witch summoning fiasco. And this was absolutely satisfying. You were able to capture them both in character, explore the nuances of the White Witch's effect on Caspian, and bring forth the humanity of the Kings and Queens. This was a very admirable piece and an enjoyable read as well.
6/16/2008 c1 52mistressbabette51
The tension was definitely there. Excellent connection between them, and Susan’s understanding of the situation was a welcome surprise. Caspian was surprised too! I liked it!
Thanks.
52mistressbabette51The tension was definitely there. Excellent connection between them, and Susan’s understanding of the situation was a welcome surprise. Caspian was surprised too! I liked it!
Thanks.
6/12/2008 c1 2Rishtalak
I really liked this, especially how you made the two of them rather confused in regards to their reactions to eachother. You can't expect people their age to be too confident, but too many authors forget that. Well done.
2RishtalakI really liked this, especially how you made the two of them rather confused in regards to their reactions to eachother. You can't expect people their age to be too confident, but too many authors forget that. Well done.
6/11/2008 c1 gah
OMG. I love this fic. I love how u didn't make them kiss just yet, it just makes the wait all the more delicious. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I love you!
OMG. I love this fic. I love how u didn't make them kiss just yet, it just makes the wait all the more delicious. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I love you!
6/11/2008 c1 34Shining Friendship
Wow! Amazing one-shot! I wish you could've continued this fan fic though 'cuz it had an awesome start if you wanted write it into a story. Could you do a sequel to it maybe?
34Shining FriendshipWow! Amazing one-shot! I wish you could've continued this fan fic though 'cuz it had an awesome start if you wanted write it into a story. Could you do a sequel to it maybe?
6/11/2008 c1 Senini
That was very nice; thank you.
That was very nice; thank you.
6/11/2008 c1 sweet
that was simply beautiful. You are a talented writer. The peice was simple, elegent, and absolutly wonderful.
that was simply beautiful. You are a talented writer. The peice was simple, elegent, and absolutly wonderful.
6/11/2008 c1 8sparkling-stone
They are SO CUTE TOGETHER! This is amazing, and I had a smile on my face the whole time during the fluffy bits. Thanks so much.
8sparkling-stoneThey are SO CUTE TOGETHER! This is amazing, and I had a smile on my face the whole time during the fluffy bits. Thanks so much.