for Move On and Break Down5/3/2010 c13 LBF
Very good story. I am surprised that many Maxie/Logan fanfictions though. I enjoyed this story.
Very good story. I am surprised that many Maxie/Logan fanfictions though. I enjoyed this story.
9/8/2008 c13 kaibre
this was SO great...you really made me like Logan and want him to win the girl.I'm thrilled it ended the way it did :)
Very well done! and thanks for writing it!
this was SO great...you really made me like Logan and want him to win the girl.I'm thrilled it ended the way it did :)
Very well done! and thanks for writing it!
9/7/2008 c13 
53Ayshen
The ending was totally awesome. It so fit them...the bickering, the getting back together, the Cooper George.
I totally cried when the baby had on the t-shirt...it made me so happy for them...that they got their happy ending.
Amazing job!
53AyshenThe ending was totally awesome. It so fit them...the bickering, the getting back together, the Cooper George.
I totally cried when the baby had on the t-shirt...it made me so happy for them...that they got their happy ending.
Amazing job!
9/6/2008 c12 37Poisonchik88
It so doesn't get any better than this..
"Maxie smiles through her tears as she steps back from him. “I give you the best sex of your life. I make your little existence worthwhile. I let you rescue me from a psycho doctor so you can feel like my hero. And you can’t even say you want me. Here’s a clue, Logan. I’m not the one who messed up this time. Now, spit it out, do you want to be with me or not?”
Whoot! Go Maxie! I really adore her in this..
"She steps off the elevator, walks over to the couch, sits down and crosses her legs. Maxie yawns as she thinks Well, hurry up already, Logan. I need my beauty sleep. I’m not getting bags under my eyes over you."
Lmao.. I love how Logan rushes all the way down the stairs to find her sitting there as cool as a cucumber, filing her nails. That was just priceless. His speech was as sweet as Logan can get and it was perfectly done!
She calls out “Hayes!”
“Yeah.”
“What in the hell is taking you so long? Get in here.”
With a grin, he pushes open the door and finds her naked in a shower that is just starting to steam up.
She was so worth going after, he thinks to himself. She is one crazy chick...but she’s my crazy chick and I’m her walking disaster...and nothing is keeping me away from her from now on.
Hehe .. Best part.. NO! one part left? ** sniffles** Aw.. shucks. Hehe ..
Anyway , it was phenomenal as always!
D.
37Poisonchik88It so doesn't get any better than this..
"Maxie smiles through her tears as she steps back from him. “I give you the best sex of your life. I make your little existence worthwhile. I let you rescue me from a psycho doctor so you can feel like my hero. And you can’t even say you want me. Here’s a clue, Logan. I’m not the one who messed up this time. Now, spit it out, do you want to be with me or not?”
Whoot! Go Maxie! I really adore her in this..
"She steps off the elevator, walks over to the couch, sits down and crosses her legs. Maxie yawns as she thinks Well, hurry up already, Logan. I need my beauty sleep. I’m not getting bags under my eyes over you."
Lmao.. I love how Logan rushes all the way down the stairs to find her sitting there as cool as a cucumber, filing her nails. That was just priceless. His speech was as sweet as Logan can get and it was perfectly done!
She calls out “Hayes!”
“Yeah.”
“What in the hell is taking you so long? Get in here.”
With a grin, he pushes open the door and finds her naked in a shower that is just starting to steam up.
She was so worth going after, he thinks to himself. She is one crazy chick...but she’s my crazy chick and I’m her walking disaster...and nothing is keeping me away from her from now on.
Hehe .. Best part.. NO! one part left? ** sniffles** Aw.. shucks. Hehe ..
Anyway , it was phenomenal as always!
D.
9/5/2008 c12 53Ayshen
I love the crazy intense way they feel about each other...you neveer know if they are going to be fighting or making love...or both, lol. They are two damaged kindred spirits...it is an oddly sweet love story.
53AyshenI love the crazy intense way they feel about each other...you neveer know if they are going to be fighting or making love...or both, lol. They are two damaged kindred spirits...it is an oddly sweet love story.
8/31/2008 c11 124poeticgrace
"All or Nothing. Take it or leave it." That seems to be a very classic line for LoMax.
124poeticgrace"All or Nothing. Take it or leave it." That seems to be a very classic line for LoMax.
8/31/2008 c11 37Poisonchik88
"Maxie straddles him and says “You are such a mess...you know that right? A walking disaster.”
“Believe me, I’m aware, darlin.”
“But you’re my disaster.” She sits up slightly, so that there eyes can meet, as the moonlight streams in the window over them. “Aren’t you?”
Loved that part.. So Maxie and Logan. they know there both have an impulsive recklessness that no one else can match , no one else can understand and that somehow they both can manage to bring out the better half's of each other or the self destructing half's. ... :)
I LOVED this chapter. .. Hehe.. I'm so glad you updated.. *does happy dance**
I have to say that this was my favorite part of this chapter..
"All or Nothing. Take it or leave it, he silently tells her as he slides inside of her and her legs wrap around his back. You really want this, girl? His eyes met hers. You think you can handle me loving you?
Almost as if she can read the questions in his eyes, Maxie tells him “Yes.”
**Sighs* Amazing. I just adore your Maxie and Logan.. :)
Hehe.. Alright since I think you had enough of me and all my freakin reviews.. **laughs* I'm going to cut this short!
Hope you update soon!
D.
37Poisonchik88"Maxie straddles him and says “You are such a mess...you know that right? A walking disaster.”
“Believe me, I’m aware, darlin.”
“But you’re my disaster.” She sits up slightly, so that there eyes can meet, as the moonlight streams in the window over them. “Aren’t you?”
Loved that part.. So Maxie and Logan. they know there both have an impulsive recklessness that no one else can match , no one else can understand and that somehow they both can manage to bring out the better half's of each other or the self destructing half's. ... :)
I LOVED this chapter. .. Hehe.. I'm so glad you updated.. *does happy dance**
I have to say that this was my favorite part of this chapter..
"All or Nothing. Take it or leave it, he silently tells her as he slides inside of her and her legs wrap around his back. You really want this, girl? His eyes met hers. You think you can handle me loving you?
Almost as if she can read the questions in his eyes, Maxie tells him “Yes.”
**Sighs* Amazing. I just adore your Maxie and Logan.. :)
Hehe.. Alright since I think you had enough of me and all my freakin reviews.. **laughs* I'm going to cut this short!
Hope you update soon!
D.
8/31/2008 c11 kaibre
hot, hot Lomax! you had some really great lines
-it was not just sex, she is a liar but she won’t lie about that
- He’s been every shade of wrong already
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hot, hot Lomax! you had some really great lines
-it was not just sex, she is a liar but she won’t lie about that
- He’s been every shade of wrong already
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7/21/2008 c10 3live4jasam
“Yeah, no problem. A little attempted murder of a psycho doctor, a little slap and tickle on the side of the road. All in a night’s work.”
Ha Ha!
*
Cooper's letter to Logan had me tearing up, their friendhip was so awesome and then cut short. I really wanted a scene on GH where Logan said he was sorry to Coop or atleast grieved after he died.
*
Hell, she thinks Can this man just go one day without being all: The world is ending. Lets slit our wrists right now.
Probably not.
LOL! That is so how Maxie thinks! You captured both her and Logan's thoughts perfectly.
LOMAX IS AWESOME!
3live4jasam“Yeah, no problem. A little attempted murder of a psycho doctor, a little slap and tickle on the side of the road. All in a night’s work.”
Ha Ha!
*
Cooper's letter to Logan had me tearing up, their friendhip was so awesome and then cut short. I really wanted a scene on GH where Logan said he was sorry to Coop or atleast grieved after he died.
*
Hell, she thinks Can this man just go one day without being all: The world is ending. Lets slit our wrists right now.
Probably not.
LOL! That is so how Maxie thinks! You captured both her and Logan's thoughts perfectly.
LOMAX IS AWESOME!
7/21/2008 c10 53Ayshen
This chapter was so sweet. I love that you mix the nice sweet vibe with the snark and that intense sexual thing they have going on.
Oh the Ian thing...I am glad they are on each other's sides for that.
Cant wait for more!
53AyshenThis chapter was so sweet. I love that you mix the nice sweet vibe with the snark and that intense sexual thing they have going on.
Oh the Ian thing...I am glad they are on each other's sides for that.
Cant wait for more!
7/19/2008 c9 37Poisonchik88
I loved Coops letter.. It was amazing. Best part. (Well thats a lie because the whole chapter just kicked **) " So since you know me best, do me a favor, would you? Keep me alive.
If I don’t make it to 85 or 90 years old, to the Florida sun back home in some retirement village, if this is all that’s going to mark my life, well you go on without me and don’t let me be forgotten. Name a kid after me or something. Drink a beer to your old army buddy. Call my mom on holidays. I know its asking a lot, but I’m asking anyway. I’ll owe you one."
Aw.. Sniffle.. I have tears. This has to be my favorite chapter so far. I can't wait ot find out if Logan listens to Coop and tries to give it a god with Maxie if at the risk of breaking his heart.
Update as soon as you can! Otherwise I'll go through withdraw! Lol..
D.
37Poisonchik88I loved Coops letter.. It was amazing. Best part. (Well thats a lie because the whole chapter just kicked **) " So since you know me best, do me a favor, would you? Keep me alive.
If I don’t make it to 85 or 90 years old, to the Florida sun back home in some retirement village, if this is all that’s going to mark my life, well you go on without me and don’t let me be forgotten. Name a kid after me or something. Drink a beer to your old army buddy. Call my mom on holidays. I know its asking a lot, but I’m asking anyway. I’ll owe you one."
Aw.. Sniffle.. I have tears. This has to be my favorite chapter so far. I can't wait ot find out if Logan listens to Coop and tries to give it a god with Maxie if at the risk of breaking his heart.
Update as soon as you can! Otherwise I'll go through withdraw! Lol..
D.
7/18/2008 c9 TheAngel-That-NeverFelt
"Logan might not be the one she thought could give her back a little hope, but he has done just that, cause when she is kissing him she doesn’t see anyone in her head but him. It’s a blessed relief...
They are in it together...at least she is praying to God he sees it that way. Because as much as Maxie does not want to need Logan, she’s starting to think that she really does need him after all."
^Sigh^ I'm in Lomax heaven here.You truly make my year with this story. Best damn Lomax story I have ever read.
"Logan might not be the one she thought could give her back a little hope, but he has done just that, cause when she is kissing him she doesn’t see anyone in her head but him. It’s a blessed relief...
They are in it together...at least she is praying to God he sees it that way. Because as much as Maxie does not want to need Logan, she’s starting to think that she really does need him after all."
^Sigh^ I'm in Lomax heaven here.You truly make my year with this story. Best damn Lomax story I have ever read.
7/18/2008 c7 TheAngel-That-NeverFelt
Damn I would kill to be Maxie, you made her one lucky , lucky girl!.
I'm in awe of you as a writer
Delia (D.)
Damn I would kill to be Maxie, you made her one lucky , lucky girl!.
I'm in awe of you as a writer
Delia (D.)