for Smoke Circles12/17/2011 c1 
74LukeAndLorelai Brucas Fan
Love. That is all I have for this story, all I can say about it. I love it.
74LukeAndLorelai Brucas FanLove. That is all I have for this story, all I can say about it. I love it.
9/10/2008 c1 13RoryReneeMercedees
tears tears. lots of tears. it was so sad. but it was how it all worked out. so sad. i hated how it ended (the show). but i did love your story it told the truth about how they wanted to go everywhere but managed to go nowhere. ive that before now i just can't remember where. oh well doesnt really matter. you story held trueth and i respect that. no matter how much the truth hurts you must face it. it was good really good. please write more.
13RoryReneeMercedeestears tears. lots of tears. it was so sad. but it was how it all worked out. so sad. i hated how it ended (the show). but i did love your story it told the truth about how they wanted to go everywhere but managed to go nowhere. ive that before now i just can't remember where. oh well doesnt really matter. you story held trueth and i respect that. no matter how much the truth hurts you must face it. it was good really good. please write more.
6/19/2008 c1 boredliteratireader
This is...refreshing. Your writing is very good..and I loved Rory's reflections.
Liked it :D
/You will see him again./ loved it :)
This is...refreshing. Your writing is very good..and I loved Rory's reflections.
Liked it :D
/You will see him again./ loved it :)
6/16/2008 c1 15GwenStacy
Really, really beautiful. One of my favorite styles of writing. It was a pleasure to read.
mira
15GwenStacyReally, really beautiful. One of my favorite styles of writing. It was a pleasure to read.
mira
6/16/2008 c1 68DiehardJavaJunkie14
I loved it as usual... you're amazing! I love the way you got inside Rory's head.
68DiehardJavaJunkie14I loved it as usual... you're amazing! I love the way you got inside Rory's head.
6/16/2008 c1 34gilmorefanforever
Wow, Lola. I don't know if I've ever seen they're relationship documented that well in such a short story. Amazing. Amazing amazing amazing.
34gilmorefanforeverWow, Lola. I don't know if I've ever seen they're relationship documented that well in such a short story. Amazing. Amazing amazing amazing.
6/16/2008 c1 8Gilmore-007
Wowza.
This was pretty damn good.
Lovin' the writing style, too, by the way.
~Gilmore
8Gilmore-007Wowza.
This was pretty damn good.
Lovin' the writing style, too, by the way.
~Gilmore