for An Accidental Crossing7/24/2012 c20 
3skipbeataddict
Update soon! I feel bad for Mirani... and exasperated at Ilki. I wish she had followed Mirani's advice... :( SO SAD!
3skipbeataddictUpdate soon! I feel bad for Mirani... and exasperated at Ilki. I wish she had followed Mirani's advice... :( SO SAD!
7/15/2011 c20 Mymy2014
Amazing story :)
Amazing story :)
5/18/2011 c21 Guest
o_O Holy fucking hell, and I thought -I- had a lot of work to do before summer. Suddenly I'm glad I'm homeschooled.
Well, see you in June!
o_O Holy fucking hell, and I thought -I- had a lot of work to do before summer. Suddenly I'm glad I'm homeschooled.
Well, see you in June!
5/8/2011 c21 2littlewarrior911
SO for for the past 4-5 days i have been reading your story non stop, or to the best of my abilities. Considering i to have a mountain of houpblah that teachers are assigning in the last stretch of school.. stupid school and learning... and that i have a good social life that i like to keep and maintain along with work! SO I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL LOL minus the writing part, i just enjoy reading ^-^
but ANYWAYS! like i was saying, for roughly 4-5 days i have been litterally GLUED to your story! ITS JUST SO AMAZING! everything about is just so, well written and thought out that its like a mind-fuck of awesomeness. *pardon my french* and when i got to this AN, i was quiet saddened to hear you wont be updating for awhile, *sad face :( * but id like to say good luck with all your projects and tests and quizzes and whatever else life is throwing at you ! And you offically have another hooked reader and i hope you swiftly write like the wind so i wont suffer so long without your awesomeness as a story! GAH! :D 3 !
2littlewarrior911SO for for the past 4-5 days i have been reading your story non stop, or to the best of my abilities. Considering i to have a mountain of houpblah that teachers are assigning in the last stretch of school.. stupid school and learning... and that i have a good social life that i like to keep and maintain along with work! SO I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL LOL minus the writing part, i just enjoy reading ^-^
but ANYWAYS! like i was saying, for roughly 4-5 days i have been litterally GLUED to your story! ITS JUST SO AMAZING! everything about is just so, well written and thought out that its like a mind-fuck of awesomeness. *pardon my french* and when i got to this AN, i was quiet saddened to hear you wont be updating for awhile, *sad face :( * but id like to say good luck with all your projects and tests and quizzes and whatever else life is throwing at you ! And you offically have another hooked reader and i hope you swiftly write like the wind so i wont suffer so long without your awesomeness as a story! GAH! :D 3 !
5/5/2011 c21 2Sapphire-sama Dreamer
First off, no-one should be b-i-t-c-h-i-n about no updates. Its perfectly understandable that you are busy and can't update right now unless people want you to write crap that is. You shouldn't feel bad b/c you're living your life. Readers and reviewers need to remember authors have lives. With that said I hope all you pass all your quizzes, tests, and projects. I also hope you enjoy your Novellas and that graduation is a blast. And I hope the drama simmers down, it can be fun only for so long. I will patiently be waiting for the next chapter.
2Sapphire-sama DreamerFirst off, no-one should be b-i-t-c-h-i-n about no updates. Its perfectly understandable that you are busy and can't update right now unless people want you to write crap that is. You shouldn't feel bad b/c you're living your life. Readers and reviewers need to remember authors have lives. With that said I hope all you pass all your quizzes, tests, and projects. I also hope you enjoy your Novellas and that graduation is a blast. And I hope the drama simmers down, it can be fun only for so long. I will patiently be waiting for the next chapter.
5/4/2011 c15 2Mina'sMadness
Great chapter! I burst into laughter when I read this about 'both ambitions', so great! Actually for a while now I thought about how Sasuke neglects his second ambition in the manga...
I thought Ilki and Gaara would meet again before the start of the exams... That suprised me, but it was really fun.
Looking forward to the next chapters :D
2Mina'sMadnessGreat chapter! I burst into laughter when I read this about 'both ambitions', so great! Actually for a while now I thought about how Sasuke neglects his second ambition in the manga...
I thought Ilki and Gaara would meet again before the start of the exams... That suprised me, but it was really fun.
Looking forward to the next chapters :D
4/10/2011 c20 2Mymy2014
this story is amazing. it is probably the best naruto oc fanfiction i have ever read. Please continue!
2Mymy2014this story is amazing. it is probably the best naruto oc fanfiction i have ever read. Please continue!
4/4/2011 c20 4ChibySmiley
... THAT FIEND. HOW DARE THEY TORTURE YOU? D8
Wow, this part is really dark compared to the others... .w. Can't wait for the other two! :)
4ChibySmiley... THAT FIEND. HOW DARE THEY TORTURE YOU? D8
Wow, this part is really dark compared to the others... .w. Can't wait for the other two! :)
4/1/2011 c20 jade
aww this is sad! i really hope mirina? finds a way out soon! you better update!
aww this is sad! i really hope mirina? finds a way out soon! you better update!
3/31/2011 c20 2Sapphire-sama Dreamer
Yeah it was definitely worth it. Very cool chapter! Better word for Sagittarius is Shashuza (or Shashu-za in this case it doesn't matter if you break it). Likewise for Aquila a better word would be Akuira. However in Japanese culture the constellations have begun to be said in their English forms as of 1996 so there's no real need to write them in Japanese (unless its a pet peeve of yours).
2Sapphire-sama DreamerYeah it was definitely worth it. Very cool chapter! Better word for Sagittarius is Shashuza (or Shashu-za in this case it doesn't matter if you break it). Likewise for Aquila a better word would be Akuira. However in Japanese culture the constellations have begun to be said in their English forms as of 1996 so there's no real need to write them in Japanese (unless its a pet peeve of yours).
3/13/2011 c19 Sapphire-sama Dreamer
Aww, waiting sucks! But it'll be worth it (probably). Great story you're writing here. I will put it on alert.
Aww, waiting sucks! But it'll be worth it (probably). Great story you're writing here. I will put it on alert.
3/13/2011 c18 Sapphire-sama Dreamer
Musume isn't informal for daughter its just the common word used, after the millennium its become the most used word for daughter with almost every former word lost to time. This is largely due to the influence of super idol group Morning Musume. It's technically not incorrect that you said its the informal word, its just that the practice of using it informally has died out, now its the norm for all social statuses in Japan to use musume rather than older words or the musume musume of 1992-1996.
Really enjoyed the chapter, it was cool!
Musume isn't informal for daughter its just the common word used, after the millennium its become the most used word for daughter with almost every former word lost to time. This is largely due to the influence of super idol group Morning Musume. It's technically not incorrect that you said its the informal word, its just that the practice of using it informally has died out, now its the norm for all social statuses in Japan to use musume rather than older words or the musume musume of 1992-1996.
Really enjoyed the chapter, it was cool!
3/13/2011 c14 Sapphire-sama Dreamer
Tsukino can also mean of the moon. This is a much better story than I originally gave it credit. I'm enjoying it quite a lot.
Tsukino can also mean of the moon. This is a much better story than I originally gave it credit. I'm enjoying it quite a lot.