for Darkness: Master of Shadows7/26/2011 c13 
3Queen S of Randomness 016
hey!
awesome ending! can't wait to read more of your stories! ^-^ :)
3Queen S of Randomness 016hey!
awesome ending! can't wait to read more of your stories! ^-^ :)
4/26/2011 c12 Queen S of Randomness 016
hey!
i have to admit... i didn't see that revelation about Reaper coming...
another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! ^-^ :)
hey!
i have to admit... i didn't see that revelation about Reaper coming...
another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! ^-^ :)
2/21/2011 c11 scifychick812
Please hurry up and update this story! It's been almost a year. Please I really want to know what happens next.
Please hurry up and update this story! It's been almost a year. Please I really want to know what happens next.
2/28/2010 c11 86BabyBeaver
I can't believe I haven't read this yet. Somehow I had it mixed up with a story I'd already read, I guess.
It's really great! Intriguing, and I can't wait to read the rest!
86BabyBeaverI can't believe I haven't read this yet. Somehow I had it mixed up with a story I'd already read, I guess.
It's really great! Intriguing, and I can't wait to read the rest!
2/23/2010 c11 2forevermissingwonderland
Hi.
Another brilliant chapter!
I like the way Darkness' character is being developed/is. He's very well-put, and I like that.
I especially liked the paragraph where Fillmore gets his memory back and Darkness realises that...I'd like to know how he does some of the things he does.
So if Fillmore's calling his friends, as you left the chapter, who is he going to call first? Second? Third?
Oh, and by the way, could you please do a chapter (if he is indeed going to jail) on Darkness coming after Fillmore again? I'd very much like to see that. Of course, it's up to you. Just a random idea I thought up.
I hope you'll update soon!
-QM
2forevermissingwonderlandHi.
Another brilliant chapter!
I like the way Darkness' character is being developed/is. He's very well-put, and I like that.
I especially liked the paragraph where Fillmore gets his memory back and Darkness realises that...I'd like to know how he does some of the things he does.
So if Fillmore's calling his friends, as you left the chapter, who is he going to call first? Second? Third?
Oh, and by the way, could you please do a chapter (if he is indeed going to jail) on Darkness coming after Fillmore again? I'd very much like to see that. Of course, it's up to you. Just a random idea I thought up.
I hope you'll update soon!
-QM
2/22/2010 c11 Drifting One
About Reaper. You must tell us! I am so curious!
This chapter is really "edge-of-your-seat." Now tell us about Reaper. XD
Thank you!
-Drifting One
About Reaper. You must tell us! I am so curious!
This chapter is really "edge-of-your-seat." Now tell us about Reaper. XD
Thank you!
-Drifting One
2/22/2010 c11 3Queen S of Randomness 016
hey!
thank u for not ending this chapter at the part after he blacks out after being bombarded with memories. :)
another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! ^-^ :)
3Queen S of Randomness 016hey!
thank u for not ending this chapter at the part after he blacks out after being bombarded with memories. :)
another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! ^-^ :)
1/21/2010 c10 2forevermissingwonderland
Hi.
Wow. So much happened in this chapter. I'm still trying to get my head around some of it, but it makes sense to me.
Although, being the annoying person I am, I feel having a Beta might help you some. Your writing is amazing, don't get me wrong (I'm jealous, even), but I think having someone too "iron out the creases" might help. But then again, what do I know?
And, second-last but not least, I must express my great annoyance at your brilliant use of cliffhangers. *frowns slightly*
I hope you'll update soon!
-QM
2forevermissingwonderlandHi.
Wow. So much happened in this chapter. I'm still trying to get my head around some of it, but it makes sense to me.
Although, being the annoying person I am, I feel having a Beta might help you some. Your writing is amazing, don't get me wrong (I'm jealous, even), but I think having someone too "iron out the creases" might help. But then again, what do I know?
And, second-last but not least, I must express my great annoyance at your brilliant use of cliffhangers. *frowns slightly*
I hope you'll update soon!
-QM
1/17/2010 c10 Ally666
I love this story, theres not alot of Fillmore stories, its sad that some of the few left have been abandoned!
I think this story is rather well written, and I can never tell whats going to happen next!
I love this story, theres not alot of Fillmore stories, its sad that some of the few left have been abandoned!
I think this story is rather well written, and I can never tell whats going to happen next!
1/15/2010 c10 Drifting One
Bizarre, bizzare, bizarre, bizarre. XD
*hugs* Thanks you for the thank you. You really shouldn't have, but since you did, *hugs again*
Idle intrest, not idol interest. "He acknowledged the wooden idol as he idley idled down the street."
"And really, who else in the hive of alien children even knew of her existence, much less would mourn her death."
It's an odd sentence, grammatically incorrect. You're smart enough to know what you did wrong. You don't have to fix it, just ponder. It's not a stream of consciencenous thing, it's a punctuation thing. You'll get it.
"The pair of twins pared the pears." Pair, not pare in the sentence. Another trick.
It was an interesting effect. The story made sense to me, don't worry. Like I said, you're absurdly talented. Mechanics escape you, but your talent shines through anyways. And I want to kill darkness.
What happened to your summary? T'was perfect! And then. . . and then something happened! You're summary, from about a week or so ago, is what caught my attention. It was perfect. Now. . . it's not as perfect as it was.
But honestly, that was a cruel cliffhanger. And I'm terribly curious. And I want t know, and I want to read your lovely work and I want to know! *pouts indefinitely* Oh well. . . Thank you for updating and remember! You have a loyal fan waiting in the stands. Oh, if you get a beta, I think you might improve. Just a suggestion. Maybe? Oh well. Keep up the good work.
-Drifting One
Bizarre, bizzare, bizarre, bizarre. XD
*hugs* Thanks you for the thank you. You really shouldn't have, but since you did, *hugs again*
Idle intrest, not idol interest. "He acknowledged the wooden idol as he idley idled down the street."
"And really, who else in the hive of alien children even knew of her existence, much less would mourn her death."
It's an odd sentence, grammatically incorrect. You're smart enough to know what you did wrong. You don't have to fix it, just ponder. It's not a stream of consciencenous thing, it's a punctuation thing. You'll get it.
"The pair of twins pared the pears." Pair, not pare in the sentence. Another trick.
It was an interesting effect. The story made sense to me, don't worry. Like I said, you're absurdly talented. Mechanics escape you, but your talent shines through anyways. And I want to kill darkness.
What happened to your summary? T'was perfect! And then. . . and then something happened! You're summary, from about a week or so ago, is what caught my attention. It was perfect. Now. . . it's not as perfect as it was.
But honestly, that was a cruel cliffhanger. And I'm terribly curious. And I want t know, and I want to read your lovely work and I want to know! *pouts indefinitely* Oh well. . . Thank you for updating and remember! You have a loyal fan waiting in the stands. Oh, if you get a beta, I think you might improve. Just a suggestion. Maybe? Oh well. Keep up the good work.
-Drifting One
1/15/2010 c10 Starowner
Oh my gawd
Oh my gawd