for Carolina in My Mind8/17/2012 c3 MagicalNaley23
Hi, I've been checking from time to time for any updates from you and I have read all of your a lot of times. Are you still planning to finish this story because I really want more. I know it's been almost three years but I hope you still get to continue writing this one. Thanks much xoxox
Hi, I've been checking from time to time for any updates from you and I have read all of your a lot of times. Are you still planning to finish this story because I really want more. I know it's been almost three years but I hope you still get to continue writing this one. Thanks much xoxox
2/6/2010 c3 
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Wow, do you know you are an amazing author? I just found this series and I have been reading it for the past couple of days. It's just so addictive! Not only do you have my three favorite OTH ships (Naley, Brucas & Jeyton) but you write all the characters so well. I LOVE their kids and I was happy to see that you managed to make redeem Dan so he could have a relationship with both his sons.
Jenny and James are too adorable for words ... I love his crush on her. His friendship with Kyan is so funny! Kyan is a great character too.
I see that you haven't updated this fic in a while and I hope you haven't given up on it. I totally understand that RL can get in the way but I'm hoping that one day you'll continue because I really want to know what happens next. :)
Wonderful job!
84svgurl410Wow, do you know you are an amazing author? I just found this series and I have been reading it for the past couple of days. It's just so addictive! Not only do you have my three favorite OTH ships (Naley, Brucas & Jeyton) but you write all the characters so well. I LOVE their kids and I was happy to see that you managed to make redeem Dan so he could have a relationship with both his sons.
Jenny and James are too adorable for words ... I love his crush on her. His friendship with Kyan is so funny! Kyan is a great character too.
I see that you haven't updated this fic in a while and I hope you haven't given up on it. I totally understand that RL can get in the way but I'm hoping that one day you'll continue because I really want to know what happens next. :)
Wonderful job!
2/6/2010 c3 5VFBFan
Hello hello.:)
I just read your two other stories and my heart jumped when I started reading this one.
To be honest: One of the best triology I´ve ever read so far.Everything is perfect.The couples of course (I always thought Peyton belonged to Jake),then Naley and Brucas...and the kids are too cute.I really like the way you work with them.I hope there will be more of the Brucas family though.
What I love is that you let Brucas have twin boys.I´ve been reading ff for a very long time now and well...believe me.When there was a pregnancy involved in any story Brucas mostly had daughters,ya know?Well...they might think since Brooke is the fashion kind of girl she could only bond with daughters,which is wrong in my POV.You really did something rare here.Not that Brooke has a son,she has two.And I think this is way more interesting than reading stories where Brooke puts her "beautiful,perfect daughter´ into cute clothes.You know what I mean right?:D
Your stories are different from others...and that is one point which makes them so wonderful.I really hope for Brucas,that there will be more scenes with them.Since Brooke HAS sons now I would love to see how she is with them,since I barely read Brooke handling sons and I might not be the only one.;)
And for the future: I don´t know if you planned more kids for the charas...he! I don´t even know if you continue this story,since your last update was in 2008...but well I kinda hope that you will continue this.:)
Well anyways:
I personally wouldn't do that...you know?Letting the characters have more kids.
There are enough characters already with all the kids and the parents and I think it is already hard enough to bring them all together and to write scenes for all of them.Every reader here has his fav character and sure they all want scenes with them.It would be wrong to let anyone have another baby or something.It would drown in here.:)
It is great how it is and I really hope that you will continue this story someday.
Thanks for sharing.:) Jules
5VFBFanHello hello.:)
I just read your two other stories and my heart jumped when I started reading this one.
To be honest: One of the best triology I´ve ever read so far.Everything is perfect.The couples of course (I always thought Peyton belonged to Jake),then Naley and Brucas...and the kids are too cute.I really like the way you work with them.I hope there will be more of the Brucas family though.
What I love is that you let Brucas have twin boys.I´ve been reading ff for a very long time now and well...believe me.When there was a pregnancy involved in any story Brucas mostly had daughters,ya know?Well...they might think since Brooke is the fashion kind of girl she could only bond with daughters,which is wrong in my POV.You really did something rare here.Not that Brooke has a son,she has two.And I think this is way more interesting than reading stories where Brooke puts her "beautiful,perfect daughter´ into cute clothes.You know what I mean right?:D
Your stories are different from others...and that is one point which makes them so wonderful.I really hope for Brucas,that there will be more scenes with them.Since Brooke HAS sons now I would love to see how she is with them,since I barely read Brooke handling sons and I might not be the only one.;)
And for the future: I don´t know if you planned more kids for the charas...he! I don´t even know if you continue this story,since your last update was in 2008...but well I kinda hope that you will continue this.:)
Well anyways:
I personally wouldn't do that...you know?Letting the characters have more kids.
There are enough characters already with all the kids and the parents and I think it is already hard enough to bring them all together and to write scenes for all of them.Every reader here has his fav character and sure they all want scenes with them.It would be wrong to let anyone have another baby or something.It would drown in here.:)
It is great how it is and I really hope that you will continue this story someday.
Thanks for sharing.:) Jules
12/19/2009 c3 blazinangel1702
I know it's been a really long time since you've started this Id like to see it finished, I've reread these stories many times over, you are a very talented writer and the plots have been amazing and I can't wait to read more if you chose to finish this. I can't wait to see what happens with James and Jenny...
I know it's been a really long time since you've started this Id like to see it finished, I've reread these stories many times over, you are a very talented writer and the plots have been amazing and I can't wait to read more if you chose to finish this. I can't wait to see what happens with James and Jenny...
12/10/2009 c2 2ejack02
Hey, your story is really great, and well written. Just wondering if you were going to continue with the story...Looking forward to an update :)).
2ejack02Hey, your story is really great, and well written. Just wondering if you were going to continue with the story...Looking forward to an update :)).
9/18/2009 c1 1993 -Aqua martin- 2009
This is not a flame. It's concrit.
Okay first off, your authors note was to long. If it's not going to be just a paragraph, don't post an author's note, okay? It would be wise.
Sencond, a couple of things in this story could be fixed. Read over it and fix them.
with much love ~Aquasha~
This is not a flame. It's concrit.
Okay first off, your authors note was to long. If it's not going to be just a paragraph, don't post an author's note, okay? It would be wise.
Sencond, a couple of things in this story could be fixed. Read over it and fix them.
with much love ~Aquasha~
2/21/2009 c1 ejack02
I keep reading the same three chapters over and over...A tad addictive, but can't wait till you come back and write more :)
I keep reading the same three chapters over and over...A tad addictive, but can't wait till you come back and write more :)
1/17/2009 c3 oth23oth23
im hoping you will still be working on this story.. its great and i cant wait for more!
im hoping you will still be working on this story.. its great and i cant wait for more!
1/4/2009 c2 3impeccableblahs
dude, so just came to me (i was re-reading, lol), but you should definitely make nikki come back. talk about some jeyton drama, lol. not to mention brucas if nikki wanted to run her mouth .
haha. i'm so bored.
when ya gonna update yo?
3impeccableblahsdude, so just came to me (i was re-reading, lol), but you should definitely make nikki come back. talk about some jeyton drama, lol. not to mention brucas if nikki wanted to run her mouth .
haha. i'm so bored.
when ya gonna update yo?
12/21/2008 c3 2ejack02
Only three chapters and this story is already addicting...Hope you come back to write more! :)
2ejack02Only three chapters and this story is already addicting...Hope you come back to write more! :)
10/16/2008 c3 3impeccableblahs
love, love, love it.
it's amazing how you've got me loving characters that were never apart of the oth world. you're bemazing :P haley's overprotectiveness was hliarious. sad, but you know.. kind of hilarious.
update soon. i have a feeling i know what the bad news is with peyton/jake
3impeccableblahslove, love, love it.
it's amazing how you've got me loving characters that were never apart of the oth world. you're bemazing :P haley's overprotectiveness was hliarious. sad, but you know.. kind of hilarious.
update soon. i have a feeling i know what the bad news is with peyton/jake
9/28/2008 c3 15Nathan's Manna
Love the chapter, as usual! I've been keeping vigil with my fanfic notices for a new chapter from you! I was so excited to see one! I wanted to read it right away, but the site is blocked at work!
It'll be interesting if Lucas ends up talking to James about hazing...since he obviously went through it himself.
Can't wait to see where you go next...
15Nathan's MannaLove the chapter, as usual! I've been keeping vigil with my fanfic notices for a new chapter from you! I was so excited to see one! I wanted to read it right away, but the site is blocked at work!
It'll be interesting if Lucas ends up talking to James about hazing...since he obviously went through it himself.
Can't wait to see where you go next...
9/24/2008 c3 22justawritier
I'm so happy you updated. that was a cute chapter and I loved the J/J. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
22justawritierI'm so happy you updated. that was a cute chapter and I loved the J/J. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
9/4/2008 c2 AryannaMonroe
I love the story not many people take the time to say who they see for the character or even write a story about the "Kids"
I love the story not many people take the time to say who they see for the character or even write a story about the "Kids"