for Eighteenth Story7/27/2008 c5 
1Atomicjinx-x
Aw that was soo adorable.
I love what she said to him that was beautiful
and I've never read anyone having
Rose say something like that to Emmett, so sweet.
I absolutely loved this story.
1Atomicjinx-xAw that was soo adorable.
I love what she said to him that was beautiful
and I've never read anyone having
Rose say something like that to Emmett, so sweet.
I absolutely loved this story.
7/23/2008 c1 5bronzehairedgirl
Wow! It's no secret that I'm a huge Emmett fan through and through. I am also hard to win over when it comes to fanfic about Emmett. I have to say that this is one of the best depictions of Emmett that I have read. I'm eagerly planning to read the remaining chapters, but I couldn't go forward without pointing out one thing (I wouldn't be living up to my reputation if I didn't. LOL! :D) Emmett was 'killed' by a black bear, not a grizzly bear. There aren't any grizzlies in the Smoky Mountains. It's a common mistake that most people make because grizzlies are Emmett's favorite to hunt. Other than that detail, this chapter was perfect. I'm going to read the rest before deciding for sure, but I have a feeling this story is going on my favorites as well as my C2, The Best of Emmett.
5bronzehairedgirlWow! It's no secret that I'm a huge Emmett fan through and through. I am also hard to win over when it comes to fanfic about Emmett. I have to say that this is one of the best depictions of Emmett that I have read. I'm eagerly planning to read the remaining chapters, but I couldn't go forward without pointing out one thing (I wouldn't be living up to my reputation if I didn't. LOL! :D) Emmett was 'killed' by a black bear, not a grizzly bear. There aren't any grizzlies in the Smoky Mountains. It's a common mistake that most people make because grizzlies are Emmett's favorite to hunt. Other than that detail, this chapter was perfect. I'm going to read the rest before deciding for sure, but I have a feeling this story is going on my favorites as well as my C2, The Best of Emmett.
7/23/2008 c4 11Artie's Girl
It was really good, and throughout the entire thing, I was hoping that he would not have given in, and I was rooting for him. But I understand the temptation! Still really really good!
11Artie's GirlIt was really good, and throughout the entire thing, I was hoping that he would not have given in, and I was rooting for him. But I understand the temptation! Still really really good!
7/21/2008 c4 18AceCade
Wonderful chapter!
I loved it!
it was so cute at the end and I feel so bad for Emmett.
He's a big teddy bear... that can rip you in half in a second lol.
And I believe that you protrayed his growth throughout the chapters beautifully.
Im so sad this is almost over :(
-AceCade
18AceCadeWonderful chapter!
I loved it!
it was so cute at the end and I feel so bad for Emmett.
He's a big teddy bear... that can rip you in half in a second lol.
And I believe that you protrayed his growth throughout the chapters beautifully.
Im so sad this is almost over :(
-AceCade
7/20/2008 c4 13InterruptedProgress
This story is excellent, and I love how you portray these two. Rosalie is one of my favorite characters and most people can't portray their relationship the way you have. Thank you for this wonderful story!
13InterruptedProgressThis story is excellent, and I love how you portray these two. Rosalie is one of my favorite characters and most people can't portray their relationship the way you have. Thank you for this wonderful story!
7/20/2008 c4 1Atomicjinx-x
That was a great one.
I absolutely loved the situation you put Em in, though it was sad to see the girl lose her life. The whole incident was a good thing because it showed Emmett that Rosalie would never leave him no matter what. Great last chapter :D
1Atomicjinx-xThat was a great one.
I absolutely loved the situation you put Em in, though it was sad to see the girl lose her life. The whole incident was a good thing because it showed Emmett that Rosalie would never leave him no matter what. Great last chapter :D
7/15/2008 c3 Aki
Y'know... I love it... so there.
Quick thing:
"I lifted my head to look at Edward. He turned around and I could see that looked annoyed." (Uh... between that and looked... I'm guessing that's supposed to be Edward? Just sayin')
Anyway... the timeline has been established for this wedding. Before Alice and Jasper. I think it's absolutely brilliant. Emmett is my favorite, like I've said, so I think having a story centered around him is amazing. Especially since it was you who wrote it. :D
LOVE YOU...
aki
ps... you should totally get on aim or something... we are missing you, you know!
Y'know... I love it... so there.
Quick thing:
"I lifted my head to look at Edward. He turned around and I could see that looked annoyed." (Uh... between that and looked... I'm guessing that's supposed to be Edward? Just sayin')
Anyway... the timeline has been established for this wedding. Before Alice and Jasper. I think it's absolutely brilliant. Emmett is my favorite, like I've said, so I think having a story centered around him is amazing. Especially since it was you who wrote it. :D
LOVE YOU...
aki
ps... you should totally get on aim or something... we are missing you, you know!
7/14/2008 c1 Icedoll
OMG!
This story is awesome!I love the relationship between Rose and Emmett, It's a little bit difficult for me to understand all the story because I'm just a little french lol, but I loved all that I've understood!
OMG!
This story is awesome!I love the relationship between Rose and Emmett, It's a little bit difficult for me to understand all the story because I'm just a little french lol, but I loved all that I've understood!
7/14/2008 c3 11Artie's Girl
I thought that that was an amazing chapter, and you see Emmett impatient, and a softer side to Rosalie! Good work! It has taken me a while to finally be able to read it, but I have! So YEAH!
11Artie's GirlI thought that that was an amazing chapter, and you see Emmett impatient, and a softer side to Rosalie! Good work! It has taken me a while to finally be able to read it, but I have! So YEAH!
7/12/2008 c3 1Atomicjinx-x
Aw that was such a beautiful wedding. I love reading about Rosalie and Emmetts wedding and I think heaing it all from Em's point of view made it even more beautiful. :D
1Atomicjinx-xAw that was such a beautiful wedding. I love reading about Rosalie and Emmetts wedding and I think heaing it all from Em's point of view made it even more beautiful. :D