for Caught in the act12/27/2008 c1 
11demented bunny
i liked this story but i would like to point out that though condoms are fine in reality they are just so bad in a story there just not appealing in any way put bella on birth control it'll be better that way x
11demented bunnyi liked this story but i would like to point out that though condoms are fine in reality they are just so bad in a story there just not appealing in any way put bella on birth control it'll be better that way x
12/25/2008 c1 stupidlamb9
THAT IS SO WEIRD!he has a list competed to memory of every place they did it!and a list or random people who caught them?THEY HAD SEX IN HIS MOMS BED!ew!thats so grows!i love the story-its just a little strange!
THAT IS SO WEIRD!he has a list competed to memory of every place they did it!and a list or random people who caught them?THEY HAD SEX IN HIS MOMS BED!ew!thats so grows!i love the story-its just a little strange!
9/7/2008 c1 2crimsonshadow14
I spun her around and gripped her nice ass. I traced patterns along her spine . I slid one hand down from her breast. I slid one finger into her wet folds . I massaged her nub with my thumb. I inserted three more fingers inside her. I started to pump fast as she moaned out my name. I felt her tightening around my fingers.
did you ever notice that you say I a lot? made it kind of hard to get really into the story. other than that, it was pretty good.
2crimsonshadow14I spun her around and gripped her nice ass. I traced patterns along her spine . I slid one hand down from her breast. I slid one finger into her wet folds . I massaged her nub with my thumb. I inserted three more fingers inside her. I started to pump fast as she moaned out my name. I felt her tightening around my fingers.
did you ever notice that you say I a lot? made it kind of hard to get really into the story. other than that, it was pretty good.
8/29/2008 c1 my bleeding tears of agony
hahaha that was good fluffy with lemon juice sprinkled all over
hahaha that was good fluffy with lemon juice sprinkled all over
7/25/2008 c1 HATES.to.write
That was one hell of a list.
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Okay, his parents bed?
ew!
That was one hell of a list.
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Okay, his parents bed?
ew!
7/13/2008 c1 3mz.edwardcullen95
lol. you should make a bunch of one-shots for those other places u mentioned. loved it!
3mz.edwardcullen95lol. you should make a bunch of one-shots for those other places u mentioned. loved it!
7/10/2008 c1 Shante17
Lol..that was funny...I wasn't expecting the to get caught...and damn...what a heavty list Edward had there...damn..they are some exhibitionists!
Lol..that was funny...I wasn't expecting the to get caught...and damn...what a heavty list Edward had there...damn..they are some exhibitionists!
7/8/2008 c1 2CowgirlKelly
that was really good! I love your stories i am going to go read some more of them you are a great writer!
2CowgirlKellythat was really good! I love your stories i am going to go read some more of them you are a great writer!