for Meadows of Heaven12/26/2012 c1 Samiam
Wow, I always wondered what Merniva was hidding. Very good story
Wow, I always wondered what Merniva was hidding. Very good story
12/4/2012 c1 jessi
Interesting story!
Interesting story!
8/1/2012 c1 
9Rowena BaronErikandSnapelover
This is so sweet. I love the ending and how you made the character of Susan-Minerva. This is really good and I love it.
9Rowena BaronErikandSnapeloverThis is so sweet. I love the ending and how you made the character of Susan-Minerva. This is really good and I love it.
6/23/2012 c1 4Gyreflight
It’s really satisfying when serendipity works on your behalf – I was just thinking about this fic the other day (trying to remember what it was called and who wrote it), and then I just happened to be sculling around the neighbourhood, not looking for it at all – and there it was!
I really like this. It’s memorable (obviously), and you manage to make the person-for-person sleight of hand both effective and believable, something at which fewer writers succeed than try. Using the centaurs to tie the worlds together was a very nice touch, not least because it highlights one of the contrasts between the universes – one, where the non-human peoples are present but sidelined, and one where they are the heart of the world.
I did feel sad for Dumbledore at the end, but it really was the only way things could really go…at least he got to see her happy and whole and free.
Thanks for the read (and sorry I didn’t review the first time round).
4GyreflightIt’s really satisfying when serendipity works on your behalf – I was just thinking about this fic the other day (trying to remember what it was called and who wrote it), and then I just happened to be sculling around the neighbourhood, not looking for it at all – and there it was!
I really like this. It’s memorable (obviously), and you manage to make the person-for-person sleight of hand both effective and believable, something at which fewer writers succeed than try. Using the centaurs to tie the worlds together was a very nice touch, not least because it highlights one of the contrasts between the universes – one, where the non-human peoples are present but sidelined, and one where they are the heart of the world.
I did feel sad for Dumbledore at the end, but it really was the only way things could really go…at least he got to see her happy and whole and free.
Thanks for the read (and sorry I didn’t review the first time round).
3/6/2012 c1 WolfDarkfur
Absolutely beautiful, i was almost crying. I love the idea, so clever and original. I love the character of Susan, and wish she hadn't stopped believing in Narnia, lovely story. Well done.
Absolutely beautiful, i was almost crying. I love the idea, so clever and original. I love the character of Susan, and wish she hadn't stopped believing in Narnia, lovely story. Well done.
12/1/2011 c1 Espied7
Fantastic. I don't think I've ever come across such a poignant portrayal of Susan, and your mixing of the worlds was amazing. Love it!
Fantastic. I don't think I've ever come across such a poignant portrayal of Susan, and your mixing of the worlds was amazing. Love it!
11/7/2011 c1 MeinGimli
nice one. it has only 1 mistake
its way too short^^
thx for this wonderful story
nice one. it has only 1 mistake
its way too short^^
thx for this wonderful story
8/20/2011 c1 Krysler
This nearly made me cry, it was so sad and beautiful. Imagining Prof. McGonagall makes me look at her character a little differently. I'm glad you wrote that Susan managed to find her way back to her siblings and to Aslan. :)
This nearly made me cry, it was so sad and beautiful. Imagining Prof. McGonagall makes me look at her character a little differently. I'm glad you wrote that Susan managed to find her way back to her siblings and to Aslan. :)