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10/1/2008 c1 5sublimerockerchick
I really liked this. I thought you did an amazing job with the story telling and i also enjoyed the raw emotion. I really can't wait to check out the rest of your stuff!
8/28/2008 c1 44alisonburnis
This is wonderfully sad, Reggie - it's really lovely. I love the language and imagery and basically everything about it. Especially the description of the lipstick. Amazing.
8/1/2008 c1 17udon'tknowmebutiknowme
excellent.
7/10/2008 c1 11nivea342
i love it. i love love love lit fic like this, it's the best kind. mostly i just love your work :) :) :)
7/9/2008 c1 1Curley-Q
good job
7/9/2008 c1 3ShaolinQueen
Very intense and well written! Great, as usual!
7/8/2008 c1 21The Child of Time
Wow-Just...wow...Sorry, you had me speachless for a minute there! This was absolutely amazing! Beautifully written! Honestly, I'd love to type your praises into a beautiful, lengthy review, but my eyes are refusing to stay open at the moment. So, I'll have to finish my flattery later. And now I'm babbling. Great. Is this review annoying you yet? Well, anyway, point is: Wonderful story! I'll have to sing my Ode to Reggie as soon as I can think clearly again. I'm rambling now so I'm just gonna shut up, OK? Good. Um...bye now!
7/8/2008 c1 18Meredith-Grey
This was excellent. Your style with this piece reminded me of private investigators and comic books and kaki trenchcoats and, you know, stuff like Sin City. I liked how it was written in short snippet pieces, it gave the impression that the reader was peaking into their lives. The time shift confused me initially but that most likely because I'm reading this now at one in the morning. Overall I really enjoyed reading this. Well done :D
7/8/2008 c1 34gilmorefanforever
The fact that you were worried about this astounds me, because it's my personal opinion that it's one of the best things you've ever posted. I don't think I have words to describe how much I liked it.
7/8/2008 c1 68DiehardJavaJunkie14
You have no reason to be apprehensive about this one, it's really brilliant. It's unlike anything I've ever read and that's a good thing. I like that you started out at the bridge and then traveled through the Truncheon scene. They're both two important moments in Rory and Jess's relationship and I think you captured them well as you borrowed Jess's thoughts in those scenes. I also liked the way you gave us a glimpse of what happened after. It was clear that Jess liked Rory "without the lipstick"... good work with the lipstick as a tool to show how Jess was feeling.

Loved it as usual. Great job.

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