for Fairytale Island and the Frog King4/20 c1 
10crestoflight3
That was amazingly stylistic...the perfect voice, with just enough authorial intrusion, to sound like the original author! Great job!
10crestoflight3That was amazingly stylistic...the perfect voice, with just enough authorial intrusion, to sound like the original author! Great job!
8/26/2012 c1 1Angel Of Versailles
Aslan's mane!
That was so cute and hillarious!
I heart this one :)
Adorable LUCIAN oneshot
1Angel Of VersaillesAslan's mane!
That was so cute and hillarious!
I heart this one :)
Adorable LUCIAN oneshot
8/23/2012 c1 tragedyromancex7
laughing my wits out XD
laughing my wits out XD
12/13/2011 c1 2ButtButtDoodle
I simply LOVED the idea for this story! Oh, too bad that it was developed in such briefness! It seemed more like I was reading a summary of a story rather than a full-fledged one. Perhaps wordy explanations of how characters are feeling, thinking or acting is not your cup-of-tea, and that I will respect. Needless to say, the idea of a Frog!Caspian is too adorable. Great story!
2ButtButtDoodleI simply LOVED the idea for this story! Oh, too bad that it was developed in such briefness! It seemed more like I was reading a summary of a story rather than a full-fledged one. Perhaps wordy explanations of how characters are feeling, thinking or acting is not your cup-of-tea, and that I will respect. Needless to say, the idea of a Frog!Caspian is too adorable. Great story!
8/23/2010 c1 Gloria Florida
AWWWW I love it. It really felt like a missing chapter of VDT. I've always loved frogs from the fairytales of frogs turning into princes & also due to F.R.O.G. (fully rely on god), but now I love Caspian the adorabliy sad frog.
AWWWW I love it. It really felt like a missing chapter of VDT. I've always loved frogs from the fairytales of frogs turning into princes & also due to F.R.O.G. (fully rely on god), but now I love Caspian the adorabliy sad frog.
1/7/2009 c1 GoldenAshes
This really was terrific! It was pretty much CS Lewis style and could've almost been squeezed into the book as a missing chapter!
I really did enjoy this, particularly Caspian as a frog. Glee!
This really was terrific! It was pretty much CS Lewis style and could've almost been squeezed into the book as a missing chapter!
I really did enjoy this, particularly Caspian as a frog. Glee!
12/2/2008 c1 7melwa elena
That was absolutely wonderful! You really made me laugh and it is one of the cutest stories I have read so far. Lucy coming up with the name of Fairytale Island and her being a little ashamed of kissing Caspian. Really well done. I liked the way you stayed very close to the way the books are written. As if it is one of the deleted scene, so to speak.
Kind regards, Melwa Elena
7melwa elenaThat was absolutely wonderful! You really made me laugh and it is one of the cutest stories I have read so far. Lucy coming up with the name of Fairytale Island and her being a little ashamed of kissing Caspian. Really well done. I liked the way you stayed very close to the way the books are written. As if it is one of the deleted scene, so to speak.
Kind regards, Melwa Elena
7/15/2008 c1 7lamp before the wind
“Ribbit,” Caspian replied a little crossly, for what he now wanted most was a wet little pond and a fly or two.
Very CS Lewis, in my opinion :D I loved reading your story! And I chuckled like mad over the bit about Ed's hanky.
7lamp before the wind“Ribbit,” Caspian replied a little crossly, for what he now wanted most was a wet little pond and a fly or two.
Very CS Lewis, in my opinion :D I loved reading your story! And I chuckled like mad over the bit about Ed's hanky.
7/14/2008 c1 38lucymonster
That was just delightful! I was giggling the whole way through...beautiful style of writing, it could have simply slotted into the book. I loved it so much...thank you for sharing! It really brightened my day.
38lucymonsterThat was just delightful! I was giggling the whole way through...beautiful style of writing, it could have simply slotted into the book. I loved it so much...thank you for sharing! It really brightened my day.
7/14/2008 c1 1DarkestBefourDawn
That had to be the cutest thing I have ever read. No lie. And you do a wonderful job at keeping with Lewis's style.
Much Love, Jenn
1DarkestBefourDawnThat had to be the cutest thing I have ever read. No lie. And you do a wonderful job at keeping with Lewis's style.
Much Love, Jenn