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6/30/2012 c1 3RaewynThorne
Love this glimpse at Casavir; I think he's a complex and wonderful character, and you've captured him beautifully.
12/31/2008 c1 14Nikoru Sanzo
Oh! Oh! I've read and reviewed this one back at the nwn vault. =D *gleeful bouncing*

This is really beautiful and touching. I love the way how you expounded on Casavir's conflicts- rather than making him seem weak or inconsistent, his convictions stood out even more.
7/27/2008 c1 1imenyaciandar
I agree with your interpretation of Casavir's internal struggle. The way you have portrayed his endearing vulnerability, without making him appear weak, is especially fitting.
7/25/2008 c1 33slef
M, I do like it! For all the obvious reasons ;) I guess my only quibble is that you used dialogue straight from the game ... seems like you passed on an opportunity to have our favourite paladin have a voice of his own. But still, I liked it :)
7/22/2008 c1 24anesor
Very nice use of the conflicts between lawful duty and good. I kind of wish you had expanded on what act(s) forced him into that corner that leaving was better. Ends justifying the means is a neutral attitude, good leaning at best. But not good.

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