for All for Coffee11/3/2008 c2 
2Manicured Vultures
I liked it a lot. Just a suggestion, maybe try using a thesaurus, so you aren't constantly using the same words, over and over. Anyway, try to update it again soon.
:)
- DP
2Manicured VulturesI liked it a lot. Just a suggestion, maybe try using a thesaurus, so you aren't constantly using the same words, over and over. Anyway, try to update it again soon.
:)
- DP
8/15/2008 c1 126SVUCSIWTRDOOLluver
Awesome story, this totally should have happened! You should send this in and tell them to rewrite the storyline. Love, love, love this story!
126SVUCSIWTRDOOLluverAwesome story, this totally should have happened! You should send this in and tell them to rewrite the storyline. Love, love, love this story!
8/7/2008 c1 65MetalChickCrisis2040
Oh, that was sweet :) Say...Liv and El always go out for coffee...hm kinda makes you wonder just what they do when they are alone :)
65MetalChickCrisis2040Oh, that was sweet :) Say...Liv and El always go out for coffee...hm kinda makes you wonder just what they do when they are alone :)